The Son of the Internet Who Retreated from the City

After reading it, I will give you a recommendation ticket There are many advantages There are also many disadvantages The biggest disadvantage is that the author seems to be too happy in his own world. Maybe he can try to read his own book from the perspective of a reader. This is still the biggest and most serious problem for novice authors. This book seems to be written for myself. You can feel the author's enthusiasm, the broad world view, the detailed settings, and the fun ideas. But there are still not enough details and there are quite a few flaws. A bit of a running story. In general, he is like a person who is pretty good at writing articles and knows a little about novel routines, but he is still not very good at using them.

It would definitely be popular if it wasn't a supervisor! Come on!

I was tricked into taking a beating in the light novel section, thanks for clicking through. Work tags: fantasy, soft science fiction, apocalypse, youth comedy////Author tags: setting maniac, cute, omnivore, lover of beautiful girls