Legend of the Stars

There is a feeling of bucking the trend. Not bad.

If possible later, I can make a nice book cover 😏

Welcome all the beauties to enjoy your faces and read books. Please reply if you comment on each other 🤝😁😁😁😁

The plot progress is a bit slow, so I suggest you delete some redundant parts. The rest of the description of life is quite happy.

I feel like the beginning is a bit long-winded, and if I don't have the patience, I'll jump to the third golden chapter, but the content quality is pretty good.

Today I suddenly realized that my paragraphs did not seem to be suitable for the mobile phone version. I spent nearly two hours revising all the paragraphs, so they should be smoother! Let's spoil the story in advance, the little sp's cool article will be online soon.

The writing style is good, and the subject matter is okay. However, the paragraphs in the first chapter are a bit speechless. The dense text in such a long paragraph is not friendly to casual readers. It can be divided into some parts. Come on, I will save it first.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~