Chasing the Wind

This book incorporates the author's true feelings, rich imagination, beautiful writing, and different characters. It contains beautiful emotions of truth, goodness, and beauty. There are no shortcuts, only sincerity. Hard work will be rewarded. Let's look forward to it together!

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Advantages: 1. The description of the environment and the details of the characters are very vivid, especially the clothing of the ancient characters is very delicate. 2. The plot setting is also very good, the description at the beginning is very attractive, and the language description of the war section makes the viewers excited, so much that they have the urge to read on. 3. The images of the characters also have their own characteristics and characteristics, and the language is also humorous. Disadvantages (in my humble opinion): 1. There are too many words in a paragraph, which makes it dazzling. It is recommended that the number of words in each paragraph be slightly evened out. The maximum number of words should be within six or seven lines per line, so that it does not look visually fatigued. 2. The description of some plots needs to be clearer, otherwise it will be a little unclear. 3. Add more descriptions of characters and environments, which will make it more interesting.