The Scientific Evolution of All Realms Starting from Dragon Ball

Let me give you a formal review. This book uses Dragon Ball technology to support your inner strength cultivation. If you want to take the path of collective ascension in a group, it is very well written and does not follow the script. The idea is very good, but combat power is a serious problem. But for now, the combat power is chaotic, and the strength structure system is unclear. It is extremely confusing. It is internal power, law, spiritual power, and the combat power of Dragon Ball. Although the author has determined the path to take, he still changed from internal power to law, and then started to build the world. Now the world line is getting more and more deviated. As far as I can see in the latest chapter, it is about to collapse. Unless the author can straighten out the ordering and gradation of the combat system such as rules, combat power, energy, etc., As well as the subsequent combat power levels of the book, it will start to collapse now. I don't even know how to write it. After finally pushing the plot to the Boss, it turns out that the protagonist has been trained to the point where he does not need to fight, and he can be killed with just one finger. All the foreshadowing made in the previous plot has become a decoration, and the character of the Boss itself is completely meaningless. Unless you create the plot, create the Boss, and create something completely different, the plot and stuck points that can be written later have already appeared, and it is difficult to solve. I hope some suggestions can help the author. I actually like this idea quite a bit, but now I'm worried that it won't go far and will turn into mere words, collapsing to the point where I can't stand up.

Why do you have to go to a world like Tianlong after you come out of Dragon Ball? Wouldn't it be better to practice in Dragon Ball for a few more years before leaving? Will strengthening meridians like Tianlongbabu have any impact on the world of high martial arts in the future? No one stipulates that the internal energy in all martial arts novels is the same. It may be completely different energies.

The most annoying thing is that people who were born in high latitudes have to go to low latitudes. It's like asking an authentic Chinese farmer to go to Africa to learn farming. It's nonsense.

I don't know why, but as soon as I heard about whether the system can take people, I didn't want to read it for a moment.

I can't help but feel disgusted when I see mother and daughter together. There is no lower limit to morality.

Rubbish, you can travel through the world, so don't follow the protagonist Tianlong and lick him. What benefits does Duan Yu give you? He kneels down and licks you as soon as he comes, and he gives you martial arts as a gift to women. . . .

Dragon Ball Wearing Dragon? Jiuding? Devouring the stars?      ！ Is this what you are wearing interesting?

Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was a science and technology text.

Why did you bring a few vases back to Dragon Ball after traveling to Tianlong? . . ? At first, I thought the direction you were writing was that the world absorbs knowledge and becomes stronger, and then after two chapters, it becomes a harem, with several people in it. . . . . It's still the kind of vase that disappears after two chapters. If you want to write a happy ending one day, your name may appear once. . . You need to have some emotional drama, at least there needs to be more than 20 chapters of foreshadowing. . . The time-travel novel becomes the stallion novel. .

It's awesome, but it does conform to the behavior of many normal people. As for why it's not in Dragon Ball,,,, the ordinary people in Dragon Ball are like that in the end.

In fact, whether to go to the martial arts world or not is a trivial matter. After all, each world has its own advantages, but what makes people sad is that the advantages are not grasped. For example, the training methods in the Dragon Ball world are rough in a nutshell, while the martial arts training methods are relatively sophisticated, and the martial arts moves can be mastered to a level that is close to the Tao. The pig's feet written by the author are even more unintelligent. First of all, when he was playing Dragon Ball, he never considered using Dragon Ball to improve his qualifications. What about Broly's bloodline, Frieza's talent, Buu's abilities and qualifications, etc. Secondly, it is said that there is a similar innate Tao body, why is the speed of progress still so slow? In addition, he actually came up with the idea of ​​killing Wu Yazi once and then using the Shenlong first and then the Immortal Bean. What kind of weird idea is this? Let's not talk about whether this operation is very funny. Let's just say that while we are afraid of losing combat power, we are not afraid of wasting Shenlong, which makes people feel speechless.

I haven't read it yet, but this introduction is poisonous

The previous chapter had a very decent style, but suddenly it changed in Chapter 23. I was always confused and felt that the style of the painting had suddenly changed.

This writing is useless and not enjoyable at all.

Scientific evolution, which of your worlds is more scientific?

He's a big stallion in the harem. If you like him, you can stay. If you don't, there's no need to waste your time.

Coming from Shensan, I felt chilled after watching this

It's really disgusting. You know that the monkey will turn into a giant ape when it sees the full moon, but you don't take off its tail first 🙂, and then you are sad and scared later. Why don't you be disgusted to death?

I don't like Coiling Dragon, Jiuding, and Swallowing. None of them made me finish reading the public chapters.

The novel in the name of Dragon Ball is written in a mess. In a world with high demons and low demons, the physical constants may be different. What do you learn when you travel to the past? If you learn how to swim in the water, can you fly in the sky? It is also scientifically analyzed

It's okay, after all, Dragon Ball's combat performance collapsed. Super Saiyans can explode stars, but they can't withstand birth, old age, sickness, and death. Even the God of Destruction seems to be replaced by old age and death. In comparison, the internal force system of martial arts itself originated from the Taoist Qi refining technique of Huang Lao. It pursues immortality, detachment and freedom. The martial arts, fairy or fantasy system goes up step by step until the heaven and earth decay but I am immortal. It is countless times stronger than the Dragon Ball system. Although Longzhu seems to be very strong in terms of combat power, its weaknesses are too obvious. It focuses on the growth of energy, but there is no way to become stronger in terms of body and soul. I guess all the attacks on the soul may not be able to be blocked.

Haha😃 I didn't expect that the protagonist would like to be a minotaur talent everywhere!

After looking at the table of contents, the author is a true fan of Jiuding. . .

One chapter a month, that's awesome

The Eight Parts of Demi-Gods and Dragons were badly written, too many people wrote them