Senior Brother Deyun

I originally read other Deyunshe novels and they all said this book was good. , Come and take a look, hey, the update is discontinued! There are hundreds of chapters at first glance, just take a look, okay, this person set up a man who is more of a disciple than a disciple. He helped Lao Guo when he was at his lowest, and he was actually ranked ninth in his generation. He even licked Yue Yunpeng when he first came up.

It is recommended that you check out FeiLu's next door. There is a book called "Entertainment, Me, Mr. Deyunda" and read some things written about cross talk in it. Although it later became a daily routine in the entertainment industry, the previous part was really beautiful.

What can I say, I usually listen to a lot of cross talk, but I haven't read the latest chapters. I just swiped them directly. I have a small suggestion. I understand that cross talk performances are indispensable. Let's simplify it a little. Chapters 5 and 6 of Goodfellas are all cross talk that I have seen. As for the latest chapter, I recognize the cross talk of the protagonist, and the cross talk jokes of the supporting characters are also detailed. Isn't it a bit too much?

Idiom Solitaire now! ! I'll go first. Do whatever you want, take it.

Li Dan is talented but not virtuous. The couple are both pro-Japanese elements, and no one is selling goods on the live broadcast to criticize fans. The ad also insults women.

Author, you always copy the lines in whole paragraphs and just change the names. I really can't stand it. Most of those who can read this book have listened to Deyun Club cross talk more. Some of the jokes are so familiar that they are so familiar. You haven't changed much. When it comes to the performance chapter, you just skip it. It has no impact at all. What's the point? You might as well come up with the plot yourself.

It's a lot better than the previous cross talk book, especially the description of the characters, it's amazing!

It's so funny. Do you think celebrities are all fools? With live streaming, the profit is beyond your imagination. Wei Ya's annual income is nearly 10 billion, which is evident from the tax penalty. Is it a good thing to be a celebrity?

Author, you are not from the north at all. Do you know what man means? The two of them are either a generation apart or a generation apart in age. Oh my god, Zhang Er and the young class leader call each other man, who is the man? They are brothers, as the saying goes in the north. Never make such a low-level mistake.

What kind of bloody poisonous weed😅 The rich second-generation protagonist has to kneel down and lick Lao Guo. He relies on what others can figure out later to give advice to his brothers. His talents and creations all rely on plagiarism. His acting skills are too poor to act in movies. He wanted to find a pure girlfriend but ended up having sex with a chicken. . .

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I feel that you have gone into a misunderstanding. The actors in Deyun Club respect Guo Degang to the point of being afraid or pretending to love him. First, they are masters and apprentices, and then they are employees. That is, they are all holding the bowl given by Guo Degang and waiting for his salary. There are also examples of master-disciple relationships in reality. There is no master-disciple relationship or status like that of Deyun Club. Don't say that. Traditional opera and martial arts, which are more traditional than cross talk, do not have this kind of master-student relationship. People say that master-student is like father and son. Which father-son relationship is like that of Deyun Club? So I always looked at this book and felt uncomfortable. Since it is a novel, should I write it more happily and make the master-student relationship more commonplace, especially the protagonist's further relationship, which can be said to be that of son and apprentice!

Character Building If you have a character you want to appear in this book, please write down the name, personality, gender and background of the character. I will watch them one by one and add them to the book.

I beg the author to stop creating his own cross talk. It gave me goosebumps, but the rest is still good.

I saw that guy without eyes, 88

I beg everyone to read it on time every day. Recommendations are based on reading and collection. I know many people like to keep books and it is a pleasure to read them in one sitting. But I also implore the bosses to give Momo Mo a chance, read it every day and support Mo Mo Mo. Mo Mo Mo hereby assures all bosses that as long as Mo Mo Mo is in the recommended position for a day, Mo Mo Mo will write a book seriously, reduce the frequency of code words and ponder the cross talk jokes, as well as the plot in the book, which will definitely make everyone enjoy it.

This is so broken 😅

The writing is really good, and it is a very obvious improvement compared to the previous book. This kind of writing is just right, and it accurately touches what everyone likes to read. It is difficult to keep this pace without becoming popular.

Seriously, don't change your cross talk all the time. You've made a good cross talk look ridiculous. Is Song Dandan like Xiaowanzi? You can delete it, but don't change it!

This is the wrong time for you. Yue Yunpeng and Sun Yue partnered up in 2010, and they became popular very quickly. It was 2013 when the first batch of students were admitted to Jiuzi Science. How did the protagonist become a disciple of Jiuzike? I have followed Lao Guo since I was a child, and the normal character must be cloud. Look at Tao Yang, he is even younger than Guo Qilin.

There are a lot of typos, people's names are often wrong, and it's really tiring to read. There is too much nonsense and it is a bit long-winded.

The writing is good, but I don't know why. After the heroine who gave the umbrella to the woman came out, I suddenly lost interest in reading it. It felt very strange. I don't know why.

It should be Chapter 291. The number of chapters after Chapter 285 is wrong.

I feel like I have been less diligent recently.

It should be Chapter 336, right?

Is there something wrong with the number of newly released chapters?

Give the author some suggestions. When you write a book, just write it well and don't mix too much with your inner thoughts, okay? Many chapters seem to be your complaints... People who read the book are happy and comfortable. Not many people want to know what you think. Just like a movie, don't always think about what lens and language to use to preach and express. Not many people can really understand it, most of them just want to have fun watching it.