Global Beastmaster: I Can See the Potential

I admit that I did not write well in some places, and the problems mentioned by book friends do exist. I accept criticism. But one thing, I hope you can respect others. You can disrespect me or my books, and I don't mind. You can criticize me and Shu as you like, but as long as it doesn't violate the platform's rules or involves insulting family members, I won't delete your comments. But please do one thing and respect other people's love. I still say the same thing, everyone's growth environment and experience are different, so some ideas and hobbies are also different. My book is a commodity and is for sale. Maybe I ignored its commercial nature during the production process and made it ugly. It's normal for you to scold me, and I won't say anything because of it. That's the truth, right? But for those who are interested in my product and are willing to buy it, shouldn't you maintain the most basic respect? You can not buy it, or you can criticize it, but is it too much to say some shady words to people who want to buy it? As I said before, I don't mind whether you respect me or my books. I just hope you will respect the book friends who like this book. I just want to show you the world of beast control in my imagination

His father owed money, and the protagonist ran out to die without telling his mother.

It made me look confused. I knew I could pay back the money by selling the house, but I had to commit suicide. You all know that you are cheating, but are you afraid that you will not be able to redeem your house?

After reading Chapter 50, as a time traveler, I have been like a mentally retarded person in two lives.

Clearly distinguish between potential and strength (゜ロ゜)

Do you know why so many book friends are crazy about it? I must remind the author. 1. Global type, with built-in cheats, uniqueness is very important, that is, only the protagonist can open the cheat, which gives you a prophetic feeling. But what do I see? The beginning is about the Lin family looking for some "eye of the sky". This doesn't mean that the protagonist's golden finger is not the only one. Even if it's not awesome, how can you make readers happy? How to accept it? And selling a spiritual beast and being suspected by others will make people think that this is what the protagonist has been like in his two lives? 2. The complicated setting of the spirit beast levels First of all, I understand that the author wants to write new ideas, but I really can't understand what Rong is and what Bo is. I have to think about A, B, C, and D. Later, I also made a numerical value, which is just a big string of 0, B level 10000, Jia Ji 10w, how to say... It's very useless. Then I finally understood the level after reading more than 50 chapters. It was very confusing. If the setting is good, if people can't understand it at once, some people will be discouraged. 3. There are too many conspiracies and too many holes dug! ! People write plots by first digging one, burying another, and then changing the map. The author wishes that the protagonist would encounter a level 50 boss just after he was in Novice Village. Everyone he met had their own agenda and bad intentions, and there were also some characters of unknown significance appearing in the middle. From Baoyuan-Liu xx (undercover mission)-Xu Ming Sell a spirit beast-Lin Ershao (Sky Eye)-Lin Sanshao (Xu Ming)-Baitaotao Baitaotao- Dragon Pattern Society-Human Experiment The Beast Tamer Association - Final Event After 50 chapters, you have written all of the plot that might take hundreds of chapters to complete. It is awesome plus, and you have successfully confused the readers in the rain and fog. This is really just a village, and only the protagonist is being beaten. How do you want readers to accept it? ? ? Although we are not talking about pursuing cool stories, who wants to watch the protagonist get beaten all the time Like the same type, who endures humiliation and strategizes, such as Han Xiao, a super mechanic, or Xiao Ke, the master of secrets behind the scenes, both do a good job in handling the plot. The enemies encountered do not match the protagonist. The protagonist is a novice and has no advantage in fighting back. He is nothing more than being sprayed. If it were me, I would squirt too.

I just watched a little bit, but for a time-traveling protagonist, I feel like the start is too useless. No matter how you think about it, time-travelers will also accumulate advantages since childhood. The spiritual pet that was selected when I was a child was made of a lollipop, and I didn't have any talents at that time. It's like waiting for yourself to be useless since you were young. It's amazing. Choosing a spiritual pet means that you won't use any resources when you were young, and your family won't give you any. I really don't know how to say it. I think it's more reasonable if you start as an orphan. The time traveler plays with himself like this, and the child is convinced that his parents are so useless. His mother seems to be a research institute. . . 🙏🙏🙏

The plot of Chapter 28 will obviously lower the viewing experience, so you have to increase the difficulty of writing. If you can't write it well, you will GG. Looking for humans of special bloodline, the protagonist wants to be a guinea pig? Stallion? Is the author digging his own grave? Or is it better? I think it's the former.

Chapter 2: Persuading people to quit. The protagonist's father owes 50,000 yuan. The gangsters come to collect the debt and beat the protagonist. Why do you want to start like this? You are not the kind of person whose family is a ranger at the institute and can get a better start. Just forget it. An ordinary family is fine. You have a negative start. You are really interesting.

Were you just hanging around for nothing for the past 18 years?

It feels childish to deliberately create conflicts... As if plastic surgery failed... The writing is not like a story... But an accident scene, full of embarrassment...

Painted Cover

The protagonist has a disaster-prone physique and is prone to accidents wherever he goes.

The introduction piqued my interest, but the first few pictures put me off. I don't know how difficult it is for you to write about a child from an ordinary family, or that all the authors from Qidian can only write this kind of novel where normal people don't even deserve to be alive. Don't talk about how people can have smooth sailing and how people can become stronger without experiencing setbacks. Ordinary people in China make up the vast majority. What you wrote, haha, to put it harshly, it is difficult to even survive to adulthood.

I was told to quit at the beginning, and I had no interest in reading anymore. I reluctantly watched a few pictures. Personally, I felt that it would be more reasonable to write an indigenous protagonist.

Other people's beast control is cool, but only the protagonist's is constantly being beaten.

This book is one of those rare books that got me hooked on the second chapter.

Author, you made a mistake. You have to sell food in a real vegetable market. If you don't get beaten to death, you will be lucky. Your book is the same as that