Samsara Paradise: Vests Everywhere

As of now, there are countless minor flaws and one or two major flaws. In terms of horizontal comparison, it can be regarded as one of the better ones among reincarnation fans. It is just a bit short and procrastinating and has a lot of exclamation marks. If you read it without thinking, it is still okay.

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First of all, let's brag about the big boss who brings money to join the group and the backing of the future line. This setting is a huge cheat. It is no problem for the protagonist to have an SSS talent (the blind box next door also gives out blood). It is normal to open the back door and have privileges, not to mention the big roulette wheel. He has also made a career plan. He has a heaven-defying reincarnation career. Not only can he hoard resources, but the protagonist himself has resources. Others have mines, and the protagonist has a world. It can be said that the setting is full of golden fingers, but it can barely be explained. The setting of the vest is also quite interesting. Then it's time to complain, First, the writing and reading experience are average, some expressions are not clear, the whole article always feels like it does not read so smoothly, the perspective is fixed on the protagonist, which is understandable, but the observation of the protagonist through the game does not describe other characters, the environment, and the world. It can be said that 99% is the description of the protagonist. Even if the dialogue, fighting, etc., There is no description of the supporting characters other than their names, the supporting characters have become the same name. Forget about descriptions like shock, and it turns out to be a fan. I hope you can read the original version of the system language of Samsara Paradise, and don't make blind changes. After all, readers are used to the way of talking, data templates, etc. In Paradise, and if the author changes it, it feels a bit downgraded. . . Second, cheating, it goes without saying how big the protagonist's cheating is, but you can cheat it. I accept it. After all, the protagonist, but if you are a fan, you should still respect the original work. How many levels does Pipixiao have to have equipment that is immune to the dying state? You can cheat the protagonist in advance to get this item, but the level of the equipment cannot be lowered. After all, in this design of the equipment system, if a white equipment has the effect of the original blue equipment, it will break the equipment system. There are also so many coordinates for the protagonist, and we jointly developed several with the park and all of a sudden we had early-stage resources. Although the golden finger is so big, the protagonist is still poor and doesn't understand. Third, the plot, the old yb who cannot write about reincarnation, does not kill his sister but protects her. It is not unacceptable to kill the invincible stream all the way, but what the hell is this mission? Will this paradise issue missions? My wife is too boring

Don't write so much about the clone's experience of the world. In the last chapter, the main body becomes the clone or Su Xiao in the next chapter. It looks really awkward. Just keep writing about the main body's experience.

It's really difficult to read. First of all, the writing style is very fluffy. For example, on a trial island, in order to connect with the original work, the protagonist's own affairs are written in a very chronological manner. The adventure is not fully explored, and there is no sense of adventure at all. Even if the purpose of writing this scene is to obtain resources and a temporary mount, it is a little ups and downs, but I don't feel it at all. The writing can be interesting if it connects with it. The interaction with other characters in the original work is also very boring. It seems that everyone just says a few words along with the scene, which is equivalent to communication, and there is no sense of interaction. It belongs to the type of fan fiction that can be read, but only in a way that can be read. Anyway, let's continue and see who stopped mosquitoes for a year 😭

It's pretty cool, but the comments section is too harsh. I'm obviously just watching the fandom for fun, but I keep comparing them... I'm speechless.

I feel that the IQ of the supporting characters is not online. It is clear that Samsara Paradise is a cold-blooded novel (in the middle and later stages, it is all about Lao Yinbi), but it feels like this has become a normal different world travel. The main character's IQ is also not online (like a noob), and there is no Lao Yinbi feeling like Su Xiao. Moreover, this early setting is too outrageous. The strength comes too quickly. It feels very relaxed in the early stage. And Pig's Foot was a normal person before time travel. Even if the attributes are different, your combat strength cannot improve so quickly (it is said to be mirror training, but how can it be so outrageous? After a few trials, you can become a person who can kill the derivative world at will. Then the old yin in the later stage of Samsara Paradise is just 1 to 100)

A little tired. It wouldn't be the same as the original without the heroine. If you can't describe the mosquito fight, you can write some emotion. Moreover, I have never watched the previous anime (Pokemon, JoJo) and I am speechless. I hope the author will work hard and write better and better. Praise the sun☀️

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Come on, author. I read your Paradise of Reincarnation. I plan to subscribe to all of this book. Now I have more than 100 chapters. The author works hard to write 😁

Just read it, I'm looking forward to the author creating a new native world and power system

[Lin Jiu was cheated every day for no reason] Su Xiao: You glanced at me... Lin Jiu: Hey, why don't I have a large number of undercover accounts in other parks? Who is the murderer? The trumpet died so quickly without even letting me see his face! Su Xiao: This dad is destined to be with you... Lin Jiu: Which network cable did this wild dad crawl through? My trumpet is not that stupid to take the initiative to provoke the wild father! It's okay if you don't want this number! [One day Lin Jiu came to Su Xiao to complain] Lin Jiu: [deep resentment] Someone killed all the illegal accounts that I undercovered in other parks, and it was our reincarnation. Su Xiao: [Lighting up a cigarette] It's not surprising that people from the paradise would do this. Lin Jiu: The technique feels like that of the poor and crazy master of the Four Techniques! I can't beat him now, but if it's him in the future, I will definitely hack him to death! Su Xiao: [smoking a cigarette] Lin Jiu: [resentment deepens] There is also Hun Dan who deliberately transferred the cause and effect of the original sin object to me! Who are they? Su Xiao: Cough...[Choked] Lin Jiu: [looking at a certain method of destruction, silent] Su Xiao: I didn't expect your luck to be so wonderful. Lin Jiu: [withdrawing suspicion, vaguely feeling something is wrong but unable to explain]

It's getting worse and worse, copying and pasting the original work, the protagonist's abilities are very different from Bai Ye's, and the various clones are completely useless except for the union's clone, and they are a waste of resources. They have no characteristics at all. They become dual protagonists with Bai Ye, and they are useless except for the number of words.

Wenhe Smile

I can't stand it anymore, I'm so proud of myself, it's just a mess of words, I can't distinguish the main body of the clone, I can't distinguish the ability, I spent so many more resources than others (Su Xiao), but the performance is worse than others, it's very embarrassing. If you just write clones randomly, what's the use if luck can't be used and resources can't be used, only one Chamber of Commerce clone is useful, the others are pitfalls, what is your advantage? What are the advantages? You are just a lazy person shopping? What other advantages are there? Not to mention fighting. It takes a long time to describe a mob, but the boss just randomly clicks on skills? You have written so many skills, how many of them have you used? It's all fancy, with two skills and one technique, and the performance is too ordinary, with a lot of fighting history, and self-pleasure throughout. I really don't know what the use of writing that reincarnation disk is? The name is so big, but the result is the same as 💩

At the beginning, Samsara Pan boasted how awesome it was, and it was compared to the things in the Great World of Void and Chaos World, but in the end, Renpan lost a sword-playing profession, and its strength was not that good! I think it's okay to specialize in swordsmanship, but later on I started playing with fire and spear skills. If you want to use a left spear and a sword on the right, I think it's pretty cool, but in the end, everyone has their own way of playing with marksmanship and swordsmanship! The two are not as complementary as Su Xiao's physical skills and sword skills! The territory clone ability is said to provide resources, but in the end, except for the dispensable paradise coins provided by Dashius, the other clones are thrown out and ignored, and there is no priority. Each clone has its own thoughts and ideas. The protagonist has to beg and coax when asking for resources from his own clone, just like TM begging for food! Not to mention the sky disk, the ability to add luck is quite strong, but it turns out that adding so much luck is not enough for the clone, and sometimes it has to be reversed! It doesn't matter if the artifacts of the twins are not complementary to each other, they are directly offset! The inheritance profession of the human disk has squeezed out the sun, the territory has been divided into silence, and the sky disk has added loneliness! The summary is that the author just came up with it as he thought, without any planning at all!

The shocking return of Samsara Paradise

Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba World is followed by Jojo's Bizarre Adventure. If there are any other derivative worlds that are worth writing about, please bring them up and take a look.

Super fierce

This book has received mixed reviews. But I think this book is well written! First of all, the author's treatment of the character Song Jiang is novel and unique. This completely broke Song Jiang's previous style of obeying Tang Monk's advice. Tang Seng is not like before, always chatting with Lin Daiyu and not doing his job properly. Secondly, the description of the battle between Xiahou Dun and Xu Sanduo is extremely accurate and lifelike. Completely subverting Xu Sanduo's sinister XL image in our minds. Moreover, Xiahou Dun did not have a crush on Hua Qiangu from the beginning as in the original work, but only after experiencing Mei Changsu's transference and separation, sparks sparked with her. The logic of the plot becomes smooth and smooth, refreshing the readers. Finally, the storyline of this book is intricate, fascinating, and full of ups and downs, making you immersed in the story. For example, why did Duan Yu save the Haier brothers regardless of the danger to his own mother? Did Teletubbies implement a revenge plan against He-Man? Who caused the belly of Mr. Cang, the wife of Roaring Sky Dog? These questions have attracted the attention of readers. It is worth mentioning that the final fight plot between Zhu Bajie and Donald Duck is both unexpected and reasonable, and the open ending makes readers have endless yearning and reverie for the love song duet between Taishang Laojun and Marilyn Monroe. In particular, the atmosphere of vicissitudes of life in which Big Big Wolf misses Zhou Zhiruo in Qiu Ming Mountain, suddenly and vividly highlights the delicate flesh-and-blood world when Ren Woxing steals Huba, the sacred object of the Zhibo clan. The stand-up comedy session between Comrade Sha Ruijin and Chu Liuxiang in the book and the ingenious idea of ​​Mr. Bean visiting the thatched cottage three times and asking Charlotte to go together to save grandpa are also highlights! Finally, I copied this!

I've seen more than 900 of them, but I just don't like them. I know it's probably a newcomer, but the protagonist's system is too complicated. Think about how many things Su Xiao has? They are all things he uses, and then there are a lot of messy things on the protagonist. If it doesn't work, you can actually delegate it to those clones, like the mechanical manufacturing. Until now, there seems to be no finished product, and they can produce Apollo. Sorry, you haven't made any move at all. Your initial concept was that you didn't know if you could compete with other people's pharmacy, but you want him anyway, for example, to build a war machine or a fortress. Isn't it much more handsome than you looking like fighting monsters like this? You have to have the feeling of a boss, you are a boss yourself, and like the part about plundering faith, it is of no use except for a triggering task. Sometimes you are a bit like Su Xiao who wants to be domineering, and sometimes you want to preach and bewitch like a priest, and Although he is a master of techniques, the clone is still of no use, and it feels strange. Although it is given some resources, it feels useless. It is of no use to the protagonist. The development period is too long, and then it returns to the main body. Now it is a gun, and now it is a sword. How should I put it? It's okay, but can you give the clone a little more time to release? The Original Sin Red Lotus, in the early stage, was like a stand-in messenger, but in the end it had no sense of existence. In the later stage, it felt very ordinary, just an ordinary clone, and then it was the original world. Although I know that the level is still relatively low, I hope it can be written in a grander way? Or don't write so grandly and write in smaller letters, that is, you seem to see the whole world at a glance. You probably know that this world is quite powerful, but then your task is just to go to the village entrance to sell fish. Every time it feels like Daqin World, you do a favor and put it in My clone was rescued, hid for a few days, and then disappeared. It felt like you were just going on a trip. Although you are not required to kill kings and gods like the one in the later stage of Samsara Paradise, but if you said that fighting against a certain general, wouldn't it be better than fighting against a certain captain? I suggest that if the author sees it, I'm not talking about what he thinks. I'm just talking about these 900-odd pictures and some opinions after reading them.

Since the protagonist obtained the ability of clones, he has been talking about asking clones to provide resources. However, he has only seen half of it. There are quite a lot of clones. Except for Dashius from the Samsara Chamber of Commerce, he has not seen the resources provided at all. It feels like these clones are useless and they are kept being mentioned.

I slowly reunited my body in the shadows. When I raised my eyes, I saw a figure slowly falling down in front of me, and felt that I was also dissipating. I argued with the negotiation team from the Apocalypse Paradise on the opposite side - with so much time and space power, how can it be enough to exchange for only such a small amount of supplies? Wearing coarse clothes, I walked through the forest, trying my best to find raw materials for energy cubes for Pokémon. I punched again and again under the ancient tree. The rich wood element surrounded me, and my boxing skills seemed to have improved. I'm wielding a mining pickaxe in the mine - the main mission can be completed at any time, so it's better to save more supplies! In the next mission world, should you consider working as a bodyguard to earn some extra money... I polished each part, and a brand-new soldier quickly took shape in my hands. The melody of the parts was so beautiful that I could feel that the machine in front of me seemed to have life. I praise the sun. At this moment, the great sun is my highest and most firm belief. I am hiding in a different space, waiting for the next assassination opportunity. I and the control girls around me worked hard to assist the plot characters ahead. How much reward can I get for this treatment output? Suddenly, we were all shocked and looked up at the sky. It seemed that there were illusory threads coming out of ourselves, extending to infinite heights, extending to the metal array. A confused soul was wandering among us. It was me looking for the location of resurrection. Gungun has been handed over to Comrade Xiao Su, and the contents of the storage space have been transferred to Dasius through the contract. What else has been forgotten? Forget it, it doesn't matter anymore. (Purely a piece of imaginative entertainment, if you have a sense of déjà vu, don't doubt it, it's just a reference to that one)

In addition to the main body, the existing ability systems in the clones are: mechanical summoner Lan Jue, wood element boxer Qing, special clone Guren, Pokémon trainer Ye Zong, and Samsara Chamber of Commerce President Dashius. The avatars for which no information has been filled in yet include: Mechanic System·Machine User, Fire Mage·Xi, Space System Ability User·Yu, and Auxiliary System Ability User·Ming. If you have any ideas for skills and equipment, you can edit them here according to the skill and equipment template of Samsara Paradise.

What can I say about this book? It's just that it's weak in some places. There's too much content describing the protagonist and the cannon fodder. It's not as crisp and clear as Samsara Paradise. The abilities, systems, worlds, plots, etc. Are all okay, but there are no particularly outstanding highlights.

Making money + killing people

The gray gentleman with his waistcoat everywhere has been chopped up

It can be seen that the author wants to write a plot where the protagonist and Su Xiao work together in the same world, but it is really difficult to write, and it is difficult to allocate resources for becoming stronger. However, I think the original world can still be written in the same world.

Wow, 😭😭 Lin Jiu, you died so miserably! 😭😭 The seventh-level hunter died in the derivative world and has not been resurrected. He will be included in the Apocalypse Brain Blood Stasis List and be laughed at for several lifetimes 😭😭

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