Red Alert and Doomsday

I am a book listener and have listened to Chapter 65 so far. Please tell me your "feelings after reading". First of all, I searched for this book with the keyword "Red Alert Doomsday", and I read it with the attitude of wanting to read an apocalyptic series. My feeling when I started reading was the three chapters of Scrap Iron. The first three chapters of the online article are very important and are not included in this book. However, the command and conquer system settings that appeared later really surprised me. As an old player who has played all (cloud + real) command and conquer games, I was really surprised! The author has written the game system characteristics of Command & Conquer, Generals, and Red Alert into the novel system. This is countless times better than the systems developed by other novels of the same theme. First, there is a lot of content to write, and second, the game party simply cannot refuse such a system setting. In addition, the setting of the military units uses IQ in exchange for special physical conditions (health bar settings), which is also very good. Then there is the author's description of the indigenous world, which is presented to the readers step by step. After all, this was confusing at the beginning, but later I gradually understood that this indigenous world is a Tiberium doomsday world without GDI and NOD. In addition, the familiar biochemical crisis broke out, and it feels that the population base of the indigenous world should be very large. The technological civilization of the indigenous world is highly adaptable, such as the development of the "Survivor" weapon series and the therapeutic needle series. It can be seen that the author has carefully considered and portrayed it. After that, the author's writing style needs to be improved, whether it is the description of the characters, the description of the base scene, the combat actions, and the two-line description. I hope the author will strengthen his efforts in this area. Secondly, when there are more than ten chapters, the abrupt one-day report at the beginning of the chapter (it feels like a day in a fallout shelter to check the residents' outings). I hope it can be reasonably inserted into the interaction between the protagonist and the system, otherwise it will be too blunt. Finally, there is a large section of setting instructions, which need to be reasonably embedded into the plot. It is best not to be directly presented to readers. Finally, I would like to recommend some novels in the Command and Conquer series that I think are better. You can read them and refer to the advantages (mostly harmonious and sad): "Sun on Earth" (Command and Conquer is mainly Red Alert + Cold War, a cool novel) "Iron Armor" (Command and Conquer + modern; main theme) The character and the heroine are deducted points) "Command and Conquer: Sakurai's Rebellion" (Command and Conquer + Lelouch of the Rebellion, Farming + Great Power Struggle) "All Heavens Wireless Base" (All Heavens + Base + Farming, I personally think that the apocalyptic flow must have elements of the farming flow, and you should make your base feel like a home. Only when you have a sense of security can you have a sense of immersion. In retrospect, it seems that the author has never introduced the appearance of the base building) "Red Alert Lord" (Red Alert 3+ Doomsday Insect Pandemic, cool, good-looking, reasonable setting, safe, farming, perfect, can be a eunuch) "The Glory of the People's Union" (Second Dimension+ Command and Conquer, invincible war scenes, negative points for female characters) Suggestion: Personally, I believe that online writing has several elements: 1. Logic is self-consistent 2. The setting serves the plot 3. Reasonable on the basis of reality For example, the author cannot think of many plots, so he can bring them into reality and describe them with realistic expressions. And above.

The book is considered to be a good book There is no obvious poisonous point, but the long paragraphs of popular science introduction and long paragraphs of descriptions of the end of the world (suddenly interspersed seem stiff) inevitably make people lose motivation to read. In most novels with elements of the Command & Conquer series, most of the Red Alert doomsday themes are just a cover-up. What is commendable is that this book is one of the few that not only adheres to the technological line, but also respects the game settings.

The monster's ability setting at the beginning is so high that even a concrete wall can't withstand it.

It's true that there are no new books these days, so I wrote them myself, alas. As for the situation you mentioned, this is my idea of ​​​​setting the heroes in the novel: My novel will at least involve various camps in the second and third generations of the game. There will be at least 6 heroes. If I write them all as soldiers, at my level, I am afraid it will be difficult to write each character vividly and vividly. So, I plan to give hero abilities to the protagonist, so that the protagonist can integrate the abilities of each hero. As for whether there will be heroic characters in the future, we will discuss this later. The reason why I do this is also the lesson I learned from other red alert novels: Situation 1: Either the protagonist is an ordinary person who lacks combat literacy and has to participate in the front-line battles, which may easily be considered a poisonous point by everyone. Scenario 2: Either the protagonist gets various heroes to assist in the battle, and even summons Natasha, Tanya, and Yuriko to start a harem. But judging from the results, this also has a problem: there are too many supporting characters, which seriously steals the scene. We have to write about various arms, and now we have to describe heroes. How much writing is left for the protagonist? As a result, the protagonist is like a tool man and lacks any brilliance. If the author's military knowledge is worse, the protagonist will not only not look like a strategizing commander, but more like a loser who eats soft food, and the impression is very poor. Situation 3: Either the protagonist can exchange for anything at the Red Alert Base, from knives and daggers to enhanced serums, all kinds of props are arranged for the protagonist, and now the protagonist can finally go to the battlefield. But there are still problems: On the one hand, it involves too many items other than Red Alert, and it will accidentally become an article covered in the shell of Red Alert. On the other hand, how should these newly added props be priced? The result is that a mobilized soldier only costs a hundred or a few hundred gold coins, and an enhanced serum costs thousands of gold coins. Inflation is extremely serious, and it is easy to collapse in the middle and later stages. My idea: So, I put the hero ability on the protagonist. The benefits are also these three points: Benefit 1: The protagonist can charge on the battlefield or sit firmly in the army (after all, not all heroes are front-line chargers, such as Black Lotus and Yuri Affects the protagonist's sense of existence (the protagonist acquires heroic abilities) Benefit 3: The weapons used by the protagonist can also be taken directly from the hero weapons. In this way, it can avoid mixing in too many things other than red alerts, which will lead to selling the sheep's head. Furthermore, the capital cost can also refer to the price of the hero. It is not easy to add too many external weapons, which will lead to hyperinflation and writing collapse in the middle and later stages. These are some of my thoughts about the plot. {"NickName":"Book Friends 20211102083209874","UserId":374739395}

It's very well written. I don't know what others think of it, but I quite like it.

Author, do you want to add MOD heroes, such as Talking about the end of the heart?

There are really few Red Alert apocalyptic books, no, there are really few Red Alert books. There are basically no new Red Alert books. If there are good ones, they can also be about eunuch harmony. It's too difficult.

If there are no heroes in it, then what's the point of reading this book? It would be better not to call it Red Alert, but to create the characters and units yourself. This would be easier. If you want to write about Red Alert, the heroes in it must also be written. Each one has its own characteristics, just like a real living person.

The author is considering adding more briquette vehicles, which are highly mobile, capable of transporting troops, capable of air defense, and also have heavy armor.

Come on, author, not many people write red alerts these days.

Author, there is immunity to a small amount of damage in Red Alert. In Red Alert 2, the damage taken by units after upgrading is fixed -1, so vehicles at level 1 and above are completely immune to British snipers.

I was confused when I saw it😥😥

It looked messy at the beginning! 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵

The world is a bit desperate. Tiberium pollution + biohazard. It's really awesome that humans can survive.

The writing style is okay, but why does it look like writing a diary to me? After reading a few pictures, I can't understand what is written. What is the background? The pig's trotters are only introduced by their names. What about other backgrounds, what era is the pig's trotters introduced?

There is no obvious poisonous point, but there is also no obvious reading point. The environment is excellent, but the description feels lacking in combat and specific thoughts (thinking about the protagonist's size), and the interaction is a bit boring. The basic description on the side can appropriately thicken the content. In addition to the protagonist, I personally think that it is necessary to understand a suitable character to clarify the relationship between the protagonist and the grassroots.

It feels very good, with great quality and content, but I always feel that this is more like a popular science novel or a popular science game. There are too many descriptions about various characters or types, just objective narration, and not much about the plot. Moreover, I feel that there are very few descriptions of Red Alert, and there are more descriptions of other games. If you are familiar with these games, It definitely fits this novel, but the reason why I want to read this is to see Red Alert's violent troop flow, gun flow, and the plot of the apocalyptic wasteland. I can only say that this book is very good and full of content. The author really cares about it. As for the plot, at least I have read the first dozen chapters and I really have no opinion. It's not that the plot is not good, but there is too little ink in the plot. I don't know how to read it.

Brother, since there are so many elements, can you add the ra3 corona mod to it?

The first chapter has been revised, but it seems confusing.

Author, can you make a statement?

Yay! The character creation is excellent, the description of events is realistic, and the narrative rhythm is also very appropriate. It is the best Red Alert story I have ever read so far.

Can the author fix the bug in Red Alert 2 where the star rating of the briquette soldiers, briquette trucks, magneto-electric tanks, and phantom tanks became weaker?

Will the Red Alert 2nd generation pretentious car be released in the future?

Yay! I'm really looking forward to seeing more people in the future, how to explain those differences – it can't be an emergency every time, right?

Too much description. Don't care about what you know, don't care about what you don't know, it will only make people feel stupid

Beginner authors should write well. You need to persevere in the beginning. Your subject matter is quite good. You can write 2 million words.

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Can you write about summoning heroes? At least in the later stage, middle-level commanders can lead their troops to explore

Author, do you mind if I write you in?

I feel that the introduction unit takes up a lot of content, and it seems to be trying to make up for the word count.