Elf Breeder

Let's chat a few words. First of all, the title of this book is "Elf Breeder" rather than "Elf Breeder House". The author has read the title many times and is really right. But there are always embarrassing people saying, what are you writing about? Is this an elf breeding house? Apart from hatching eggs, how do you feel about a breeding house? Please! The author writes about an elf breeder! (""Home"")! If there is something wrong with your understanding, then I apologize to you and should not argue with you. But if you are a normal person, you should be able to understand that Elf Breeder writes the story of the protagonist, not the story of the breeding house. The author Jun also wrote in the book: A good breeding house will definitely have a strong trainer behind it. The protagonist of this book, Tongji, will not stay in the breeding house for the rest of his life, whether it is to hatch eggs or take care of elves. The author can write about this kind of daily life, but he will not write all the time. Writing in a loop, is it exciting? The author's bacteria will start a series of adventure stories. Such as: Elf Gorgeous Contest, Elf Gym Challenge, Elf Alliance, Mane Group and a series of adventures, including fossil excavation, glacier exploration... And many other such adventures. The main idea is how the protagonist becomes stronger. Only a strong trainer can protect an excellent breeding house. The breeding house will develop and grow, but the protagonist's strength must also become stronger and stronger. For those who want to see the protagonist guarding the breeding house and doing whatever, please cut the book. There was even a certain anti-fan who directly asked: What are you writing about? It is recommended to watch "~~~~~", and you can also copy it. This comment is the main reason why the author posted this post. Please, if you like that book, just read that book. There is no need to suggest other authors to read it or copy it, right? You will only bring bad luck to that book. The author has never read that book and has no plans to read it! Therefore, your purpose of recruiting gangsters has been achieved. If you like another breeding house book, I suggest you read it a few more times, or ask the author to write another one. This has nothing to do with the author. The author wants to write his own book, with his own outline and his own conception of the world. Let the author copy the book? I can only tell you what the ingredients are, and I don't need the author to say more, right? It's just that there is no moral bottom line~~. Then some viewers may ask, aren't breeders just taking care of the elves' daily lives? Yes, didn't the author let Tongsi take care of his elves, including the wild elves in the backyard, on a daily basis? There must be elf cultivation. You think Xiaogang is a breeder, right? In addition to taking care of elves, including stupid people who can't take care of themselves, isn't he also traveling? Elf breeders not only guard the breeding house, but also travel and take risks. Shinji's brother has been guarding the breeding house, but before that, did he also participate in the league competition? Did he almost dominate the battle zone? Dear viewers, please open your mind. Don't rest on your laurels. It's already 2021. Doesn't anyone still think that breeders are just shit-sweepers guarding the breeding houses? Those people can read those old books, but there is no need to read the author's books. You can say that the author's writing style is not good, you can also say that the author's story is not good, and you can also give the author various suggestions (including subsequent plots, elves to conquer later or adventures, etc.), But please do not tell the author: which book you should read or copy. On this point, absolutely not! Sorry, the author's fungus is really broken! Let the author copy the book. There is no need to say more about the characteristics of this kind of reader, right? How much... Finally, I would like to thank the audience who have always supported the author, thank you! Thank you so much! ! Thank you very much! ! ! ……

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Tongji

This book is otherwise good, but the book is too aggressive

Electric Shock Monster

It seems that the higher the qualifications, the stronger the combat power of the same class is definitely a drawback. Shouldn't the combat power here be related to level, combination of moves, and tactics? Because if the setting of the novel is the individual value and racial value of the game data, then it is understandable But in the context of the novel, the setting is still the "qualification" of fantasy. How should I put it, it is not easy to accept Qualification does not equal strength, it is just an upper limit.

Lazy cloth

I have temporarily seen the degradation of Ibrahimovic, and here are the problems I feel so far: 1. The plot of the first 20 chapters is okay, but the narrative is a bit bland, and it is a bit difficult to grab the audience's attention. Maybe because of this, many people who were attracted by the recommendation in the early stage to watch some of it ran away. This problem has improved after the war with Fire Fox. Although it is not as good as the Great God, at least it can attract people to look down. 2. Interaction with elves. The protagonist is slightly eccentric, and almost all interactions with elves are with Eevee. The interaction mentioned here does not mean training or anything, but daily chatting, communication, or maybe touching and intimate contact. The only scenes in Dengeki Monster are training and battle. This part of Ibrahimovic is good, as his body movements represent the psychological activities/inner thoughts. There are also interactions with the protagonist. 3. It's still a problem with the elves. Dengeki Monster's character is too unclear, while Ibrahimovic's character is too distinct. An Eevee has elements such as gluttony, arrogance, willfulness, unwillingness to fight, and going its own way. I think there is actually nothing wrong with Eevee's character, but after you created it, you didn't use her usual cute side to influence the readers' perception, causing the readers to hate her (although I think this part is okay for me). Perhaps tsundere can be appropriately described as cute. 4. Regarding Ibrahimovic's reluctance to play. Throughout the entire Pokémon world, whether it's specials, animations or theatrical versions, there is no Pokémon that is unwilling to battle. You may be able to describe the story of the 6-player battle where it was reluctant, complaining about the protagonist afterwards, and the protagonist comforting/persuading it, but at the moment it still chose to listen to the protagonist. Or describe a crisis. After Ibrahimovic and the protagonist experienced it, Ibrahimovic discovered his own lack of strength, and then trained hard. You can continue to hate fighting, but you will still strengthen yourself and step up when needed. I think your Eevee may want to create a Pokémon that is unwilling to level up, fight, or work hard, but is very talented (although it only has public qualifications at the beginning). However, if you do not master this aspect well, it will cause readers to dislike it, especially if your characterization of the Pokémon is slightly insufficient. 5. Advance degradation problem. First of all, this is a second creation, which is bound to cause displeasure. . Then you just made 500,000 in the early stage, and you spent it just for advancement, and the readers thought it was a waste of money. Next, this is the product of Ibrahimovic's willfulness, adding to the reader's displeasure. These three points caused the loss of readers and the fuse for Ibrahimovic to be disliked. Also, they will think that you want to copy/compromise the leader and write an Arceus book, which will be annoying to fans of the leader. Let me talk about my opinion on the leader Ibrahimovic: Before he changed his style in the early stage, he created a strong impression of Ibrahimovic and successfully made readers like her. Later, when he cheated Arceus, his willfulness and other willfulness will be regarded as cool/cute. 6. Your rhythm. Although I and some viewers like to watch more daily routines, the early stage (the first 20) is really too bland. It can be fun to have a battle or some plot in the early stage with the audience's exclamation. Advantages: 1. After the battle between the Fire Fox and the Fire Fox, the number of battle scenes increased slightly, but it was not too overwhelming. In addition, your description of the battle is pretty good, and it doesn't look boring 2. After twenty chapters, the overall situation gets better. The characterization of people, Pokémon, and plot has been significantly improved.

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Ruthless egg hatching machine

How can I put it, if there is no Ibrahimovic, I think it would be really interesting. This Ibrahimovic is too open.

Poor Mr. Dan

Fairy Eevee

Name: Xiaojiu Race: Pokémon Source: Artificial Pokémon Type: Snake Original: Hydra Attributes: Poison Dragon Water Skill: Water Poison and Dragon Skills Image: A super giant python with nine snake heads and blue-black scales and an inverted stinger on its back Introduction: An artificial pet elf created by evil forces was lost in an accident again and was subdued by the hero and became his war pet {"NickName":"DoHi","UserId":225455731}

Dengeki World of Warcraft has a high competition, Mr. Dan continues to work hard and update

11 Ultimate beasts (photos can be up to 10, Poison Baby will not be included)

I'm here again 😂 This time I saw it before it was put on the shelves... 1. First of all, I ventured to arrest the mane mane group. The quality seemed to have declined, and it didn't turn around until I met the doctor 2. There can be slap-in-the-face plots, but don't be too frequent, especially this kind of old-fashioned one (the clerk's part is embarrassing, the teacher's is okay) 3. The interaction between the elves is still too little... (As mentioned before), the images of the three elves are not very three-dimensional. Ibrahimovic set up an elf design, but it was only better than the other two elves. I usually write about people and people, but when I get home I should write about people and elves (although I can also write about people and elves outside) 4. I just jumped to the latest chapter... Why did Kiriji only take Ibrahimovic out? What mental journey or thoughts does he have, or how can Ibrahimovic help in this plot... In fact, I suggest Dan always describe it a little bit, otherwise it would be strange to leave Ibrahimovic at home and suddenly take him out... There can also be more descriptions of Ibrahimovic, such as the part where he feels that the protagonist is in a bad mood and comforts the protagonist. A jealous little cotton-padded jacket will definitely care about its owner, right? As usual, let's talk about some of the advantages: 1. The battle aspect is pretty good, and it's refreshing enough... To be honest, I think this is what elf novels should be. If you want to slap the face, go back to fantasy/urban... Fantasy stories seem to have rarely slapped the plot recently 2. The inner drama of the characters and the interaction between the characters are good... At this point, I want to talk about the elves again! The elves are the protagonists, so how come any supporting character has more inner drama than them? Are you really just treating the elves as tools for the protagonist to show off? 3. Regarding the latest chapter... Lin Mo's description of the hero Chi Mu is good! Feel the emotions put in by the author

The author never thought that cutting out the main character's starting Pokémon and leaving it at home would be very harmful to the Pokémon genre? 😥😥😥 In fact, the best thing about Pokémon is that none of them are left behind.

It feels like this comment section has become my "watching" diary... Eevee-chan has finally evolved! No more scenes will be deleted! This is the victory of the Eevee party ~ Spread Eevee is a Pokémon that was delayed by the author... The elf design was created in the early stage, but it was not used properly, which made her character become a point of disgust for readers. Readers' dissatisfaction completely erupted after cheating! Ibrahimovic: Apologize, author! The latest two chapters showed me the author's emotional investment in the characters, and also changed the shortcomings of the previous elf plot. I dare say that if he had started with this kind of writing, the fire would not have been so great. At least it would not have been so miserable, and he could still support himself a little. Anyway, come on, author, the experience of this book will become fertilizer for your next book.

I think it's well written, like it 👍

Although there are some minor flaws, the overall plot is actually pretty good and worth watching. It's a pity that the author's grades were too poor when he was writing the book and he became autistic.

Steel Cannon Arm Shrimp

Can you tell me how many subscriptions you have now?

It's well written. It seems to be an electric shock monster with its own power amplifier and an Eevee with its own lucky egg. The writing is very good, and I finally found a good elf novel for me (I have one thing to say, the one starting from the egg is really not good) I have been poisoned by elf novels recently, and finally there is a book that I can read. Come on, author.

There is no difference between the protagonist's Ibrahimovic and

Can't general elves learn all skills?