It All Started with Constantine

I feel like I want to write a protagonist with an IQ, but unfortunately it feels very reckless to me. He is obviously only four years old, and he shouldn't be a dog if there is a cheat for a while. Do you want to make any plans? Directly No. 0 To intervene in demon-level things. The subject matter and content are very good, come on...

Although Zha Kang is originally a scumbag, the portrayal of this Zha Kang is so disgusting that it makes me feel a little sympathetic to the demons in hell who want to rip off Zha Kang's skin. In the future, when the protagonist's strength increases, Zha Kang should be killed, and not kill him with a knife. I feel that this Constantine is targeting the protagonist inexplicably. Is it the protagonist's fault if his friend dies? The road is narrow Zha Kang(")😅

The reason why the protagonist does not tell his mother about his abilities is that his mother is a Puritan and a devout ex-believer The only result of knowing that the protagonist has Suhui is that he will be burned as a demon. Because his mother is not a virgin and has no suspicion of being pregnant by an angel, it is impossible to think that he is the living Christ, and he can only be burned as a demon.

The protagonist smokes at the age of four? ? You are the author. . . That's outrageous.

I finally know what it means to be a protector.

Should he make a big fuss and let his biological mother be arrested and put into an orphanage in who-knows-what condition? And the protagonist probably doesn't want to enter the orphanage because of his ability and mature mind, so it's impossible to have no resentment in the first chapter. It's just that he doesn't want to cause trouble, so he just doesn't see each other again! However, if the author later writes a plot in which the protagonist's mother dies saving him because she still loves his child, he should be able to address the poisonous point of the beginning!

The protagonist is too reckless, saying that he is going to survive while directly intervening in the war between demons and angels. At first, he said he was not strong enough, and when he saw the devil, he wanted to run away, but soon he entered the game directly 😰

The 4-year-old smoked a pipe and reported it.

The four-year-old protagonist smokes? Author, you are very brave. If you want to write about strange objects, don't you have any other types of objects to write about Sartre? Do you have to write about a pipe? How about writing about a four-year-old kid who walked all the way home with a pipe in his mouth, and started smoking right after he got home? If your book can continue to exist, it will have to be reported.

Let me show you Landlord

Can you imagine what it is like to be 4 years old? Don't you have children around you? I still smoke. How long will it take me to grow up?

Playing mahjong

Four years old, why does such a child who cannot guarantee his own growth become the age of the protagonist? Coming out to fool around at the age of four is a genius creation, and all the problems in the book stem from this.

A four-year-old child who traveled through time, had no ability to protect himself, found a tool man, was still being chased, was still injured, and was thrown out one by one by Zha Kang, a four-year-old child? Last four year old smoking a pipe? ? I only see this, I really can't stand it anymore

It's a little bit annoying, how can a four-year-old drag a girl? She should weigh more than 80 pounds. Of course, if the pig's feet are added, I didn't tell you.

A four-year-old child with a golden finger that has not yet begun to develop and no ability to protect himself dares to participate in anything and even dares to touch Zha Kang. This is not asking for death.

After reading it, there are currently three major problems. The first is about the mother. The problem is particularly big. Why can you tell outsiders but not your mother? It is better to just start the game and say that you are in the orphanage. The second sudden jump timeline is full of question marks ❓❓❓❓, and is directly split into two unrelated parts. Newcomers can just watch the second part. It doesn't matter if you read the previous part, so as not to poison you! Third, in order to forcibly highlight the dissipation of souls written by Goldfinger, it seems inferior to the basic setting and plot extension. Why not get the pure soul essence directly, just like getting the soul essence directly from a pawnshop transaction. In a world view of hell and heaven, don't you think this setting is insulting to your IQ? Either you have your own complete worldview, create a new world by yourself, or you rely on the original worldview. Instead of forcibly inserting inexplicable things into a complete world view.

After reading a few chapters, I now understand why I was scolded. Couldn't the author write how older the protagonist is before starting the plot?

The world view is a bit subtle. Generally, it is written about the Supreme Mage. There are three holy sanctuaries where ordinary devils can escape. Hell is also quite strange. Even if there is no soul book, the space is like a sieve and the body can escape from hell. The funniest thing is playing magic in American comics. Is it because the dimension demon is not ruthless enough or the demon king is not sinister enough? There are a lot of creditors waiting for you.

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Alas, I didn't expect it to be a system text with extra points. Alas, it's a pity.