Gate to the Planes of Heaven

As soon as you enter Yangshen, you will write until you die! Your advantage is that you can travel through time and water. Do you know why there is a shortage of books? It is caused by the incompatibility between the theme and the main content written by people like you. There is no center and no outline. Without the control of the original author of Infinite Horror, don't imitate others to write randomly. Even if you have any new ideas in the middle of writing, don't add it. Just follow the outline. Even if there are some loopholes, don't change it randomly. Just like Jin Yong's novel has many loopholes, but why are so many people still saying it is a classic? Think about it yourself! I came in to read the book after reading the title and introduction, but as soon as I came in, I saw water numbers and messy psychological activities. Damn it, you could just change the title of the book to "My Psychological Feelings after Traveling Through the Heavens".

Starting from the 21-card system upgrade, the author started to poison like crazy, and he could give up after reading 20 chapters.

The protagonist is 1.8 Meters tall and weighs 65? Seriously? Is it different from a stick of firewood?

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The author must be very young. All the dialogues and self-pleasure are too childish. There is a feeling that the universe revolves around me. I think everything is right. I don't care about logic or IQ. The plot is very exciting. Goldfinger is awesome. He grows up very fast. He is just an old self-pleasure. It is recommended that the author delete some of the self-talk and focus on the main line of development and growth. This should be able to improve it to a higher level. The protagonist's character should be more calm, which is too out of the ordinary. He should also try to improve the IQ of the supporting characters. The people in the original work are not that silly. The dialogue should be concise and concise, so as to improve the writing style.

I am a student, and I first started writing the book because I didn't know when school would start. After all, the epidemic was a bit serious some time ago, and I thought I would have to take online classes for another semester. Coupled with my lack of books, I decided to write a novel to test the waters. As a result, I wrote a chapter and sent it out. As soon as it passed the review, the school informed me that I must register on time on September 1st. This was outrageous and outrageous. After school starts, I may not have much free time to arrange. At least it will definitely be much less than at home now. The worst case scenario may be weekly or monthly updates. I think monthly updates are impossible. Thinking of this, I feel a little sorry for all the Taoist friends who read. Of course, I will try my best to see if I can update a chapter every day. If not, emmm, we will talk about it then. In short, I will try my best to write as much as possible I hope all fellow Taoists who read this can support my new book The new author would like to thank all fellow Taoists in advance!

This kind of time travel mixed with science and fantasy seems awkward.

Why do you, sir? Sir, the idea of ​​this article is bland, the style is unremarkable, the writing skills are insufficient, it is tasteless, and it is a pity to discard it. It is so-called tasteless! Mr. Ran is still at the most important point of change in his life. In his junior year, he is just about ready to work hard and practice hard. According to Mr. Wang's writing skills, even if he writes thousands of posts every day, it is difficult to achieve perfect attendance. If you don't cut it off right now, you should know that if the young man doesn't work hard, the old man will be miserable! Sir, think carefully and carefully, don't waste your time!

Fellow Taoists, please be sure to read this (very important): Ahem, some readers have given me feedback that it would be a bit reckless for the protagonist to directly go to a world of high martial arts like Yangshen. I have seriously considered this. The original intention of going to the world of Yangshen was to let the protagonist start training from scratch and channel all his strength. As for what I said before about how powerful the world of Yang Shen is, and how powerful people are like clouds, they are just words. Please forgive me, fellow Taoists. After all, the power gained directly makes people feel a bit unreliable and unreal, at least that's what I think. And the most important thing is that the protagonist currently does not have the character to match his strength. I think this is very important, especially in the later stage. If you don't have a state of mind that is equal to or even exceeds your strength, you won't be able to go far. You will only be a beast with great power, not a truly strong man. At present, the protagonist is probably a little stronger than ordinary human immortals and ghost immortals. This is reflected in the conversation with Yuan Fei. The opportunities obtained in the early stage (psychic power, superhuman body) have been transformed into potential by the golden finger, and they will not directly become invincible. This will be written later in the protagonist's further exploration of the golden finger's function. If I forget, please remind me. Okay, that's all I can think of for now, thank you fellow Taoists. If there are any mistakes, please point them out and I will think about them seriously.

To be honest, fantasy and cultivating immortals are boring to watch! The main reason is that I have read too many fantasy cultivators. Now that they have superhuman genes from the beginning, wouldn't it be better to just go for the genetic engineering in the super seminary? Not weak either! Of course, it can't be compared to the fantasy novels about cultivating immortals that blow up the universe at every turn, and many readers now think that a supernova explosion can blow the strongest god in the universe into an atomic state, which is very weak! I'm just complaining, if you feel uncomfortable watching it, you can delete it!

In fact, to be honest, this kind of book setting has quite a big problem. Because you are a normal, ordinary person. It's okay to play with super powers. Are you thinking? But go practice. I really don't understand it. To be honest, I personally think that even if those profound secrets are placed in front of you, you may not be able to understand them. I just want to know the technical terms of Taoism and Buddhism, do you understand? If you follow the hard skills and low-level skills practiced, I won't talk about it. But you started practicing such a profound technique without any foundation. Can you understand it?

What is the protagonist of this book pursuing? In reality, you have to rely on your parents for food, but you don't work, you can't endure hardships, you have golden fingers, you are afraid of death, you don't dare to take risks, you don't want to suffer at all and you are lazy, you get too much power, your brain is still the same brain, your thoughts are still the same thoughts, there is nothing wrong with pretending to be cool, tacky, even if the protagonist is so awesome that he can control several universes? So what is his ultimate goal? There is no goal, I just write wherever I think, which is boring.

I feel that the protagonist is practicing the Amitabha Sutra of the past. If you can't even build a Buddha statue, then what's the point of calling it the past Amitabha Sutra? Just call it spiritual meditation. There's too much nonsense in the narration.

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

The book "Yang Shen" itself is very superficial, the characters are poorly portrayed and the level of connotation is very low. The sentence "Everyone is like a dragon" is politically correct. The reputation was below his own level, but after Hong Yi got the idea of ​​​​Thunder Tribulation, he even took off and went straight to the sewer. The writing skills of Zhutian are not good enough, but it is also a pitfall for the book. Especially in the more than 20 chapters, the system upgrade has introduced a reincarnation space, and the world plots of different styles repeatedly jump around and block crazy blocks. After reading it, it makes people feel that you can condense so many words into one sentence: "You open the newbie package and get (Psychic Crystal & Superman Serum)". When writing a book, you have to make it impossible to compress and read. This is the most basic. It's like you sung the entire children's song "Only Mother is Good in the World" to Hong Yi, the protagonist of Yang Shen... It's so embarrassing that it makes you want to flip through a few pages to stop vomiting, and you don't even have the idea of ​​​​compressing the reading.

Don't change the settings of the original work, it's boring

Today the collection finally exceeded 100, I am very happy 😁 Thank you all fellow Taoists for your continued support! Thank you for your collection, recommendation votes, comments and investment Well, I am a stupid person and I don't know how to speak. Anyway, thank you very much!

After reading Chapter 16, I didn't really want to read it. Although it is normal for modern people to like to brag, your bragging is too much. Could it be that when Hong Yi becomes a strong man, I will find out that there is no such thing in this world. Or you have to go back through time and perform a show for him. There is also the master who is the son of luck. He shared that people's luck will be punished.

To all the fellow Taoists who have always supported this book: To all the fellow Taoists who have always supported me, people have been asking me since very early when I will sign the contract, and I have lived up to expectations. Today, I finally received the short message. 😁 Thank you all fellow Taoists for your continued support. I never thought that one day I would also be able to receive website messages. Thanks to all my fellow Taoists, I cannot do without your support. emmm, this is the first time I received a website message, and I don't know what to say, so let's leave it at that. Thank you very much. If you want to invest, please invest quickly. You can earn some starting coins, right?

I thought I could see an ancestor. Author, please ask yourself. What do you want to do on the first day you gain superhuman strength?

I would like to remind all Taoist readers: It is best to invest before signing the contract for this book, because that way the benefits will be greater. Although I don't know when the contract will be officially signed, Pindao will definitely try to apply for the contract after 20,000 words. After the application fails, it seems that it will take 14 days before he can apply again

To all my dear book friends: First of all, thank you for your continued support! In recent days, there have been many comments. I was very happy 😁 But, I don't know why? I always feel that there are a very small number of people who say this and that in their comments, but don't offer any better opinions. 😢 For example, someone "suggested" that I arrange for the protagonist to apprentice with Patriarch Bodhi and Master Yuding,? Is that the one in my mind at that time? , Is this "suggestion" really over your head? (This may be a bit of a misnomer, please forgive me) 😰 Although I am still a student, I understand a little about the dangers of human nature, so the person who posted those messages is younger than me! It will definitely be much younger, at least after high school! 😅 Just like this summer vacation, I went to work for a summer vacation, and I met all kinds of people. Maybe it's a bit crazy to say this In short, all the book friends who read my books, I am very grateful to comment here, but when you comment, please think twice, this is very important, please be more rational! 🤔 There is no point in posting this, and it is not directed at anyone. Please watch it rationally 🤫

Which dimension will the protagonist go to? I like Tomato's novels I hope you can read it

Waiting for the fourth day when you level up to LV.2 And slap me in the face...

Write slowly. There are still many flaws. Come on, author.

My friend who suffers from the same problem, let me take a look at your lively comment section 😂

Waiting for the sixth day when you level up to LV.2 And slap me in the face…………

Wow boss, 720,000 words, awesome review

After I finish my studies, I can write if I have nothing to do. Come on!

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