In Marvel: The Alliance Card-Drawing Master

When I saw in the introduction that the drawn hero was out of control and had to be killed once to control it, I knew I was going to fight.

It seems a bit strange, but actually the author is a pure behind-the-scenes person. This book is not too bad. It gives the hero meaning but the writing is not good. Every character feels weird. The protagonist doesn't feel involved and it's not that exciting. You can give the hero's abilities to the plot characters. It's all the poisonous points of fan fiction. It's fun but not at all. Everyone's understanding of League of Legends Chronicles is different every year. What you wrote is different from what I understand, and it feels very fragmented when I read it.

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Some suggestions The recent update is a bit uncomfortable. There are too many plots in the original work. More than 80% of the people who read this book have watched the Marvel movies. The fandom theme itself is more or less based on the popularity of the original work If you want to take care of readers who have not seen the movie, you don't have to go. Watch the movie again, which is more detailed than what is mentioned here, and The movie is definitely more exciting and more in-depth than the novel. I feel that it is much simpler than the original. It was originally a fan plot, and the world view does not need to be conceived. Now the plot is copied directly. Although the author said that he filled in some of his own understanding, as a reader, after reading it, I think it is no different from the original plot... I I feel like the author shouldn't be too relaxed about a plot like this with two chapters a day. There is no interesting content. Why do you say that the content is watery? It is completely unnecessary content I have seen the movie and I don't need you to tell it again. I always need to talk about the changes in the world due to the arrival of the protagonist, not just changing a few dispensable dialogues Just like Loki appears, Escape, Hill shoots, it can be brushed off in one stroke. As long as the last braised egg appears and says the war has begun, you will all know what is going on And Coulson recalls the Black Widow. My God, you describe it so carefully. From the plot to the dialogue, you even described Coulson's expression through his heart. It is very detailed... But... Is it useful? What did you change? What did you add to your understanding? You expressed Colson's attitude while waiting for the call through psychological description. Is this what you said and added your own understanding? I don't understand, I really don't understand. Now I'm writing about Black Widow looking for the Hulk. You have to include the little scene where the little girl deceives Banner. It's very detailed... But... Is it useful? Who are you writing the fanfic for? Aren't you just for Marvel fans? I'm a Marvel fan, haven't I read the original work? I won't tell you whether your paid chapters are so good or not. Let me go ahead and tell you, you can't finish the scene of Black Widow looking for Banner in one day? It can't be more difficult to describe the original work than the original plot, right? Especially since you have barely changed the plot of the original work, and you have to write just a few minutes of the movie for two days? Water is fine, no one is short of that little money, but if you have water, can you update it more? The original plot is lost in one day of updating, and the rest is all original plot. The most outrageous thing is that you can't finish a few minutes of the original plot in one day. I'm so drunk The good news is that it's almost over. The next capture of Loki can't be the original plot. Galen has to participate, right? Let me give you a suggestion, if you don't want to destroy the original plot and want to make Garen transparent, you can save everything in the original plot I feel like I'm going to die, but I really hope you understand that what I want to see is the protagonist and the people of Valoran. If the original plot has a role in advancing the protagonist and the main line, you can write it. However, if the original plot has nothing to do with the advancement of the main line, such as Coulson recalling Natasha and Natasha asking Banner, try to pass it off in one go. It's too watery! You are such a bad guy, you have to write 100,000 words for the original plot of Avengers 1 You have to be able to update more than 10,000 words a day, you are okay, it is short and watery, I can't accept it I give you a suggestion, it depends on you whether you accept it, I will watch it for two days, anyway, I have watched this kind of movie more than ten times, I don't want to spend money to watch the text version of the movie plot

The plot is still watchable, but these foreigners can't take one bite at a time, or anything else. It's really embarrassing to watch.

It's not me, DIO, who's wrong, it's my world that's wrong 😂

The station has arrived, feel free to invest.

Why should we say goodbye when we meet solitary figures in the rivers and lakes?😤

Do you think Bobby can pick up Mjolnir?

I haven't decided on a hero card yet, which is a drawback.