Beginning of the Way of the Heavens

The writing is really good. With such a great physique, there is no one in charge in the clan. An ancestor or the like comes out to protect or something like that. For such an important matter as his son's awakening of his physique, his parents happen to be absent. Damn, the protagonist of the whole clan has no parents, so only a "Seventh Master" can do it?

How can I put it, since so many people criticize the beginning of the novel, then there must be something wrong in some way, and the author has indeed written a very old and very offensive routine. He is very dissatisfied at the beginning, and no one will read it no matter how good he writes later. I think it does need to be changed, and Zhu Tianwen uses it This kind of routine is indeed very inappropriate. I haven't read this novel personally, but from reading the comments, I roughly understand that the author uses a very offensive routine at the beginning, which makes me have no idea of ​​reading it. I believe there are many people like me. This is equivalent to the author directly excluding us readers from the beginning. I still hope the author can change it, otherwise he will probably dissuade a lot of people.

I hope Luo Tian won't be whitewashed like Shi Yi in Perfect World. Perfect World is really good-looking. What I hate most is that Shi Yi was whitewashed in the end. The Luo Tian family must be killed before the protagonist lets them go and forgives them.

From this book, I saw the routine at the beginning of Fighting to Break the Sphere, Projection of the Heavens, and Perfect World. It would be fine to use one routine for the third stage of Dou Zhili and the bone-digging routine. Are they used together to disgust people?

The inheritance law in the first chapter at the beginning really made me drunk. The heir is under the nose of the nobles who are waiting to inherit the inheritance. In modern society, there are so many relatives seizing the inheritance. In this fantasy world, you still find a stranger to manage the inheritance, for fear that the heir will not die quickly enough.

You'd better set your combat power at a higher level such as Eternal Life and Supreme Being. Not to mention the ceiling, you should at least be top-notch! Otherwise, you may get sprayed.

It was quite speechless at the beginning. The lord of a city died in battle, and his only son was still going to be killed! At once

Why are the routines still so old, and there must be a wilderness/forbidden area/mountain nearby, and there must be someone in the restricted area who is going to have trouble. Can you change the routine? These have no focus. It is really boring to write a bad setting and routine plot that was written 6.7 Years ago.

After reading Chapter 55, is it possible that I will just go through the similar experience of "Desolation" again in the future?

Worldview of the Holy King

I quit at the beginning, what an old routine.

I think the relationship between Su Qingyao and the protagonist is alienating. I can understand that hard work is precious and it is natural to demand repayment, but according to her father's idea, the protagonist must be with her? Or is the protagonist ungrateful? I have no problem with you writing about a heroine, but the beginning of this kind of relationship that was forcibly combined by external forces is too unpleasant. You could even write about their childhood sweethearts falling in love over time.

Chapter Six: The protagonist, the Virgin, has a heart attack and goes to save a completely unknown woman.

The protagonist's Taoist name is Xuanyuan Taoist. How do you say it? Historically, the Li and Tang dynasties recognized Lao Tzu as their ancestor, and his honorific title was Taishang Xuanyuan Emperor. His name is related to luck. Taishang Taoist does not pursue the case, but if he does, hehe

The plot is very cliché

Suddenly I remembered that there is a Zhetian fanfic in which the main character is called Dao Shi the Great. Many people were shocked ~ The Great Emperor😃

To put it bluntly, you are just looking for trouble for yourself by writing about a family like Zhu Tianwen. This kind of protagonist, an orphan, is the best.