Shi Erlang of Red Mansion

There are indeed many problems. I won't discuss the character of the protagonist. This is the author's setting. The problem is, you are writing within the framework of Red Mansions, at least you should respect Mr. Cao, right?

Introduction to Erlang Shen of Red Mansions, content of Shi Shilang of Red Mansions

90% Think that there is something wrong with the author's writing, and the author should reflect on himself. Author, please don't argue. I see that you basically have to refute every negative review, and it's useless to refute. The author needs to think about it carefully. When you write a novel, you have to rely on readers to make a living. Most readers think you are not suitable, so is this book still worth reading? Are there any benefits?

The protagonist is an irresponsible person. He actually encourages the person he likes to elope with you. The protagonist doesn't know what he is. If he wants to take the martial arts exam, his family won't let him because he is afraid of breaking the taboo (the protagonist's martial arts skills are not good enough to go to the battlefield and he will fail). Even if you elope, you won't be able to support your family, let alone inventing and doing business to support your family. You won't be able to save your things as soon as they come out. It's hard to say whether people will recognize you as the second son of the Marquis. After all, it's okay if you are just the second son of an elopement. And the protagonist will actually cry on the bed because of lack of love. Oh my god, is the protagonist a man? I've actually learned a lot now. Am I living in a different world? After reading it, I am very ignorant and cannot compare with the author.

The effect of persuading people to quit is first-rate! With the appearance of three eyes, the emperor would actually suspect him? ! You must know that those with three eyes are all loyal and patriotic people! Afang Palace is three hundred miles away, and there is no room for a Shi. The Shi family is so short of money that the second son went out with only a hundred yuan? ! ! ! ! This setting is gone!

When I first read the synopsis, I thought Erlang Shen was reincarnated, with powerful martial arts, galloping on the battlefield in the Red Mansion, and falling in love with Daiyu and the others. As a result, force is not enough, and I am disappointed😔. I have read too many novels with protagonists who are more literary than humans. I also want to read something about force 😥

I didn't read the book, I only read the author's replies and refutations in various comments … Identification completed: self-motivated author

If you don't know how to write, don't write. Erlangshen is like this. I feel so frustrated when I see him.

That's all? It's simply an insult to Erlang Shen.

No, he said he was the reincarnation of Erlang Shen, he said he was taking a martial arts test, and he said he was beating up his classmates, but in the end he was chased by men in black for several streets?

The author is so lacking in love! How does this look like a time travel? I'm really speechless. Please enjoy yourself slowly.

Erlangshen didn't talk about martial arts or anything, but he actually became a civil servant. What a fool.

What the hell are you writing? I've read more than 20 chapters and still can't figure it out. What do you want to express?

When the author saw the word "" in the Shangshu Order, he took it for granted that the person appointed must be an heir of poetry and calligraphy. . . In ancient times, this was almost a joke that would make it into Xiaolin Guangji 😁

The introduction and the main text are completely different styles. It is not an exaggeration to say that they are completely different.

The author is too naive, and many of the settings are ridiculous and literate. The starting point of the previous life was set in an orphanage, and then he said that the protagonist lacked love and was disliked by his reborn mother, and he cried with tears in his eyes. This is really embarrassing!

After reading thirty or forty chapters, I found that pig's feet can't do anything, and I can't do anything. I wanted to marry Jia Yuanchun and Wang Xifeng, but they were rejected. Who would like to read this kind of masochistic article? In addition to having an exciting plot, fan fiction must also have a certain inversion from the original work. You have been telling the story in a straightforward manner and been abused. Which reader would like to read it? I suggest you give the pig's feet a golden finger.

I was twenty years old in my previous life, and I am more than ten years old when I am reborn. I am crying under the quilt. Are you human? In ancient times, people in their thirties could call themselves old men. What kind of protagonist are you, are you mentally retarded?

Fans of Red Mansions immediately removed the books from the shelves, and the fictional books covered in Red Mansions skins were taken off the shelves. I've written so many chapters, but I don't have any Red Mansions girls in my family, and I don't pursue any Red Mansions girls. It's time to give them away. The main character's thinking is immature and childish.

Red Mansions Shit Beetle, I was the craziest from the beginning

Can you read it yourself after the author has finished writing?

You can be a novice when writing a book, but you must at least have some fun. Your book is frustrating, novice, and stupid.

A trash with no responsibility and no self-awareness... Is more disgusting than Jia Baoyu!

This author writes so lamely, and even after being criticized like this, he still persists. He really needs to show his love.

Do you believe me when I say I came here to see the author criticize people?

After reading dozens of chapters, trains and electricity came out! A typical author who enjoys himself without thinking about it! But, isn't this too brainless? ! The development of modern industry is not about patting the butt, it will develop automatically when your imagination is wide open! Giant poison, abandon it!

The names of the two brothers look tiring.

I didn't read the book, but only read the comments. It's interesting to infer that the author might be a happy national treasure in the real world. Hahaha…

Does this author also see elopements this way in reality?

Things are fine up front, that female assassin? My mobile phone for the elderly on the subway