The Uneducated Swordsman

No, you wrote Miyano Akemi so well and the protagonist so awesome, but you still let Miyano Akemi die... And you want to show the protagonist's promise of a thousand dollars? I can only say that excellent moral qualities are all connected. A person who attaches great importance to love and justice will not ignore death, especially if it is a simple task... The reason why it is said to be a simple task is that in addition to the protagonist's good skills, he and the winery have an inherently hostile relationship. What the enemy wants is what I don't want, right? Allowing the enemy to get what he wants is his own incompetence. Isn't it? Anyway, I think this character is not likable. That's it

There is a problem with this book. What kind of swordsman is there without sword energy? , Waste of feelings, goodbye? , Shen Nong tested the poison here and determined the degree of poison: extremely poisonous. If you don't know sword energy, you should at least be able to cut iron.

Why are you looking for Xiao Ai? This is not directly the heroine of Belmode.

Who is the heroine? I hope it's Xiao Ai

I don't know why I was immediately put off. The following is a point of view that I personally don't like. First, the protagonist is scary at every turn, and then he trembles slightly and doesn't even dare to make eye contact. No, I didn't even dare to see his face. I suggest you change your cover. It has nothing to do with the protagonist of your cover. What does the protagonist of the cover say? The height is not so majestic, not so intimidating and approachable. The second thing is that when I see that the protagonist is not Xiaolan, I find it a little hard to accept it, because I have read a lot of Conan novels, all of which are written by Haibara Ai. If I see just one of them, it feels like my head will explode. Too many people have written it. There are others, I didn't look down, and I didn't dare to look down. Everyone, hold on, I'm going to get out of here.

So what's the point of not being a time traveler? Do you think you have too many readers?

With all the votes in your hands, don't you think this thing is destined to Erha, hehehe. ᶘ ͡°ᴥ͡°ᶅ

I can't stand the self-written article, so just look up the information and read some books. This book is like a primary school student bragging, ridiculous and speechless

The protagonist feels like a Maori nanny, and is particularly self-righteous. In the Nakamori chapter, I felt that the protagonist's actions went too far. Maori is a healthy middle-aged uncle, not a baby waiting to be fed. He does not need anyone to screen for him who can contact him, and among the people Maori comes into contact with, it is impossible for everyone to communicate with him calmly. There will inevitably be quarrels. In fact, quarrels are also a kind of social interaction, and it is not impossible to become friends after quarrels. The protagonist online directly deprived Maori of part of his social rights, and Maori and Nakamori had a bad relationship in the later period? Are you so malicious towards Zhongsen? The above is the questioning part. No, do you like to destroy someone so much? Think of yourself as a god? Completely self-righteous, do what you think is right, regardless of the consequences afterwards. Just take the example in the article, do you think this is a good thing for gross profit? I wonder who dares to chat with Mao Li casually, for fear of making a big joke and losing his life. Moreover, where is the respect for life that was promised? Do you really just want to kill? Forgive me for my poor writing style, I can't criticize you

After reading a few chapters, I guess the pig's trotter is Hattori Heiji, and the main character is an old man named Goldfinger, who has no emotions.

Kuroba Kaito is obsessed with a sword. How can it be a drama? It doesn't matter if Kuroji uses a sword originally, it doesn't matter if Kyogoku is really like that. You get a werewolf and a berserk potion, so I reluctantly accept it. What do you want to do, Kaito, when you become a demon?

I'm writing a fan novel, and the main character is an indigenous person. Don't you feel embarrassed if you don't know the plot? A group of readers who all know the plot! When you are watching a story that you obviously know the reason for, but when you write it, you have to express that you don't know the plot literally? ? Don't you think it's weird? Do you know who the murderer is? But I have to pretend not to know, and I have to write it out. The plot has not changed much, everything is known, and the readers already know it by heart. Don't you think it's strange to see it this way?

What's the point in fandom if you don't watch Chinese people? It's better to watch anime.

How should I put it? It is indeed a daily guide to poison.

People who want to read fanfics don't like indigenous characters at all, because they make the protagonist look like a sb. No wonder this book is so popular. I didn't know that the plot has a hammer-like sense of substitution.

This kind of introduction really dissuades people. How many years ago do you think it was all about other people's opinions when it came to character development?

I can't stand the setting of this book, so I'm leaving now

Wouldn't it be nice to have a heroine on a poisonous island?

When I saw the chapter where the protagonist was fighting against 80 policemen alone, I was reminded of Miyamoto Musashi in the manga Saba. If you don't have a clear idea of ​​a dozen swordsmen, you can refer to the chapter of Saba Miyamoto Musashi. In urban areas, unless you use fire bombing regardless of the lives of civilians, you can't face a swordsman based on numbers alone. Someone proposed the concept of a gun, but the gun needs to be aimed and shot, and the enemy will not give you this opportunity.

He got poisoned and died in the first chapter of the game. Defeated his grandfather at the age of six? My resistance to toxicity is too low Goodbye

You've written down the breathing method, so what's the difference between Dongdong and what martial arts scholars and Taoists say about practicing one breath? Kyogoku in the movie version is so fierce. The protagonist in your book can overpower Kyogoku and fight, and Conan can also explode satellites, but he doesn't know how to use a sword? You really have to bow your head with this awesomeness, this is the world of Ke Xue. If you think the sword aura of pirates is exaggerated, then forget it. The sword aura in previous martial arts movies is fine, right? The sword energy of Fengyunxiong Dominates the World is too high-end. Is it okay to choose Tianlong Babu?

Hahaha, the bodyguards of the gangster girls have demonic energy, and they can even jump out of a Holy See and summon six-winged sky phantoms to apply more than a dozen buffs. Your writing is quite Western fantasy style.

It's obviously a Conan fan, but he insists on adding so many messy things, making it look like the previous City Soldier King

How many dark forces could come together to almost kill the witch? I mentioned earlier that I would win once, lose once, and be willing to lose when I fight with the protagonist, that's it? That's it? Will it be too low-grade?

What is the use of the sword of modern sociology? I thought it was going to be a magical transformation😂😒but it turned out that it was just a matter of showing off with a sword?

Wouldn't it be nice for the heroine to ask Xiao Ai to go directly to Koizumi Hongzi?

This author writes a lot of nonsense, and the preface does not match the following words Lots of nonsense means that he likes to say things twice Conclusion-explanation-conclusion Repeating them twice makes no sense and it seems like a lot of nonsense The preface does not match the following words, which refers to the logic and the use of transition words in some places I can't stick to the poisonous points in the book review

How does Xiao Ai feel about Conan now? Will it still be the same as in the anime? Will the protagonist have a female protagonist? Author, if there is a female protagonist, could it be Xiao Ai? If so, please don't be too cruel Xiao Ai is a character that is too deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, so I hope she has a perfect ending.

Why did the author Da Xiaoai give Conan seven roses? And Xiao Ai is still fond of Gu Yue as a relative or huan

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