Rebirth of the Cyber ​​Sword Immortal

Jiangjiang left little footprints here, and moved a small bench to sit on it. I brought my own small cakes, melon seeds, and spicy strips to read the big book~ By the way, I want to ask for a mutual visit, ^_^

It's rare to find another book called Cyber ​​Seedlings. I haven't read it yet. Come on, I'll read it when I have time.

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I read it and read it, but I still want to express my opinion. If you don't like it, you can delete it. First of all, this book draws on the beginning of Cyber ​​Sword Immortal Tie Yu, but it is different from Cyber ​​Sword Immortal Tie Yu. Secondly, the settings of the new and old techniques are just copying the settings of the other side of the Chenda Starry Sky, and the sense of immersion you wrote is average. Again, the cyberpunk flavor of your book is bland, the technological cultivation flavor is not hard-core, and the plot logic is not self-consistent, like a fantasy novel. Finally, your writing skills still need to be honed. You really need to hone your writing skills. The author should be young. Finally, if you really want to write about cyber cultivation. I suggest that in addition to reading Cyber ​​Sword Fairy Tie Yu, you can also seek inspiration from the following books. These books are all written by newcomers. Although they are limited by the influence of cyberpunk niche literature, their results are average, but they are all good. 1. Dou Taran, 8-star recommendation. 2. Cyber ​​Ascension, 5-star recommendation. 3. The Legend of Cyber ​​Fairy, 4-star recommendation. Currently, these are the only books on cyber cultivation available at Qidian. Good luck, author.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Damn, just relax and read. Write whatever you want. It's a waste of investment. 🤫🤫