I Created a Secret Organization

Here we go again, a small suggestion. An organization should have clear rules and regulations. This is the code that members must abide by and the way forward.

[Shen Nong: There are only four chapters so far, and the golden three chapters are pretty good. The change in the protagonist's mentality is a little abrupt. When the two people come in, the protagonist can remain silent, and then take them to sit down and then speak slowly. During this period, you can describe the protagonist's mentality change, otherwise someone will say, 'Ah, you, the protagonist, were still stunned when they came here. I immediately pretended to be cool, it's not realistic at all', in general, it's a good idea] The ability to establish a strong character is not bad. The taboo of this genre is to lose the strong character. There must be no behavior that fails to show the strong character. When it comes to the strong character, faith must be mentioned for so long. After all, faith is a very high-quality thing. In this regard, I hope The author can establish a belief that is strong enough and a paragraph that makes people feel goosebumps when reading it (such as "for the future of mankind", "offering his heart" and the like), and then the belief in salvation must be very firm (you can check out the foundation), and if it makes people feel goosebumps, you can go to Station B Look at the video of the Czar. He is a good emperor, and his character must stand up. In particular, it cannot be shown that his subordinates are all giving their lives for the future of mankind, throwing their heads and blood, but the protagonist is dismissive. The change of mentality must be written well ————A humble opinion from my own humble opinion that I will beep if I can't do it.

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I finished reading it in one go, but it was not satisfying. A poor person can only invest 😭😭

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The first five chapters are too white, and the pretense is too stiff.