The Military Training Started, and My Skills Impressed the Whole Audience.

Read the latest chapter in one go and say a few words. So far, it looks good on the whole, but there are two obvious bugs and a few things to pay attention to. I hope the author will pay more attention to it: Bug 1: In the bed check incident before military training, other people in the same dormitory did not see Lin Chen prove his innocence, and they can still pass it off. However, the most core contradiction was that everyone in the student union witnessed Lin Chen's topless body, and a plot conflict broke out between the two parties. Moreover, the male student union vice president and a few petty female seniors who are the main targets of the conflict will definitely find trouble later. This is the most direct logical conflict with the military training plot such as Lin Chen's rise to the school's beauty list and the whole school's fame. Even if there is a conflict in the dance club later and some student union members are resolved, the time and role conflicts are still inconsistent. It is recommended to delete this conflict, especially the plot of self-identification as a man, and replace it with appearing as a male sister, or hiding directly in the bathroom, using a male voice to respond that it is convenient, etc., Although it reduces the excitement of the plot, but it is convenient and logically consistent. bug2: Lin Chen's relationship problems with his roommates. The friendship between people starts from scratch and gradually deepens through experiencing various events together. Although one of the four major factors in life is that they went to school together, they were all freshmen and had only known each other for a few days. It was impossible for Lin Chen and his roommates to establish such a deep relationship, let alone keeping such a huge secret, which was very abrupt and unreasonable. Misfortune started with Xiao Qiang, brothers were still fighting, not to mention the strangers they had just met, not to mention, Lin Chen had many things to do, and did not have time to get along with his roommates, nor did he give much benefits to his roommates. I hope the author can polish this plot, such as adding a big character Before school, friends in a certain online circle, or classmates, worked together to get admitted to a university, majored in a major, and happened to be assigned to the same class, and then negotiated with the dormitory manager to transfer to the same dormitory. The probability is smaller, and it is better than a logic bug. Notes: 1. Economic pitfalls. For the massive funds brought by the ten-fold cashback card, it is best to attach a reasonable source through the system, just like a sports car, even if the description is a little vague. After all, reality does not require logic, but novels do. There is still a long plot line in the later stage. If this kind of basic layout is not handled well, the story will easily collapse as it is written. You can learn from the settings of other books of the same type, such as directly constructing an overseas consortium through the system, or the special legacy of a deceased rich man. 2. Ethical pitfalls. It is best to arrange a way out for the deformed family relationship between Lin Chen and Lin Sisi in advance. Whether it is reorganizing the family setting or one of them being adopted, there must be a hidden plot line to make the relationship between the two ethical. Otherwise, the more sadomasochistic it is, the more poisonous it will be in the future, and it will jump around the edge of 404. 3. Villain pit, this is mainly for the appearance and disappearance of some villains. For example, the group of gangsters disappeared after being beaten by Lin Chen, and there was also the incident of being questioned by classmates after the official start of school. If there was a quarrel between people, both parties must provide emotional feedback. Remember to fill in these pitfalls, otherwise the conflict will appear empty and anticlimactic. The above is my personal opinion. I hope the author will adopt it. I also hope this work will get better and better. Come on!

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The author fights for the bayonet 😌

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As a medical student, I need to learn more about body odor. This thing is commonly referred to as hormones. Especially girls' body odor is secreted by estrogen, which is excreted with urine, urine! Urine!

Internet pictures, intrusion and deletion

I was confused when I saw the title of the book. Wearing women's clothes in military training? Don't women usually wear skirts, stockings and wigs? Can military training do this?

That's it

I'm not saying that this latest chapter was written directly back ten years. After all, in this era of developed Internet, if there is such a senior sister, hiding behind and filming some short videos for her, not only this senior sister, but also this school will probably become famous. And which school student would dare to be so arrogant now? Even if they are rich and powerful, few people dare to fight against the entire network. Once it is photographed and posted on the Internet and circulated, and other unknown people who have been suppressed usually come out to speak out, this person is immediately finished. It will even be used as an example when similar incidents occur in the future. That's all. In today's Internet society, I feel outrageous about this person whose arrogance has not been exposed for so long. Such a plot seems as if social development has been set back for more than ten years.

The plot of pantyhose is so disgusting. When did pantyhose become a sexual connotation? It's just a way of wearing clothes

It is really obscene for a male protagonist to use his female identity to enter girls' dormitories, women's toilets, and women's locker rooms to pick up girls.

1.8M women's clothing? ? ? Simply......

How to say it! The purpose of reading cross-dressing novels is not to pervert, but to watch the protagonist use her female identity to gain female privileges, and then use such privileges to achieve things that boys cannot do. Visiting the female dormitory once or twice may satisfy the voyeuristic desire, but more than that will not be enough. There are also using female identities to pick up girls. To be honest, It's quite disgusting. A brief intimate contact may make people excited, but if it is too much, it will feel vulgar. It gives people the impression that the author thinks boys are vulgar. I hope the author is sure, not to mention Wei Guangzheng, at least not to write about men in such a bad way. After all, there are many men who read books.

Can you still wear women's clothing and enter the boys' dormitory? Do you really think others are blind? Or is it that makeup has reached the point where you can't tell the difference between men and women?

Withdraw, withdraw, I looked at ten pictures and I was afraid that if I read any more, my heart would become distorted.

Woo woo woo

Just change your skin and go to another website.

I suspect that the male protagonist's sister also has a system, and her task is to force her brother to wear women's clothing 🙂

Does anyone have any recommendations for transformation articles? Thanks

It's already a 404 and I still want money. I'm obsessed with money.

Don't get me wrong, I really didn't want to flirt with you.

Since changing the title of the book. Betting is much smoother. "Military training begins, I can beat the whole audience"

It's a pity that this good book is unfinished. Is there anyone out there who can continue it?

I have no choice but to look at the good books and see them disappear. Hey😂

Indeed It would be great if it was a transformation story The male protagonist's personality was changed like that by his sister. Later he not only got used to it but also liked this feeling. How should I put it, the male protagonist is a bit perverted in his heart. Everything else is pretty good. Good luck, author.

Does anyone have any recommendations for novels about orthopedics?

I'm afraid the author didn't go to school,,,,

Suddenly I saw a survey on the reading experience of female novels. After thinking about it, I didn't go to the female channel area. The books on the bookshelf, Lin Yuan Xing and Nomenclature of the Night, didn't look like them. This couldn't be the one hanging in the female channel area, right?

No, I just deposited the money today, I'm going to see it, my God 😭😭😭😭

Once you enter women's clothing, you are as deep as the sea. From now on, your moral integrity is a passer-by.