My Mobile Phone Wants to Cultivate Immortality

😢 I would like to ask, is anyone watching? Leave a comment to give your opinion. I don't know if I can write this kind of article. It's my first time writing a book. If you like it, please support me.

I started the book at about the same time as you, with fewer words, and it was also deserted, with very little interaction.

Chapters 28 to 32 are more involved in politics. Two chapters have been deleted. So far, it is running smoothly. The big transition here is also because there are too many sensitive things. The background is changed here. If you have any questions, please let me know. It is my first time to write a book, and there are too many taboos on modern themes. If you write more than 18, it will be blocked 😭

Ranked 20th on the Xianxia newcomer list, is this a consolation prize?😰

I think the creativity is very good. And the poem in the first chapter is pretty smooth too! My first impression was that I was just relaxing on my mobile phone, and I was afraid it was a bit of a daydream. After reading a few chapters, it turned out to be about modern cultivation of immortality instead of time travel, and my interest was greatly increased. If you want to complain, firstly, the paragraphs are too long and very tiring to read. Secondly, what is the purpose of mentioning that old classmate? In the third real world, everyone suspects that there are too many refutation points, so it shouldn't be as free as writing about ancient times, right?

Xianxia wants to write about ancient times, but modern cultivators don't even want to click on it and take a look at it.