I Want to Be Famous Forever

The beginning is spirited, the ending is nerves. It feels like it collapsed after more than a hundred chapters The character description is very good, but the delicate writing style is biased towards daily life and women, and it cannot write the style of male heroes. It is often sensational, but I didn't feel at all. Summary: The subject matter is very good, and it is similar to Your Majesty, Spectacle Misleading the Country, but both novels cannot grasp the balance of excitement and rhythm at the end, and they are helpless.

To be honest, I am a little disappointed, but my tolerance and patience for my sister are infinite, come on! ! !

I saw the latest chapter, and I have an idea that keeps turning Three timelines Ordinary timeline The King of Huashei (This is the original uninterrupted timeline) Litian changed his fate to King Huashei (The protagonist's plug-in came, the girl without archaeology, just checked the history and changed her fate. In the end, the protagonist succeeded in changing too much, the director The imbalance of world time or something, or the civilization fault caused by the protagonist, is that something hinders the protagonist, and the disease in the descendants is associated with it, or the protagonist messes up the history and cannot bring it back, leading to unknown dangers) The future and present timeline are changed at the same time (This is the follow-up to the development of the second timeline , the protagonist has changed too much, encountered problems, the disease of future generations has been interrupted, or history cannot be brought back, the protagonist or something else arranged this timeline to cover the second timeline) (When the protagonist gets the plug-in at the beginning, it is a new timeline, A clearly arranged timeline, Gradually covering the timeline of Litian's change of destiny Or in other words, making the timeline of Litian's change of destiny reasonable, so as not to affect future generations) The above are personal thoughts, which may not be expressed clearly. To be honest, I am a bit confused myself. This idea came out suddenly. After this idea came out, I have been excited? I'm still excited, so I posted it So thank you for watching

Cut as soon as it's put on the shelf? No, no, no

The idea is good. It changes the future through the past, and the future changes the past. It's very good. The writing style is really good. It's a fairy grass. You can give it a try. I voted for recommendation. The holes in the mural will be filled slowly. Don't let it collapse.

， Accumulate one by one and produce masterpieces, going against the trend of the fast food era

The idea of ​​this book is really good, but I am still a little worried. It stands to reason that time is linear and the past can affect the future. For example, in the background of Red Alert, the world line enters the plot of the Red Alert series after the time machine wipes out Hitler. As for this book, the influence is two-way. The future changes the past, and the past changes the future. Through unified comparison, many bridges can be created, which is very interesting. The worry is that the writing will collapse. The Time series itself is quite brain-burning, with some masterpieces and some rubbish. Refer to Stone Gate. The more complex the plot, the more sophisticated the design is. My suggestion is that it is better to write simply, focus on a certain point, and don't diverge and deduce too much (which cannot be deduced). If you are not careful, the logic will collapse. Also, why make suggestions. Because yesterday's update introduced new variables, a new time point was created between the two points of "past" and "future" that can produce changes on both sides (speaking in human terms: in addition to the protagonist's perspective and the future perspective, Chen Xi's random placement of things in the time between the two can have an uncontrollable impact on both parties). The story this plot can trigger is countless times more interesting, but at the same time the model is also countless times more complex. I hope the author will think carefully and avoid playing like this if he is not sure.

Onee-sama's books always have this kind of interaction between fantasy and reality. The feeling of chasing books is really addictive.

The author is too diligent. Isn't one chapter in seven days too much?

This author must be too diligent, publishing more than ten or twenty books a year.

This book cannot be submitted. Bosses, please think twice.

😅It's already finished before one hundred chapters? Fortunately, I didn't pursue it. I really hit the mark. How dare you say that you can write it to the later stage?

I knew it! I knew it! This guy did it again!

The author is very talented, but it's a pity that he is not good enough. I have read several of his books. The subject matter, concept, and writing style are all very good! It's a pity that it's either a eunuch or a bad one. Updates are still lagging. I don't even bother to read his books now. They typically give people hope and then despair. I have completely lost my feelings towards him. Just show it, it should be done!

I regret investing. How come you don't ask for leave or make announcements when it comes to cutting off updates these days? Just update if you want. If you want to mess with it, just mess with it, right? It's such a torment for readers' trust.

Just say it directly after cutting it, and don't worry about entering the palace to serve the emperor. Even the donkeys in the production team would not dare to rest like this when updating.

Come and place your bets quickly, buy and leave, guess whether it's a eunuch or a bad guy

This book is well written, both in terms of rhythm and language control. The arrangement of the interesting plot can be regarded as a masterpiece by a master. But there is one criticism. Most of the supporting characters in the book are women. Even if the general is a woman, the archaeologists of later generations are also women. Oh, that painting saint is also a woman. To borrow a sentence from the Internet, has the author never seen a girl in real life? It's not that girls can't appear, they just should appear in the right place. Alas, I hope the author can work hard! This book is generally well written and makes people want to read it. But every time I read about girls, I feel a sense of conflict and tearing.

If you want to ask for leave, then ask for leave. If you want to be a eunuch, then be a eunuch. Why are you updating chapters every five or six days?

To be honest, I think this book praises Guo Jia and Guo Fengxiao a bit too highly, even though it is only based on him. But it's a bit awkward to watch. He was just a military advisor, but he was praised as the number one military advisor by Douyin, and now novels have begun to praise him again. There is also a serious effeminacy. Of course, it's a light novel after all, so that's understandable, but the subject matter of this novel is very good, and the content is really holding it back. Personally, I don't think it's going to be too popular. The current subject matter of your novel is a separate book. To be honest, with your current setting and subject matter. To reduce the effeminacy and personal preferences, I will write it based on the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, and then I can add the stories about the Five Kingdoms and Chaos in China. I think it will definitely become a high-quality book.

It's really like being stuck and investing continuously for seven days.

Is this starting to go bad? What about the bottom line update stuck for seven days? Only one chapter?

Why do I have the impression of a eunuch?

I feel like this subject matter is so difficult to write about. Found many logic bugs

There are countless books by this guy. The opening is attractive, but after the opening, it is not powerful enough. Several books are like that. The same is true for novices. The movie scripts that have just started are embedded in reality, Mr. And Mrs. Smith look good, but in the middle, they start to write about e-sports, ah, this? !

I just know the new mother you an old eunuch

In fact, I felt that this book would not be finished from the first few chapters. The first few chapters used the relationship conflicts between the characters and the reversal of modern and ancient images to make readers cry out. While it was enjoyable and magical, it also planted a seed that can be said to be fatal. As the protagonists become more and more The buried things have changed the proper history, and the two worlds have been affected beyond recognition. The famous scenes of the Three Kingdoms between the various forces and the existing ancient processes have all collapsed. It is difficult to achieve logical self-consistency, and it is impossible to give readers a surprising and enjoyable feeling. And I think my sister started this book too hastily, and when I was writing it later, I started to get tired of writing, as if it was an assignment that had to be handed in every week. When the time comes, squeeze out a little bit. They are not as good as the novice author who is terrible at writing but is slowly improving while writing the story he wants to write wholeheartedly. My sister feels like an above-average student in the class. Not as strong as Xueba. No worse than a scumbag. But when I can't get a question right. Its performance is far inferior to the first two. Top academics will research and check information on their own. Bad students will just copy the answers. My sister, on the other hand, avoided writing and just left it blank. Anyway, I hope I can write my next book with a correct attitude.

After reading my sister's post-operative remarks, I feel that she is still very sincere. Although it may not be possible to change things immediately due to the limitations of reality, it is always good to have a direction and work hard to become better. At this time, we had to whip the body of the legendary chief eunuch and king of eunuchs, "Shensha Liuliu". In more than ten years, there have been more than ten or twenty vests and dozens of novels. It seems that only one or two books have been completed. And the attitude has always been "It's all your fault for being a eunuch", which is extremely bad. So, if you are resentful of your sister's hasty completion, why don't you get to know the eunuch? It might give you some relief. Well, at least get a glimpse of human diversity. Finally, I wish my sister a good grasp of the rhythm in her new novel, and that she can smoothly write a novel that satisfies herself and makes readers happy, just like "Cultural Invasion from Another World". Come on! (*ﾟ∀ﾟ*)

After writing nine books, I seem to have completed two or three. This completion rate is a bit exaggerated.

No, I'm planning to save a million words before reading. I'll write something good in my next book...