A Superstar Begins on a Competition Show

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The potato-style opening is a bit cliché, with the protagonist being ridiculed at the beginning. I suggest changing the opening: the protagonist debuted as a child star, retired at 16 to hone his acting skills at a film academy, and immediately became unemployed after graduation, forced to deliver food while looking for acting opportunities.

After reading a few chapters, it's just another ridiculous novel and a talent show. Acting skills and idol appeal should have their focus, but what's the point of combining a skit and singing? It's a hodgepodge. What TV station would produce such a program? It's just nonsense.

Your synopsis says the male lead is all-powerful? That's so boring.

I haven't seen any of the sketches or anything like that. There's absolutely no sense of immersion. Seriously, it's just not good enough; I can't keep going. If you think I'm bashing the author, fine, but when you read a book, you're looking for immersion and enjoyment, and this is nowhere to be found! Tell me, where are these two things?! After reading for so long, I'm just frustrated.

The books by veteran authors are still more captivating; even the plot twists and comebacks feel natural and logical. It's just that there aren't enough words...

There's a slightly awkward feeling about it, I can't quite put my finger on it, it just feels a bit like a pretentious, artsy type, like someone forcing themselves to be melancholic.

Write carefully, maintain a good pace, and try not to write about celebrities throwing their weight around on set. I've worked on several film crews and heard from senior members who have been with the crew for over 10 years that no matter how big a star is, they don't throw their weight around on set, at least not overtly. Whenever a star comes, they always have their assistant buy drinks and snacks to share with the crew.

I noticed your comedian suddenly ran ahead, but upon closer inspection, I realized it was the author advertising. Come and take a look.

After all, he's an actor, and writing songs all the time isn't very appealing anymore. I hope he writes more about scenes from his movies.