Becoming a Trainer Isn’t Hard at All

Well! My Doron Mecia... Driving away this poisonous spot from your own Pokémon is no less than deliberately giving Yellow Fur the opportunity to let him green you, alas!

Let me share my feelings after seeing the latest chapter. The setting is not bad, but the plot just jumps around and the direction is not set. Author, you have to grasp a point to write, instead of not writing at all and starting a new one to continue writing. In addition, the pace is a bit slow. It has been more than 40 chapters and it has only been more than a month? Some places are completely unnecessary. The title of the book is Trainer, but the protagonist is still a high school student. There are two settings such as secret realms and making videos, but they are not focused on writing. Your introduction said that the style is daily, but I see that you always want to lean in some dark directions. There is nothing wrong with the male protagonist, but the heroine's character performance is too outstanding, and I don't feel that there is much growth. However, the idea of ​​elf fighting is really good. All in all, this book still has potential. Come on, write it and reward you.

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It's obvious that most of the book's perspective is written from Lin Shi's point of view. This made me assume the role of Lin Shi when reading the book, and I couldn't assume the role of Su Yunxi at all. If I were to take on the role of Su Yunxi, it would be a cool story. I don't need training for exams, battles, and training. I just need to be able to show off. Anyway, I have a golden finger. The result is that the more I watch, the angrier I get. First of all, the battle, the first time, Lin Shi fought, and then everyone was surprised that Su Yunxi actually played against the talent. It's like when you go to take an exam, Wu Yutong asks someone to give you simulation questions, while Su Yunxi directly asks someone to take the exam for you. Then there was the second battle with Wu Yutong. He said that he wanted to impress her. What are you looking at? Do you want to cheat? Do you have fighting talent? Then, there is the Vine Snake. To be honest, the trainer it recognizes is Su Yunxi or Lin Shi. In other words, without Lin Shi's presence, would Vinevine Snake still be Su Yunxi's elf? You must know that Vinevine Snake would abandon a trainer who doesn't recognize it. Furthermore, the training method was formulated by Lin Shi. Energy cube, taught by Lin Shi. Oh, that's okay, just look for a teacher. But I can't stand Jason Su Yunxi's laziness at all. You didn't study well in the school you got into because of your bad grades due to bad luck, but you are still quite proud of being 100 points behind the second to last? What are you proud of, your waste material? Training still requires people to push you, even if it's a day or two, it's just the beginning after all, but if it's done too often, it's probably too much. Also, the system. To be honest, at first I didn't have much feeling about the heroine being able to use the hero's golden finger, but the Pokémon given by the system belongs to Su Yunxi? I'm afraid you don't have that serious illness. And Lin Shi, do you plan to stay in the heroine's body for the rest of your life? Is there any way to get a new body without asking the system? Then drive away Duolong. Well, you are right to be afraid of ghosts. Furthermore, Lin Shi helped Su Yunxi show off and establish his character. I still charge money for the call, brother.

After reading more than 160 chapters, I just want to say that there will be no consequences if I go to the girls' dormitory to voyeurize and apply hypnosis??? I was really convinced by the author's imagination and felt instantly uncomfortable.

When I saw Chapter 47, I wanted to ask a question, why do you need to have two souls in one body and a fw to hold you back? I didn't see any advantages of the original owner. Apart from being a beautiful girl with small breasts, she had no advantages at all. She also took up time during the day. She said she wanted to be a trainer without any effort at all. She couldn't take the elves for a run in the morning. She just complained. When she was in high school, she didn't memorize the attribute restraints. I felt suffocated and drunk. .

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To be honest, the writing is okay, and there are various jokes. It will be fun to understand it, but to be honest, there are a lot of problems. First of all, the male protagonist is a game champion, which means there is no Pokémon world, but after time travel, he will make energy cubes and train elves. Let's say that playing games and actual training are different. Let's not talk about this for now. The early writing of the heroine was a bit too crappy. In fact, it would have been better if the male protagonist directly took over the body or the female protagonist gained the memory of the male protagonist. I originally thought that the two souls in one body would be like Yu-Gi-Oh, with a sudden change in the painting style. Moreover, the two of them spit out a lot of bad words. At least the heroine should be more elegant. It feels like it is enough for one person to be a complainer, or the heroine is weak and the hero is arrogant, and the style of the character has changed. The various villains are a bit witty, including the two student council presidents. One managed 20,000 people and had no emotional intelligence at all but attacked him without meeting him. The student council president of one of the top three universities in the country failed to win over, even though he knew that he was related to the champion and the president. It can be seen that the author wants to write in a funny way in the middle and later stages. People cannot die and can live if they inflate. However, there are many places that are weird. For example, the male and female protagonists of your one body and two souls are together. It is okay for two people to fall in love, but it is a bit strange to be in the same body. How can you let them After they separated, I confessed that I still have a best friend who likes the female protagonist. The male protagonist wants to hide his identity and let many people know that he is related to the female protagonist. Various main tasks and side tasks are coming all at once. The dark matter has not been collected yet. He has to help his best friend find her father. He has entered another copy before he started searching. Moreover, it is obvious that the male protagonist should have a high level of personality, but several major events have no significant effect. He feels that his IQ is not enough, and in the later period, there are more and more mythical beasts, and one was even taken away by a passerby. And Lin Ge, who was originally thought to be a friend and foe like Xiao Mao Qinglu, turned out to be the opposite. What can I say, the author should keep working hard.

I have read Chapter 154 so far Is there a sticky plot after the male and female protagonists confirm their relationship? I feel a little uncomfortable watching it I read the heroine in the character relationship I thought this was a serious plot with no emotional line and started to follow it The previous parts should be quite to my liking. I can also get all kinds of jokes from the author The relationship between man and woman will be confirmed later I specially quit to take a look It's a double heroine Then isn't this just trying to sell a dog's meat over someone else's head? . . Leave a post first. I hope that after the author writes, some kind people can give me some knowledge Is it because the plot later gave the male protagonist a body and made them happy? If so, I will give my spiritual blessing and I will not read the article.