The Gate to the Planes of the Heavens

You just keep writing until you die as soon as you enter the world of Yang Shen! Your advantage is time travel, damn it, it's so padded out. Do you even know why there's a reading slump? It's because the theme and main content of your writing don't match. There's no center, no outline. If you don't have the control of the original author of Infinite Terror, don't try to write like that.

Starting from chapter 21 after the system upgrade, the author goes on a spree of poisonous content; you can give up after chapter 20.

The main character is 1.8 Meters tall and weighs 65 kilograms? Seriously? What's the difference between him and a piece of firewood?

The author must be quite young; the numerous dialogues and self-indulgent monologues are rather childish. It's filled with an aura of "the universe revolves around me," and "everything I think is right," completely disregarding logic and intelligence. The plot is exciting, the protagonist's cheat abilities are impressive, and he grows quickly, but the constant self-indulgence is jarring.

This kind of time-travel story that mixes science fiction and fantasy feels awkward to read.

I'm a student, and I started writing a book because I didn't know when school would start again. After all, the pandemic was quite serious recently, and I thought I'd have to do online classes for another semester. Plus, I was having a reading slump, so I decided to write a novel as a trial run. As a result, I wrote a chapter and sent it out.

Why did you pick up your brush, sir? Your writing is bland in conception, unremarkable in style, and lacking in skill. It's tasteless to read, yet a pity to discard it—truly a chicken rib! However, Mr. [Name] is currently at a crucial turning point in his life, a junior in college, and should be working diligently on his internship.

Honestly, I'm getting tired of fantasy and cultivation novels! Mainly because I've read too many. These fantasy/cultivation/multiverse-themed novels, since they all start with superhuman genes, wouldn't it be better to just go for the genetic engineering in Super God Academy? They're not weak!

Fellow Daoists, please read this carefully (it's very important): Ahem, some readers have given me feedback that it seems a bit reckless for the protagonist to go directly to a high-level martial arts world like Yangshen. I have seriously considered this.

What is the protagonist of this book pursuing? In reality, he relies on his parents for food, doesn't work, can't endure hardship, has a cheat-like ability, is afraid of death, dares not take risks, doesn't want to suffer even a little bit, and is lazy. He has too much power, but his mind is still the same, his thoughts are still the same, he just shows off now and then, it's vulgar.