
Start as a Pirate and Travel Through the World
从海贼开始打穿世界
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- Completed
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- 679k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
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- Qidian
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None of the Celestial Dragons dared to kill, it was a waste of invincible abilities.
I don't feel a sense of empathy at all when I'm 3 meters tall. 190 Or so is still 3 meters tall. Sorry. .
In the first chapter, he was persuaded to quit and got the system. In an instant, he looked like a scolding gangster with the worst face. This character is not likeable.
No one in the world has as much water as you. Talking about invincible strength, I kept grinding for 30 chapters, but I didn't feel the slightest bit of pleasure at all.
The main reason is that the protagonist's combat power does not match the description of the sun's blessing. The so-called destruction of the world means that you can only fight one-on-one with others. In my understanding, destroying the world means blowing up an entire earth with one punch! Therefore, everyone who falls under the protagonist's fist will end up in ashes. This is my understanding of destruction of heaven and earth! The so-called destruction of the sky means to shoot upward and penetrate the atmosphere! To destroy the earth is to strike downward and break the earth's plates into pieces! To destroy the world is to shatter the atmosphere and the ground!
Author, please clarify the positioning of the protagonist first. My blood was boiling and my fists were turning white when I saw it, and I was tired. Your situation is really rare.
Chapter twenty-five and he hasn't escaped yet, he keeps fighting and no one dies, and the Celestial Dragon's dog has backbone and affection, making the protagonist look like the villain?
Start now, this book will make you useless
Too watery, the character image has not been established yet
It looked boring. It was obviously a cool novel, but it was awkward to force Ace to drag out the plot and talk about brotherhood.
[After reading this book, you can confirm it for yourself if there is a real book review. The biggest problem with this book is not the water, but the author's wrong positioning. It is clear that the protagonist is the victim, but he writes that the protagonist is the perpetrator. I am convinced┗┃ ■ ┃┛. The protagonist and those CP tools are inextricably fighting each other, and the author also thoughtfully adds emotional scenes between their teams. The protagonist defeats them one by one, and the remaining people are extremely sad and ask the protagonist with disbelief on their faces: what happened to his companions. Around Chapter 23~26.
It's so boring to write. According to the arrogant character, there will be an unmerciful sun. Take a move first, be able to stand and talk. This is grinding. After writing more than twenty chapters, I can get 30% of the practical content.
The protagonist has no sense of existence, and there are too many supporting roles.
"When I saw General He deducing that the protagonist's power would decline at some point, I felt a little speechless. Isn't this just like some domestic TV series? We outsiders know that the protagonist is the archer, or the leader, but there is no directional evidence or information in the play. At this time, the protagonist's enemy, or a so-called woman who fell in love with and killed the protagonist, relied on this so-called sixth sense, and then determined that the protagonist was the leader or murderer, and then used this as a basis to find evidence. I can say this, if I identify a person as a murderer, then From some of his so-called daily behaviors, I can derive the prelude or the weight of evidence of a murderer. What reasons does he have? Is there any place that allows him to infer that the protagonist's power will decline and become stronger and stronger in battle? This situation is not without outsiders like us knowing that his inference is correct, because the protagonist does become stronger and weaker with time. According to it, is there such a manifestation? What details did she come up with? What if she was wrong? Didn't he push the navy to its doom? If the protagonist just gets stronger and stronger in battles with others as time goes by, then it's not like there aren't such people in the world.
Before the battle, Lai Lai was cornered, and after the battle, he was embarrassed, and he still said that the protagonist was not the villain?
I was really looking forward to it, but then I saw that cp0 was playing a Qiong Yao drama. Which cp0 is so emotionally rich
Chapter 23: Persuading to quit. There is no protagonist, only supporting characters. I don't know what I am writing. There is more water than the main text. You can skip it if you don't know how to write a fight scene. You can also write a good literary drama. The key is that if you can't write anything, it will be incomprehensible.
The author gave the protagonist too much power, and he would be invincible at noon, so he found a few relatives of the protagonist's original body, so that the protagonist would have concerns, be threatened by the navy, and restrain the protagonist, lest the protagonist break through Maqiaolia in a few dozen chapters. Therefore, it is just a daily story, not a cool article. No matter how awesome the protagonist is, the world government can manipulate it however it wants. It should be said or not, it is far from the cool text of Little Japan. Yujiro Fanma can do whoever he wants, and the President of the United States can only be regarded as a piece of shit.
After searching and looking at it, I don't believe that there are no resident masters of the Draco. In the original book, just the CP9, CPO, Wulaoxing, Yimu and slave masters of various races who want to get rid of their slave status, as well as the various strange devil fruits and other high-tech products that the Dracos plundered from all over the world, are enough for the protagonist to drink a bottle. The result is as ordinary as the protagonist traveling to another world and becoming a slave of a noble.
There was a fight on the holy land, and the fight was so fierce. It was okay that the hidden power of the World Government did not come out, the Five Old Stars did not take action, and Im did not show up. . . Each of the five old stars has at least a general-level combat power. . . Summary: opening crit
After reading Chapter 14, I saw that the protagonist collected a bunch of rubbish and used it as a burden and then abandoned it. A group of sidekicks wanted to deal with the world government and collected a bunch of rubbish to restrain themselves, and then used it as a weak point for the enemy to attack?
Poor grades are not unreasonable
Your arrogant ability will make you a bitch. If you are awesome, you will destroy Mary Joya in one day, let alone the Five Old Stars and the like. First come some unmerciful suns. Only those who can stand can speak. You are playing the role of a supporting actor, and everything you say is flesh and blood. I see that none of the protagonists or supporting characters in your writing can make people get involved. Is this called flesh and blood?
The gift of the sun is originally invincible during the day. I don't believe that the world view of the Seven Deadly Sins is lower than that of the Pirate World. Escanor, you can torture two Ten Rings with one hand just after the sun rises. Isn't it necessarily a world full of gods and demons, and the Ten Rings are all high-level combatants, but they are not as good as the one-piece generals of the Pirate World? The gift of the invincible sun has been left here as a sidekick for a long time, but it can penetrate the world, and the invincible ability has been written off, which is outrageous.
The shortcoming of this book is that there are too many supporting characters. Why bother squeezing out toothpaste in order to reduce the number of words? The scene of a fight suddenly switches to chatting. It's too exaggerated.
I don't even know what I'm writing about. The theme of pirates and the Internet jokes really don't feel engaging at all -_-||
The ability to set up the game at the beginning is quite interesting, but what follows is not interesting in daily life.
If the harem, procrastination, spoilers of the main character were eliminated, and the position was clearly on the side of the pirates, it would be okay. The author understands that basically the slaves of the Celestial Dragons were given to the Celestial Dragons by more powerful pirates or mafia. This book always gives people the impression that it is impossible to maintain order without the navy. On the other hand, the Navy was described as too much of a lackey.
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A simple summary is: the Cloud Pirate wearing pirate skin + the powerful but completely weakened Gold Finger + the protagonist whose IQ is not online = what? Figure it out for yourselves.