Reborn: Everything Goes My Way

Are you sure this is what it means to have everything go smoothly? You break up with your girlfriend the moment you get her, you leave your best buddies immediately to prevent them from getting hurt, and then you lead them to their deaths? I don't understand what this means to have everything go smoothly?

Looks good. Keep it up!

Sorry, I didn't check the category when I was reading. It was okay at first, but it would be great if the superpowers were uncontrollable and there was a switch so I could control what changed and what didn't. Then I looked further and saw a police station... Wait, superpowers everywhere! I checked the category again, and okay, I was wrong. I don't like urban novels with superpowers; they look weird. It's not my type.

You were writing something perfectly fine, but you had to make it all a mess; it just started turning into a ghost story.

The idea seemed great at first, but then... Nothing happened.

The black courtyard house said: "Silly Zhu, don't worry, my wife is your wife too... Sorry, wrong place."

The cheat system is good, but the writing is poor and it's hard to connect with the characters.