Pirate: Your Emperor Is Back!

This feels like a vest created by a master. The control of writing is very good. The specific content is not new, but overall the content is good and not outdated.

It's a bit passionate, but now it always feels like a suspense novel, and I don't even know where the pretense goes.

Is it necessary for everyone to regard him as an enemy? Not to mention that Akainu killed the navy and civilians, that was the navy's demon-slaying order that killed people. Sengoku sent him there because he knew Akainu was a talented person, but he didn't kill deserters on the battlefield? Seeing that the protagonist in these chapters regards the power of rock berry fruit as his enemy, he must have had to fight Akainu again before he felt this.

The author's writing skills are good, and it's a good book.

In the first twenty chapters, he brags about how powerful the protagonist is, but after chapter twenty, he is just a Cap and a half, and still thinks that he can subvert the world government.

The more I look at it, the more disappointed I become. This emperor is cheerful, approachable, and amiable. He always smiles when he sees him. Eight hundred years ago, he built a country with his mouth. His favorite thing in life is to smile lightly and pretend to be domineering, haha.

I thought he was a domineering character, but he turned out to be funny and peaceful. I thought he was invincible, but he turned out to be top-notch combat power. People who think they have normal IQ turn out to be mentally retarded. In the final analysis, they are selling sheep's heads and selling dog meat.

I don't understand what some people think. An emperor has to be cruel to be called an emperor... An emperor who sacrificed his life for his people still insists on being cruel.

I saw that the protagonist did not kill the Celestial Dragons. The previous chapters showed the tyranny of the emperor. The pirates who invaded the territory could be killed, but the Celestial Dragons who attacked the emperor could be spared. The protagonist is a time traveler, not an old antique left over from the pirate world. An emperor, that's it?

It is also in the top three of the new book list, and it is not even a bit different from the number one Pirates fan! The author is said to have strong writing skills, haha...

It's not enough. The current protagonist's combat power is not enough. If it is only on the same level as Whitebeard, it is too reluctant to compete with the World Government. The Yonko is not only because of his strength, but also because of his pirate group How much trouble can the protagonist cause by himself? It's amazing that there is only one more Yonko. How can the World Government really be unable to withstand it? Why, do you really think that the pirates are all in the same camp? Even if there is one more Golden Lion and Red Earl, these two peaks have the fighting power of the Four Emperors, right? Should he be caught or should he be caught. A country within the system blatantly beat up the national symbol, those Tianlong dogs. The government does not sanction you only because it is afraid of a lone Yonko who knows the exact location, not to mention the previous history. He will make a surprise attack and knock him down directly. The reason why Rayleigh is not involved is because Rayleigh is old and has stopped causing trouble. The protagonist looks like he is causing trouble So the protagonist's combat power must be increased, you can Put him on the same level as Im In addition, the character of the protagonist does feel a bit like Hokage Hashirama, but I hope he doesn't have Hashirama's thoughts. I hope he can add a bit of domineering as an emperor. He always looks like a good old man, which is quite boring Increase the combat power, go directly to the Red Earth Continent alone, meet with Im for an interview, and force everyone to talk about it. What is there to talk about with the navy, what is a soldier and polite, a waste of time You can add some original characters. Since it is not the original pirate history, it is okay to have a few more ruthless people in this country. You can set them as the descendants of the protagonist's original companions and find a stronger fruit to hang on them. They can be regarded as subordinates for the protagonist. An emperor always has his own plans. , Directly the protagonist brings people up and have a fight, which is called the war on the top At present, this book has some things, but the pirate theme is read by many people, but correspondingly, the things that can be written are almost the same. If it is still the kind of writing about pirate characters and collecting stamps, you still have to go through the plot slowly, so I am really not optimistic about it, and I am a bit immune By the way, I am talking about the refrigerator not cooling.

It can be seen that the author wanted to create a flesh-and-blood, emotional and majestic image of the emperor, but he went too far. He lost the majesty of the emperor and the humor was also embarrassing. The fundamental reason is that the notes are not deep enough and he must continue to work hard. In my opinion, an emperor should maintain absolute majesty. The way to express warmth can be a small condolence after harsh criticism, a ruthless attitude of fighting for the people alone, or an unintentional action, rather than a joke or a pretentious and humorous complaint.

Personal evaluation: High level, strong writing skills, the author can write an original book by himself, but the limitations of fan fiction are too great.

Follow-up reading is really important during the new book period. Whether there will be recommendations in the future has a lot to do with follow-up reading. If you are a book keeper, you can turn to the latest chapter every day. That will be a big help to Hongchen! Sorry to trouble you all, thank you Hongchen!

It's a no-brainer, and the yellow chicken is written in such a way that it stretches the crotch, and the style is so low.

Character is the biggest poisonous point. For an emperor, especially the founding emperor after many years of bloody battles, the character of the protagonist is too dramatic and looks very awkward. He has been dead for 800 years, not lived for 800 years. His behavior has a smell of decay.

The author writes very well. 😭😭😭😭I invested 5000 to support it

Everything is fine if you don't write about the country's roads. But once you write about the country's roads, it feels like you have the same amount of ink in your stomach as I do, and you still dare to try to write about how a country can develop. Have you read Volumes 1 and 2 of Capital? Have you read the so-called third volume written by Lenin? Have you read what Mao wrote? Why do you dare to write about the Four Seas Alliance as soon as you slap your butt? Can you justify it?

I read the introduction and wanted to ask, is it written about dying in battle at the beginning, and then being awakened from a deep sleep at the back? Also, do you still have a Devil Fruit? If you were still alive, why would Sand Crocodile appear? If you die, wake you up from your slumber? The introduction is completely bullshit.

The creativity is good, but the character descriptions are too lame. An emperor who shocked an era 800 years ago is like this? Combat capabilities are also unclear. What do you think of a yellow chicken? The ancient city of Shurima reappears at the moment of resurrection. Look at the protagonist again. Is 10,000 soldiers a lot? Did you rely on this to fight eight hundred years ago? And shocked an era? Also, according to the way the author writes it now, the sun disk may not be seen until the finale.

Find a more human-like one. . .

The protagonist of this article, Rowan, is based on Azir, the desert emperor of LOL, and his main skills can be referred to Azir. But the character of the protagonist is better than the ascended and resurrected Azir. From the plot of Sand Crocodile and Murloc, it can be seen that he is much more friendly to the people than Azir (the resurrected and ascended Azir mainly wants to restore the glory of Shurima. The existing Alabasta is much better than Shurima. ) The protagonist's personal strength should be unique and belongs to the kind that possesses both military and military skills (around 800) Personally, I feel that in terms of action and follow-up, he should be at the level of Yonko or pseudo-Yonko (currently, there is too little plot to reveal it) As for the ultimate move, the Shasha Fruit is relatively weak in terms of attack.) The supporting character Shasha Crocodile is given a lot of descriptions in the previous chapter. In the later stage, he should be convinced by his personality charm and become his subordinate (it is also convenient to improve the strength with the same fruit, Wageboy No. 1 Reservation 🤓) As for the heroine, I feel that the original one is not suitable, mainly because of the personality of the character (the protagonist is definitely there as the B-level emperor of the empire). Personally, I feel that it is best to have no heroine or an original heroine. If it is original, it can be a Celestial Dragon or a Fishman (the Celestial Dragon identity and bloodline are not bad, the protagonist Rowan will definitely go to Marijoa later, and the plot of the Fishman Island will be convenient) The above is my personal impression of the first nineteen chapters. I hope the author can stick to it. This book is generally very good. The character of the protagonist is clearly portrayed, and I hope it can continue to be so. PS: Author will update soon

It's so well written. The excellent time and background design makes the identity of the tsar fit very well with the Alabasta of Pirates. The logic is smooth and there is no sense of tearing. I look forward to the subsequent plot and I won't lose money on my investment 😏

The writing is not strong enough, and the protagonist does not look like an emperor (Tsar), but like a funny boy (Mundo). In addition, the protagonist's bragging is completely inconsistent with the described combat power. In other words, the protagonist is bragging, not really pretending, which gives people a strong sense of tearing.

This author reminds me of One Piece Code. The results are obviously good, but the eunuch is inexplicable.

I've been chasing you for so long, but you made me lose so completely, Zhuo

This is considered one of the ceilings for One Piece fans, but he is actually a eunuch?

Sweeping the grave, something must have happened to the author

Is my taste wrong? I think this book is very well written. Why did the author cut it? 🤔

The writing is good, I hope the author can do more 😁😁