The Gate to the Planes of the Heavens

As soon as you enter Yangshen, you will write until you die! Your advantage is that you can travel through time and water. Do you know why there is a shortage of books? It is caused by the incompatibility between the theme and the main content written by people like you. There is no center and no outline. Without the control of the original author of Infinite Horror, don't imitate others to write randomly. Even if you have any new ideas in the middle of writing, don't add it. Just follow the outline. Even if there are some loopholes, don't change it randomly. Just like Jin Yong's novel has many loopholes, but why are so many people still saying it is a classic? Think about it yourself! I came in to read the book after reading the title and introduction, but as soon as I came in, I saw water numbers and messy psychological activities. Damn it, you could just change the title of the book to "My Psychological Feelings after Traveling Through the Heavens".

Starting from the 21-card system upgrade, the author started to poison like crazy, and he could give up after reading 20 chapters.

The protagonist is 1.8 Meters tall and weighs 65? Seriously? Is it different from a stick of firewood?

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The author must be very young. All the dialogues and self-pleasure are too childish. There is a feeling that the universe revolves around me. I think everything is right. I don't care about logic or IQ. The plot is very exciting. Goldfinger is awesome. He grows up very fast. He is just an old self-pleasure. It is recommended that the author delete some of the self-talk and focus on the main line of development and growth. This should be able to improve it to a higher level. The protagonist's character should be more calm, which is too out of the ordinary. He should also try to improve the IQ of the supporting characters. The people in the original work are not that silly. The dialogue should be concise and concise, so as to improve the writing style.

This kind of time travel mixed with science and fantasy seems awkward.

I am a student, and I first started writing the book because I didn't know when school would start. After all, the epidemic was a bit serious some time ago, and I thought I would have to take online classes for another semester. Coupled with my lack of books, I decided to write a novel to test the waters. As a result, I wrote a chapter and sent it out. As soon as it passed the review, the school informed me that I must register on time on September 1st. This was outrageous and outrageous. After school starts, I may not have much free time to arrange. At least it will definitely be much less than at home now. The worst case scenario may be weekly or monthly updates. I think monthly updates are impossible. Thinking of this, I feel a little sorry for all the Taoist friends who read. Of course, I will try my best to see if I can update a chapter every day. If not, emmm, we will talk about it then. In short, I will try my best to write as much as possible I hope all fellow Taoists who read this can support my new book The new author would like to thank all fellow Taoists in advance!

Why do you, sir? Sir, the idea of ​​this article is bland, the style is unremarkable, the writing skills are insufficient, it is tasteless, and it is a pity to discard it. It is so-called tasteless! Mr. Ran is still at the most important point of change in his life. In his junior year, he is just about ready to work hard and practice hard. According to Mr. Wang's writing skills, even if he writes thousands of posts every day, it is difficult to achieve perfect attendance. If you don't cut it off right now, you should know that if the young man doesn't work hard, the old man will be miserable! Sir, think carefully and carefully, don't waste your time!

To be honest, fantasy and cultivating immortals are boring to watch! The main reason is that I have read too many fantasy cultivators. Now that they have superhuman genes from the beginning, wouldn't it be better to just go for the genetic engineering in the super seminary? Not weak either! Of course, it can't be compared to the fantasy novels about cultivating immortals that blow up the universe at every turn, and many readers now think that a supernova explosion can blow the strongest god in the universe into an atomic state, which is very weak! I'm just complaining, if you feel uncomfortable watching it, you can delete it!

Fellow Taoists, please be sure to read this (very important): Ahem, some readers have given me feedback that it would be a bit reckless for the protagonist to directly go to a world of high martial arts like Yangshen. I have seriously considered this. The original intention of going to the world of Yangshen was to let the protagonist start training from scratch and channel all his strength. As for what I said before about how powerful the world of Yang Shen is, and how powerful people are like clouds, they are just words. Please forgive me, fellow Taoists. After all, the power gained directly makes people feel a bit unreliable and unreal, at least that's what I think. And the most important thing is that the protagonist currently does not have the character to match his strength. I think this is very important, especially in the later stage. If you don't have a state of mind that is equal to or even exceeds your strength, you won't be able to go far. You will only be a beast with great power, not a truly strong man. At present, the protagonist is probably a little stronger than ordinary human immortals and ghost immortals. This is reflected in the conversation with Yuan Fei. The opportunities obtained in the early stage (psychic power, superhuman body) have been transformed into potential by the golden finger, and they will not directly become invincible. This will be written later in the protagonist's further exploration of the golden finger's function. If I forget, please remind me. Okay, that's all I can think of for now, thank you fellow Taoists. If there are any mistakes, please point them out and I will think about them seriously.