This Navy Is a Bit Strong

I can't write it anymore, how can I write it later?

I would like to make a few suggestions. The first is the ordering of chapters. It is best to add a serial number like Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 before the title of each chapter. Then the number of words in each chapter should be kept at least 1,800 words. The description techniques are okay after looking at them. It is easier to write a rough outline before writing. Come on, the most important thing is to persist (heartfelt advice from someone who has experienced it)