My Comment Came True

I have finished reading the 6.1K words I have written so far and want to ask some questions. (The following is suspected of spoilers) Will the role of Ye Fan stay for a long time? After all, it is not stated clearly that he is a heinous villain. He caught the protagonist before and planned to kill him. He said that he wanted to return to his own world to avenge his senior brother. He caught the two daughters and only knocked them unconscious. Later, he fell ill and was killed by the protagonist. After taking away the body of a terminally ill person, he did not kill the original owner's soul, but only sealed it. But he said that as long as he found the secret of the protagonist, he could return to his own world. He was so sure. How did he know? Although his ability is A-level and his knowledge may be very broad, how does he know so much about the Space-Time Management Bureau? I seriously doubt the veracity of what he said. The main reason is that he kills the protagonist as soon as he appears and stands directly on the opposite side of the protagonist, which makes me feel disgusted with him, so I can't believe everything he says. Although he is not a heinous person, he does not look like someone who cares about other people's lives. Ye Fan is the leader of the Demon Cult. It seems that his original world may have been martial arts or immortals, so it is normal to have different concepts from modern people. Naturally, he will not care about the lives of others in a life-and-death fight. Ye Fan gives people a feeling of being in a gray area. The two characters currently appearing in the Time Management Bureau are quite interesting, a time and space administrator and a D-level orangutan combatant. When the protagonist took out the bone-eroding ecstasy nail given by Ye Fan and shot it at the combatant, and it was rebounded by the combatant's light shield, the combatant immediately ran over and grabbed the nail, causing his right hand to disappear. After that, he shouted to the protagonist not to litter with poisonous garbage, which would hurt innocent people. In Ye Fan's words, the orangutan warriors seemed not to be a good thing. They would harm humans in other planes. Moreover, he also said that the Space-Time Administration would capture people with time-space adaptors and brainwash them to become one of them. But at present, the two people from the Space-Time Administration camp are very good. The administrators are very interesting from the time they appear to the time they leave. When the combatants come to this world, they will remember that they cannot destroy things casually in this world. They will grab the poisonous hidden weapon at the expense of their own right hands and angrily scold the protagonist who throws the hidden weapon. It can only be said that unless what Ye Fan said is all true, and the author will add black information about the Space-Time Administration in later chapters, it does not seem to be a wise choice to be an enemy of the Space-Time Administration. After all, the Space-Time Administrator said that their duty is to stabilize the time and space in all planes and solve the people, things and things that cause chaos in time and space. The protagonist currently has no reason to cause chaos in time and space. The protagonist gives me a great impression, I like it very much. Facing Ye Fan who wanted to kill him, he immediately killed him when he got the chance. He also yelled angrily at a woman who violated his privacy (perhaps because he didn't like her), and then he grew up spiritually because of the protagonist's special ability and stopped pestering the protagonist. Later, I met Ye Fan by chance on the train, and after being pointed out the special characteristics of his two daughters, he and Ye Fan fought against the coming Space-Time Administration fighters on the condition that they would get a way to hide the special characteristics of their daughters afterwards. After the combatants forcibly brought poisonous hidden weapons and indirectly saved people who might drink water in the lower reaches of the river in the next three months, they chose to make another deal with Ye Fan, giving the combatants amnesia in exchange for him not being able to refuse Ye Fan's three requests. The protagonist did not know the toxicity of the concealed weapon in advance, and Ye Fan only said that it was a one-hit kill. The combatants bore the consequences of the protagonist's mistake in firing the concealed weapon, so he wanted to save the lives of the combatants. The number of words is still short. I really hope that the author will let the protagonist get more information later. After all, the characters currently speaking are all from their own perspective. I hope to get some third-party information. After all, isolated evidence cannot stand. Although the first impression of the Space-Time Management Bureau is very good on me, and Ye Fan's first impression is very bad, we still have to look at the problem rationally. Didn't the Time and Space Administrator give him a headset for communication? At least verify it. After all, the protagonist will definitely not give up his two daughters. If the Space and Time Management Bureau is really like Ye Fan said, he can only stand on its opposite side. However, if what Ye Fan said is true, the time and space administrator who contacted the protagonist may have kept an eye on it, lied to the protagonist, and then secretly targeted the protagonist's daughter. Of course this is just my personal guess. The reason why I say so much is because the daily life written by the author is so beautiful. The things mentioned above are all disruptive to the protagonist's daily life. Although the protagonist has to tell his parents his secret due to the sudden visit of his mother, they do not disturb the protagonist's daily life. The parents are quite happy to have two more granddaughters. Knowing that the protagonist is pretending to be a mother is not a big deal. There are also two acquaintances who know that he can do magic after being rescued by the protagonist (after all, you don't know when the special ability will be activated), and no normal person knows about it now. Having said so much, I just hope that the protagonist can not be bullied and live a warm daily life with his two daughters. But when I think about agreeing to Ye Fan's three requests, the first of which is to train the protagonist, and the two unknowns, I feel that I have gone too far. Finally, cheers to the author!

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After reading this. I found the authorship to be very complex. It's hard to figure out what the ingredients are, but I can only say that it contains a little bit.

From what I can see so far, a supporting character appears and says to the protagonist: "It's like this, you should be like this." Protagonist: So that's it. Then another supporting character came: "No, it's like this, you should be like this" The protagonist: "Oh! I understand"... Repeatedly, the protagonist trusts others too easily

This... I came in with a puzzled look on my face, and walked out with a confused look on my face. I was even dumbfounded.

This kind of art is too early for mankind.

Author, you are a bit outrageous! Short 60 chapters, so many elements If I hadn't been more experienced, I wouldn't have been able to read this novel

Very interesting and beautiful. Author, please give me more~Please give me more~

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After reading this book, I felt like I was back home

If the author wants to attract fans well, he should use less soul words and soul words. Most people really can't accept that stuff.

Write more about daily life with your daughter

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What the hell is the boss doing? The protagonist is so controlled by Ye Fan.

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Although I am a fun person, it would be pointless to force fun.

Chapter 6: Are the playgrounds turning a blind eye?

It's easy to write, and the main plot is a bit obvious 😭 It gives me a headache.

There is no one I can read, but I really want to read the plot behind it!