A World in Three Leaves

The premise is interesting, but the introduction to the power system at the beginning is too complex and concentrated, making it too tedious to read and easily discouraging readers from the start. Another major drawback is that the protagonist frequently mumbles long monologues, which significantly disrupts the reading experience. These long monologues would be better if they were spoken directly as inner thoughts, but simply mumbling them out is downright inhuman.

This type likes modern themes but dislikes fantasy/otherworld themes.

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