The Naruto System in Versatile Mage

What the hell? Garbage garbage garbage

Versatile Mage fan writing about Naruto is a big deal, okay? If you use such strange ninjutsu, won't you be targeted by the Holy City and the Tribunal? You must know that the entire story of Versatile Mage is promoted by the Holy City and the Tribunal. Even the high-level mage Qin Yu'er will take action in the Holy City and the Inquisition. I don't think your threat is less than a disaster victim. Don't say such nonsense that the Holy City doesn't notice you, you are simply lying to yourself. It can be said that without the Holy City and the Inquisition Court, the full-time mage would not have had the later Ancient King (Zhan Kong) and Salang (Ye Chang Wentai's wife). Therefore, the entire full-time mage is behind the promotion of the Holy City and the Inquisition. They also set back the human strength of the entire full-time mage by an unknown number of years (when the ancient king fully cultivated the Forbidden Curse before his death, he was still an emperor after his death. You must know that an ordinary emperor in Mo Fan's era could not be solved by fully cultivating the Forbidden Curse). This is enough to show the power of the Holy City and the Inquisition. I have always said that the Holy City and the Inquisition are not to praise them for being very strong (although they are indeed very strong), but the main point is that the world of full-time mages is not that tolerant. You can use fire magic to use ninjutsu like Chenghao Fireball, which is not very exciting, but you use Sharingan Senjutsu or something like that at the beginning, which is very exciting. If it is not appropriate to write a development story about a full-time mage in which the protagonist is invincible, then it would be more reasonable to skip the development period, protect your own strength (at least super level), and then use the Sharingan Senjutsu, so that you don't have to follow the protagonist all the time and can develop other branches, and it doesn't look like the original work. This book is quite good. Some books are so awkward that they force a person into the protagonist's group and even make the protagonist call him "big brother". I am speechless. (The Holy City is very strong. It can be said that 40% of the combat power of mankind belongs to the Holy City. Even if Mo Fan, the Holy Blower, could only defeat one archangel with all his strength, not to mention there are seven in total (although some are not fully developed, but after retreating There are more than seven of them). The fact that there are good and bad people in the Holy City does not mean that the Holy City is bad. To say that they suppress the development of the world of full-time mages should be controlled by the gods of chaos behind the scenes) (Recommended book: Full-time Mage skips the development period from the undead to the emperor and saves women)

I just like Naruto or wizard novels. I enjoy reading the various escape techniques and witchcraft.

Doesn't anyone care about the male protagonist's seal? The character forcibly subdues his wits. The male protagonist is also a gangster. Someone was beaten up at the party. That's the routine of urban novels. Crimes are committed in the imperial capital. The male protagonist has been staying in the military area and has no enemies. He is messed with as soon as he comes out. The character image is also weird. There are also some settings that are vague and unclear. It is purely a white novel. It is so embarrassing, embarrassing from beginning to end. Personal opinion, don't spray, don't spray🇨🇳🇨🇳🇨🇳

I got high blood pressure straight away after seeing Chapter 254. Tam, in order to open the dimensional door, you added a pair of rookies to follow the protagonist into Shennongjia. It was fine if the protagonist wasn't careful. Didn't Hua Zhanhong think about it when he made the arrangement? The protagonist's strength is beyond the Forbidden Curse, and he has to take a group of mid-level people on an adventure. The one named Zhang on the road is so obviously problematic that no one suspects it. She is so pure and brainless. I didn't say anything when you wrote that the heroine was pushed by the clone. I really can't stand the lack of logic in your book. Author, have you read the book you wrote? Don't you feel that there is something wrong with your writing? How can I continue to write such illogical things?

It feels like Naruto has not reached the early stage of opening Gundam, and Madara and Hashirama have not appeared in the early stage, and the combat power is not as good as that of the full-timer. The monsters that the full-timer Mo Fan fights every time are so big, and the monsters he fights in the demon form are all mythical monsters. Councilor Su, who is at the peak of the super level, can defeat the black dragon.

The book is about to be signed and is currently under production contract. If you want to invest, you can get ready to start.

I haven't read it, but I know from the title and introduction that this book has a lot of poisonous points (personal opinion). The Three Body Technique has little to do with the various types of magic in Versatile Mage. If you write about the Naruto system in Versatile Master, you might as well write about the Devil Fruit system in Versatile Master! The light system corresponds to flash, the fire system corresponds to burning, the ice system corresponds to freezing, the thunder system corresponds to thunder, the shadow corresponds to shadow, and the dimension corresponds to the space fruits of the gate fruit series. Then find a way to eliminate or reduce the side effects of sea water. Isn't this better than the Naruto system?

There are two chapters every day. You don't have to worry about interruptions. The author has enough manuscripts here, so I hope you can save them and give me some recommendations. Thank you very much.

This is a full-time mage fanfic, not Naruto. It doesn't even write what type the protagonist is and just uses Naruto's chakra instead. Why don't you just write Naruto? Why else would you write a full-time mage fanfic?

When I saw Mu Ningxue kissing the protagonist, I instantly didn't want to watch it anymore

Long live the single heroine! As the heir to the military leader, having many female protagonists has a bad influence and does not meet actual needs. The military leader is the representative of a country and must be a symbol. Furthermore, since we can't have more female protagonists, we can't have too many ambiguous plots, and try not to appear as a scumbag who is carefree and abandons others who appear to be devoted (personally, I feel that Mo Fan doesn't like it in terms of relationships). This is my first book review, don't be surprised if you don't like it.

Forgot. . . . It's disgusting to tear down Mo Fan's wife again🙂🙂

Gunshou's grandson actually used the power of Naruto to dominate. The entire age range.

The male protagonist didn't say anything about his views, but the clone almost pushed his own sister

Everything in Naruto is Japanese, and we Chinese just hate the Japanese.

For ninjutsu, fire, wind, water, thunder, and earth will be awakened, and then the attributes will be fused to become the blood successor limit. Is this how the blood successor will be eliminated?

I hope the heroine has Ai Tutu's childlike face and big breasts

From chapter 40 onwards, I was confused. What situation is it talking about? A photo of you kissing someone can tell a lot of things. Could it be yzdp.

I don't know where to start complaining. There are so many poisonous points. There is a soul in the body in the early stage. I won't say anything. No matter which stage you fight monsters, you have to be beaten first before you start serious. There is no real character. Your identity cannot be exposed. Can't you become an honorary member? The Chinese language that appeared out of nowhere... And the part in the self-narration, are you talking about a 10-year-old child, at most an intermediate level, who broke free from the shackles of a forbidden spell in anger? When the government started to deal with the child's heart, wasn't it because Su Lu wanted to mess with Austin? Why did he become an official and act as a drug guide? Can you read the original work before writing? What troubles me the most is that the protagonist is still a child after more than 200 chapters. Is he really a eunuch?

Niu Touwen, being bullied by his own clone, disgusting