One Calamity and One Thought

1. The introductory description is quite novel. 2. I didn't expect that the male and female protagonists would meet in the second chapter, haha. I like the name Jiang Nian (I don't know why, I just like it inexplicably 😳) I really, really like it (//∇//) 3. The writing is smooth and the introduction is okay, but the encounter between Xiao Nian and Shen Shu always feels a bit confusing. (I hope this suspense can surprise me). 4. Well, Yunze is a Taoist priest, and I am curious about his abilities (●°u°●)​". 5. The transition from the second chapter is very peaceful and natural. The word "tranquil and far-reaching" is given to me. To encourage each other, I like the name Jiang Nian (I secretly collected it (●°u°●)​") It seems that she will be the protagonist of my other books in the future! Hehe, don't mind if you don't mind! ☹️

The subject matter is good and the logic is there, much better than a novice novel, but the dialogue between the characters is very awkward and unnatural. A few simple and clear sentences must be made plausible.

Not bad. The opening chapter is well designed and attractive. I have to admire the author's writing style. The logic is not bad. It is a good book! Received and voted!

The plot is vivid, thank you for the wonderful author

Invite the boss to tea first The writing is good and well written. The flaw is that the contradiction in the opening chapter is not sharp enough (perhaps because I watch less female videos, so my evaluation is not accurate.) It has been received, and I hope to leave a reply.

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It doesn't work, it doesn't work. The more I look at it, the better it looks.

You must be a gentle girl😊

The writing is very good! Come on! Work together

Love your work! If you keep at it, it will definitely become popular! The writing is so good! Come on, cast a vote to express encouragement🌹🌹

The beginning of the chapter is really great, with a strong sense of immersion. The description of the sacred tree is very interesting, and the picture is very strong, which makes people want to read. The story is also very novel, which is my favorite style. Come on~

This article must be read carefully to identify the author. Please do your best to write down the words and look forward to updates!

Lili, what should I write when applying for Qingyun List?

It's been launched without a word (｡>∀<｡)

I'm coming, I'm coming, click here, friends, if you want to mix orange light, please come to me 😏

Feel sorry. . I finished investing in Qidian coins today.

Didi didi, the first comment ~ Hee hee, good night

I'm from the bar, I hope I can persevere, come on, encourage each other

If you don't update, I will surpass you. Word count.

Not finished yet? 🤫🤫🤫