The Development of a Mixed Martial Arts Empress

Forcibly lowering the protagonist's IQ for the sake of embarrassing scenes

I just want to say that God Gu Wenhuang always treats people with sincerity. When will the Immortal Dance Sword Technique appear? Ming Hai Gui Yuan Jin, Hao Xing Gui Liu, Xiaoyao Wu De Gong, Vertical and Horizontal Nine Characters Technique, Poetry Immortal Sword Preface, Order Sword Surround, Huan Yu Edict Sky Divine Scroll, Always the Emperor of Miao Territory, Jingtian, I don't feel good The protagonist can appear in Confucianism, Check and Balance Code, Seamless, Shen Confucian Xuanzhang The Emperor's Journey to Heaven, The Uncertain Three Wonders, The Gentleman's Style, etc.

I have read something similar, the martial arts Three Kingdoms Thunderbolt Golden Light on Feilu. Unfortunately, the most exciting part is the eunuch. I hope this one will not be the same.

These pictures about Que Zhou are really bad. Where did you, Que Zhou, get the thousands of years of martial arts experience from the 108 eminent monks? Selfless Sanskrit requires King Bone Purple Gold Beryllium, but how can I activate it? In the original Que Zhou, the Tian Clan's physical body couldn't stand the power and thinking ability of the 108 eminent monks of great wisdom. Now you are even worse than the original Que Zhou. It's really not as good as your writing about Emperor Wen in the early and middle stages. At that time, you wrote that the protagonist practiced and returned to the underworld and finally found a breakthrough master to rebuild his skills. The setting I wrote at that time seems to have been forgotten now, and all kinds of martial arts are added to the protagonist. It's getting boring.

Great Wisdom·Quaizhou and a sail to cross - "If you convince me with reason, I will return with reason; If you want to defeat it with force, then Kuaizhou can only resist it with force." -Poem title: After thousands of years of practice together, Quezhou has a sail.              ， - Martial Arts: The Three Enlightenments of Bodhi: Bodhi Empty Mirror•Bodhi Mirror, The Four Upright Vajras: Vajra Prajna, Deep Wrath, See all Dharmas, and observe the sky at ease The Five Interests of Maha: People return to their old age, the path of swords is suffering from illness, The path of blood is full of dust of death, the path of blood is sealed, the path of fire is for practicing Shura,                        •     ：     ：     ：          Overcome the Five Interests•Concentrate the Four Righteousness•Return to the Three Enlightenment•Sattva and the Twelve Evils are Empty The ultimate move: The six paths are destroyed•Thousands of demons surrender•Tathagata's Forbidden Sword•Dream Bubble

When you are making calculations, it almost fills the entire Central Plains with an aura of stupidity.

After saying the important things three times, use the name of this vest when using the vest. Don't use that embarrassing name Xue Qianye again. And the poem number is strong. Big brother needs to be strong. The key points are marked. It needs to be tested.

Seeing that the biggest failure in Chapter 70 is that the villain never has an IQ, in order to explain why the villain has no IQ, a villain is added. He is from a powerful family and controls the government, so he has no natural enemies. Anyway, I am awesome. I am more powerful than you. I have the background and I can use my brain. Brother, you are not the only one with the background. How is it possible that everyone is afraid of you? I'm not afraid of you. What should I do with people of the same level? I don't need Ji. I don't need force or IQ. I want famous teachers and resources. I trained Tuo Xiang. Even the eldest prince and the second prince also forcibly reduced their intelligence. The protagonist has an IQ. If you want to say that you can have strong force without IQ, then I have nothing to say. If you want to say that the ancients have no knowledge, so their IQ is not high, then I have nothing to say.

Now, I thought the protagonist had a gender change, but he turned out to be a man. Unfortunately, the character didn't have the protagonist's name. Is he really just a tool? They are all Jin Guang martial arts! I want to see Pili's magical skills: Seven Tribulations of the Fantasy World, Demon Black Sky, Shennong Glazed Skill, Eighth Level Magical Power, Heavenly Sword but Not Heaven. . .

The book is a good book, but in the past few dozen chapters, the author Kavin has suddenly lost track of how to write. It feels like he is writing whatever comes to mind. There is a sense of disconnect between the previous chapter and the next. For example, the previous Flying Waterfall Palm, Pure Yang Palm, and the latest chapter's Infinite Transformation. They are all used suddenly by the protagonist, with no source and no training process.

I originally thought that Confucianism and Mohism should have sects in every dynasty, but the latest chapters make people feel that they are mainly in the Tang Dynasty. If we divide the power according to the dynasty of the plot, Confucianism and Mohism should be in Qin, and Buddhism and Demonism should be in Tang Dynasty. Also, these chapters are very stiff.

Reading the full text, I feel like I am writing about Jinguang and Pili. Among similar texts, this one can be regarded as an above-average one. It was a major drawback in the early ten chapters, but after getting through this period, it can be said that whether it is the logical nature of the story, or the arrangement of the protagonist's martial arts growth in the plot, the strategic layout can be said to have almost reached the pinnacle of similar novels. Among them, the chapters compiled by Emperor Wen are the best, and they have some of the elegance of the original work. But in the later stage, I don't know whether the author was influenced by real-life reasons or because he lacked control over the full text. There was a slight collapse in the later stages, but overall it was pretty good. I hope that the author can continue his efforts, show the level of writing books in the mid-term, and create excellent works. Come on! ! !

Don't the male protagonists even have character cards?

I have an idea here. I will accept another apprentice and let him complete the casting of the heart. Only after Mo Canli and Xue Qianye die will the rats dare to move. Only in this way will King Beijing have a chance to express himself and grow up. Die with the identity of Mo Cangli and accidentally reveal it to the rats and King Beijing. This way Emperor Tang can hide it. There is also a backup option. If one day, he loses control (people's minds are so clear-eyed that they want to die), someone can come out to clean up the mess.

Painting a tiger cannot be the opposite of a dog, nor can it give the flavor of a puppet show. It is a forced imitation.

Should the protagonist practice pulse cleaning double volume?

I feel that the so-called aristocratic family is really bullshit. It is written like the ultimate big bos. You wrote Yuan Tiangang to hang out with a few second-generation subordinates. You yourself wrote that Yuan Tiangang can stargaze. But such an expert must have attained true cultivation or is with the emperor. Moreover, in dozens of pictures, the protagonist is almost drowned by a wave of calculations. I have seen more than 200 chapters where the protagonist does not even know who is planning the plot. So don't you feel embarrassed that the protagonist you wrote looks like a wise man?

In the future, just use whatever name you use for your vest. Don't use your real name. It's very embarrassing. When you use Wenhuang's vest, use Wenhuang's name. Then when you recite the poem number, if you use Ren Piaomiao, you will call it Ren Piaomiao. When you read Wenhuang, use the name of Wenhuang. When you use the professor's name, call the professor's name.

This... Sword Twelve can't kill a grandmaster. Isn't it too low?

Although Xue Qianye is smart, he miscalculated one thing. Maybe he is also a part of history. The person who really changed history is Yi Xiaochuan. Maybe both of them are part of the real history. The Confucian and Mohist families are destined to break out of civil strife. The next step is to guide the Confucian and Mohist families to intervene in the martial arts affairs and let them break up in this matter The Confucian family died Xue Qianhan and the Mohist family died Juzi Xue Qianye completed the heart-forging process for Wu Zhao and took the initiative to seek death The death of Juzi was done by the family to break up the Confucian-Mokist alliance. Too big If both sides cooperate at the same time, they can destroy almost every country, so they need to check and balance each other Xue Qianye knows that he is dead before a Confucian civil war breaks out, so as to solve the problem of Confucianism's lack of support. When countries need Confucianism, they will never let Confucianism completely decline. It is his self-confidence The author sees this and replies to me. Have you not seen this?

To be honest, just reading these few chapters about Tianzhu, I know that the author is on the line of Thunderbolt's Xenoverse. But I really don't want the author to write like this, because after reading so many books, I've seen that it's easier to write about the Thunderbolts: Xenoverse. The classic main and branch plots of dozens of Pili dramas are all one book. How many or dozens of chapters can the author write? I'm talking about writing something about Jin Guang in Zongwu. Just use a few Pili and Xian Xia Feng Wu Xue to show off. Don't touch the peak line of Jin Guang and Pili classics. It will be like a tiger, and it will be like a dog.

Not enough😭

The writing is okay, but there are many characters, so many of them have not appeared.

After reading Chapter 14, I gave up, the progress was too fast, and the feelings were too abrupt.

The author has opened a new book, Floating Life and Chaos Wu

The name of the author, I remember there was a book in the past called Ancient Sword Taichu

It seems quite interesting at first, but the more you write in the back, the more confusing it becomes, and it's so messy that I'm not interested anymore.

It's like Wanlang eating soil.

It feels like no one can kill the protagonist!

There are so many words about water that I can use force to solve, but I have to use wisdom and the length will be extended. . . . Boring