National Online Games: the Start Is Full of Anti-A

It's really well written, just don't mess it up

Since the game is aimed at mages, why is there a mage profession?

Chapter 5: The player's HP is 4 times that of the boss. Are you sure it's not a mob? ? ? If the template grows higher than the boss, can it still be called a boss?

Not limited to mobile games, PC games, ps5, ns, etc. Are all acceptable. One person recommends a movie that he thinks is good, regardless of genre. Just like it repeatedly. (ps: The author can use it for reference)

The plot is blunt, cheats are added indiscriminately, and the game has been waiting for the protagonist to travel for ten years.

This introduction is very discouraging! What is the declining Master? Is it that kind of useless profession where, except for the protagonist, everything else is balanced? Low attack, low defense, slow speed, and high difficulty!

Is there any connection between the looting talent and the mage? Why is it said that this talent is particularly suitable for the mage? Or should I say that this talent cannot be used when choosing warriors.

Since you want to play counter-injury, why should you play a mage? Warriors have high defense, thick blood, and taunt. Paladins can add buffs, resist damage, and add some blood. Even if they are not good, priests can do it. The ultra-high burst of a single target makes people uncomfortable in seconds, and the group AOE painting is also uncomfortable.

I've just read a few chapters. The Goldfinger and anti-armor settings are quite interesting. It's just that there are too many black mages in the beginning. It's not annoying to write too many. I don't write about the pros and cons of the profession in detail. There is no point in thinking about black magic. Anyway, mages are bad. I don't mention where they are bad, so forget about it. The fact that a mage is bad has nothing to do with the protagonist, and it has nothing to do with the readers. But can you not over-describe it? I feel that it would be wise to read one chapter and write about the mage being bad without mentioning the bad parts.

The author is great, there is a bug. The protagonist's level is low in the fourth chapter. Can't he level up if he piles up anti-armor? I mentioned earlier that I am a master mage, and then the supporting character said that if I know how to play the mage, I can level up the hedgehog very quickly, so why the hell do you insist on standing still and using anti-armor output? How can you tell that you are a master mage?

It feels like if you really want to play a mage, you will choose defense or life at the beginning. After all, you can only attack your target with anti-armor, and relying on anti-armor damage to hit people requires too much blood. In the later stage, you still need to invest a lot of resources to build up blood, which is not suitable at all. The anti-armor splash damage and such high blood volume coming out later are really too high. If you play like this, the protagonist will take the mage route. After accumulating blood and anti-armor, he will add some magic attacks to the protagonist. According to the thinking of the protagonist of this book, he does not want to play a mage at all, but simply makes such a trick. Hey, I'm a mage. I have a lot of blood and can deal damage in return. I just don't learn spells, I just play and show off in front of others. It's really unreasonable.

Although the writing is a bit weak, the data is a mess, and the setting is inconsistent, I still read it because the plot design is very interesting. I hope to maintain this advantage while improving the shortcomings. In terms of writing, don't break sentences randomly and have fewer typos; the data panel has appeared several times in the previous chapters and has never appeared again. Now, I don't even know the basic rules of the game. You said before that level 1 gives 6 attribute points. According to this statement, level 60 only has 354 attribute points. One loot column of the early looting talent can add 100 attributes, and the next two columns are 200 points each, for a total of 700 attribute points. What is this concept? Your level 30 attributes are 700 points more than others at the same level? 346 Points more than level 60 naked equipment? You said you chose anti-A? Choose bounce? A small skill can kill others in seconds. Do you think the casting speed is meaningful? Why don't you fix such an obvious setting bug quickly?

I can't understand why a mage is needed. I thought the protagonist wanted to use a show operation to show that the mage is always your boss. But in the end, he uses more healing skills, so he might as well choose a priest!

If you want a game name, it can be used by both men and women, so you can choose it as appropriate.

The title of the book "Toxic Bar" does not match the content at all. Except for using it to counter damage at the beginning, it has no use at all.

After reading ten chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. Although the subject matter is interesting, the writing style is too weak. One of the most obvious characteristics is random sentence fragmentation. Farewell!

How should I put it, it is a standard online game article. Just see it as a normal cool article. But the interaction between the first few players is really toxic. Write less toxic characters who are not villains. The viewing experience will be very poor. In addition, you have to mention the word count again from time to time, making the readers repeat this toxic point in their minds. Then after reading the previous chapters, I found that the players who interacted with the protagonist were just tools. Apart from their mutual needs, there were basically no details of personal emotions. At most, they just laid a foreshadowing and left a hidden line for this character. Sorry, I can't stand it anymore.

This protagonist has traveled through time, and is still a protagonist who is content with the status quo, has no independent opinions, and does whatever he wants. No matter how good your talent is, no matter how good your skills are, what's the use?

It's a eunuch. I'm as uncomfortable as eating shit when I'm fully booked. I've blocked this author. It's disgusting.

Deliberately going against the grain? But I feel like you can't write it

(I still gave 100 points before I could comment:) Personally, I feel like this novel is putting the cart before the horse. It's like a person who doesn't like durian can try to eat durian cake and it tastes good. It's a novel experience. However, this book adds too much durian, and the durian is not made into paste and then decorated with flowers. He directly put a durian on the cake, still unpeeled 🙂🙂🙂 Just take the anti-armor, it's understandable The second time you didn't choose percentage recovery, you chose bounce. Okay, it will be useful later, I understand, it's no problem if I choose it. 🙂🙂 Don't choose the skill to explode the sky? Are you really just eating the durian without peeling it? It would be better to just make durian. It would be better if you write that he is a warrior. Of course this metaphor may not be very appropriate. But the novel itself is still okay.

You just like bad money that much, right? Just finish it

Why am I always playing with NPCs, but I always have NPC tasks without teammates. After traveling for a long time, it feels like a single-player game

After reading the introduction, I have no desire to read it. Shouldn't the human shield have thick blood? How can I drop blood for a human shield? If there are no warriors, who would play the role of a human shield? I'm sick.

You're going to die if you support me. I recommended you to my friend some time ago. You're so disappointing.

The plot is pretty good, at least in my opinion. But there are some places that are not smooth, and you often need to figure it out yourself, and you also need to figure out the errors in the data. I hope the author can write better and better.

The eunuch story should be pretty good if it can be finished.

Not bad, keep up the good work🤓

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The protagonist is very suitable to be a war machine. It has ranged retaliation damage. All the passive skills point to defense, life, and life recovery. The active skill point is a charge, and then the skill of continuous blood recovery. I mainly support two professions, one is the archer army and the priest army. The protagonist just rushes into the enemy pile. Then the archers focus on the protagonist, and the priest team restores blood to the archers. It is directly like a meat grinder.