Wumo Guyan

The setting written in big letters by the author is very exciting! Keep up the good work💪💪💪Looking forward to updates!!!

Please comment. You can complain or correct me. If you don't understand the settings, you can also ask.

I have previously written a worldview timeline for this book. In addition to this book, there is another book that starts from the beginning. It is also a worldview, but the timeline is set very early. I also tried my best to change my style to be more like a fairy tale. However, I am only a college student, so I may get stuck after dozens of chapters, and my coding is slow, so I am definitely not as good as a professional author. No matter the setting or plot. Now I will work hard to write this book, and I will go as far as I can. (Of course, if someone is curious, you can post it and come to Kangkang in one day, just one chapter)

Have you written down a training system? If you write later, I think you seem to be a newcomer, so it will be difficult to attract the reader's attention 😅 and make you feel a bit confused Also, the interlude in Chapter 7 caught me off guard and was a bit nonsensical. I felt that it should be introduced naturally! The protagonist's background has been available for several chapters, why haven't I written it yet! (My humble opinion, a gentleman may listen or not) 😁😁😁

Why doesn't the author update anymore? 😰😰😰

I suggest that the author should check it every time after coding. Otherwise, due to negligence, the sentences will not flow smoothly and there will be many typos. In addition, the fighting scenes are well written. It is best to indicate who said it for many words. Let the characters be visualized and use more beautiful words to modify them, which will be more perfect. 😁😁😁For example: The villain saves the heart of a gentleman Consciousness Nishimiya will take over Lori today