Desperate, I Don't Want to Travel Through Time

The author writes well and the subject matter is novel. Tiantian Konoha, Marvel, and Douluo all made me vomit after reading them. The key is that most of the authors' writings are unreliable. I hope the author can stick to it.

Author, I hope you can keep it up, please, I want to see the light, not the darkness in the novel, isn't reality dark enough? , I read the novel hoping that my spirit can be illuminated a little bit. Rather than continue to sink in the darkness.

I like the kindness of the protagonist. Actually, your novel is a bit lacking for me, but because of the kindness of the protagonist, I still fully subscribed to it. In this type of novel, the background world is inevitably biased toward darkness and even despair. But there is also light in the darkness, and no matter how desperate the world is, there will be people who can bring a glimmer of hope. Because there are so many rays of goodwill and someone is willing to lend a helping hand, it is real.

I have been reading it all the time, and it is rare to find a niche treasure novel that I like. I am afraid that the author is a eunuch! Let's talk about your views on the plot and the protagonist. The protagonist is just an ordinary person with normal outlook on life. Isn't it true that only a selfish white-eyed wolf who thinks about messing with others all day long is not a holy mother... The author dug holes in the early stage and left a lot of little tails. Do you still want to go back in the future? But now that the protagonist returns, he will be unparalleled.

The author of the last copy was completely ruined. The combat performance is completely copied from the game without any own understanding. The plot characters are also the same as NPCs.

This author doesn't know how to write without looking for the original plot text. He doesn't have any imagination or understanding of his own.

Are there any other similar novels that travel through weird and weird worlds?

The last one was written entirely for the game, without incorporating the world view at all. It was really speechless, and it was completely mindless to write a book.

It's boring. The protagonist is nothing special. He has no mental immunity, no foresight, and almost no communication with the system. The rewards are also unclear. Time travel is like a wheel. As soon as you come back, you have to go to the next one without even taking a breath. Basically, there are no major changes in the plot, just in the process, and it doesn't matter whether there is a protagonist or not. It doesn't matter that the protagonist is weak. He will encounter bosses wherever he goes. He has no ability to resist. He is confused and drifts with the crowd throughout the whole process. He is pitiful and weak in vigilance. He has no plan or strategy and has low mobility. He is no different from the NPCs in the plot. If you want to express the powerlessness of people under the grammatical worldview, then write original works. It is better to read the original works than to write like this.

After watching The Great Sword, let me tell you my feelings. The writing style is okay, and the description and narration are okay. But the characters and plot are too weak. I have never read weird comic stories like Uzumaki, so they are still attractive to me. Until Kuroshio was taken over by Emrakul, the writing was pretty good, because short plots do not need to structure the plot, and because the character descriptions in the unit form are also small, many things can be made up by the reader's imagination. However, as it goes on, the author's flaws in character portrayal and plot structure are getting bigger and bigger. First of all, let's talk about the protagonist. He enters the fishing village ignorantly and then abuses the divine blood, gets rid of the divine blood, and ends up with the human head balloon. The protagonist is very consistent with the process of an ordinary person struggling to survive and being distorted, but then things start to get weird. After being abandoned by his wife in the Balloon, his cynicism turned dark. When Frankenstein suddenly started to become upright, caring for his people, and guiding Frankenstein, it can be understood as the influence of growing up under the red flag. The strange thing is that in the end he went to the stake for a reasonable departure, and then made a wave of impassioned speeches like Joan of Arc and left the script. Then people worked together to overthrow the dynasty under this chicken blood. The twist was too blunt, but they still reluctantly accepted it. The protagonist in Blackpool is still very good, cautious, intelligent, and has obvious growth. The downfall is that after being transformed into the next script by Emrakul, his mentality suddenly changed back to before, being funny, out-of-touch, and nonsensical. It was as if all the previous growth had disappeared and he had become a middle-class character. Also, basically every chapter has a female character who falls in love with the protagonist inexplicably. The most speechless one is Da Jian. Teresa kisses the protagonist goodbye. In addition to the two fighting side by side, there are also some letters to communicate. Teresa falls in love with the protagonist, just like a Japanese harem drama. My feeling is that the template for the protagonist is an ordinary person ↣ an experienced investigator ↣ a dependent of Emrakul who is a chuunibyou ↣ a fearless victim of a chuunibyou. The further I look back, the more and more obvious the separation of the protagonist becomes. I feel that the author is not very young, and the occurrence, development and results of some changes are also taken for granted. The growth of the protagonist, especially the character arrangement, is very problematic. The above are all personal feelings, there will be certain deviations, for reference only. Maybe I prefer the kind of protagonist who makes a decision and then takes action. It is difficult to understand this kind of story of suddenly awakening human courage in the face of a big boss and then cheating and breaking through to hit HE. The author should also like JOJO, but JO In JO, the protagonist defeats those cheating bosses not only because of courage and belief, but also because of resourcefulness and calculation. It is not because you have enlightenment, which will bring about a good ending. Of course, it may be because the author likes to write it this way, and I will not comment too much. I hope the author will work hard, and I hope everyone will support the original version. Above.

Although the subject matter is good, it is too niche. People who like this subject are readers who read dark literature, so they will rush to the street. Change the character of the protagonist. It will not take long for Our Lady to live in this kind of world.

When writing a book in China, please have the most basic respect for the people's police

Let me summarize the book reviews for everyone. This author converted those horror comics into Chinese characters. To avoid being accused of plagiarism, he added a dispensable protagonist.

The first half of the book amazed me, but unfortunately the plot at the end was not that good. After reading the ending, it gave me emo. It's hard to come across this kind of book again.

Do you know? What I like are the first few copies. I have always been thinking about the protagonist returning to the world of human-headed balloons, and want to see what my daughter has become now. The protagonist in the early stage had goals and progress, but now the protagonist has nothing, only the same invincibility and various mix-ups. I thought you would continue writing, but I didn't know you would end it like this. To be honest, it's really sad. I really want to know the subsequent plot. In my opinion, it is better to have a broken hand than the ending. Completion means the end. And a broken chapter means that you just didn't write it, maybe you just forgot, maybe you didn't have time, and you may still have a chance to continue writing. The end is equivalent to the end, and now everything is too late. This is a novel that I used to like to read. After it ended, I still kept it on my bookshelf. I thought you might write a new work.

The subject matter is okay, but the police are replaced with police officers. It is too offensive. If it is put in a movie, there are not many times in a movie where the police are called police officers. If it is put in a novel, the author will check the frequency of these two words. It is too disrespectful to this profession.

When will it be Warhammer 40K's turn to make the protagonist a little happier >_<

Is the author from Tangshan? One bite at a time 🙃

Everything else is fine, except that there is a note on the left and a note on the right, which makes me annoyed when I look at it.

Your protagonist is either "ordinary people's helplessness" or stupider than ordinary people...

To be honest, it doesn't work, it's just like boiled water It is recommended to read the original work

I take back my previous comment, it's too poisonous. Miura-sensei, this is simply tarnishing the work "Legend of the Sword"

I haven't read it since I went into the abyss, and after looking at the catalog... It didn't find much appeal. I'd better prepare a new book... I'm still looking forward to your work, but this one really should be finished...

What kind of cows and horses are there in this world? !

Wasn't the author a gangster who used to be a social gangster?

The quality of this book has surpassed the average starting point, but the results are far from worthy of this quality. I hope the author can maintain the high quality until the end, and it can make waves 🪖

I want to know if the protagonist still doesn't take things related to gods to heart? It's not as good as the bloodletting in Mercenaries or the inexplicable empathy in The Demon's Awakening. There's really no growth at all.

This novel is okay in the early stage, but very toxic in the later stage. The main character is purely fw. After so many worlds, his character has not grown much. He has no ability, no ability, no strategy. He is always indecisive, with a mother's heart overflowing. Then he is abrupt and cold-blooded, depressed at every turn, and purely a camera. Pure fw that is manipulated and manipulated in an environment

The author is too miserable. His writing skills are obviously good, but after completing two million-word books, the level is still level one. I really admire the author's will. Can I support myself with the monthly royalties? 🥺

When will the author release a new book? It's been almost a month