Bloomer of the Coiling Dragon

Can you create a QQ fan group so that a group of panlong enthusiasts can discuss together hahahaha

Come on, support Panlong fans!

The pace feels good so far, the author keeps up the good work! But Bloomer can't follow his brother's path, and how can Light and Dark develop? I feel that most fans want to write about the controller. If the light and darkness are combined with Tai Chi, it will be a bit dramatic and cliche. A small suggestion is to broaden the light. Light in our general sense is visible light. After broadening its wavelength, we can have infrared ultraviolet and various rays and radio waves, which can kill people invisible. We can also use radio to do things, and then expand to control material waves, and then manipulate matter, reshape the material world, and become the controller... Or switch from various waves to studying brain wave signals, and then create consciousness, minor in life rules and then create thinking life... (Thinking around, in case it is useful 😃) Big cheers to the author! Keep it up!

Nothing to say. Fans who see Panlong will save it first.

The main character's training rules are still rules. Do you need a destiny talent or something?

I think Delin can be saved, as long as the plot is arranged well. I felt very sorry for Panlong when I first watched it!

Just don't be a eunuch. There are still very few Panlong fans nowadays.

The segment is too long and I can't read it.

Segmentation Segmentation😓😆😆😆

Harmful! Shennong tasted the herbs and said goodbye

Pay attention to the paragraphs. A long series will be too long and will easily discourage readers.

In fact, it is a bug about Olivia refining the dark godhead. If the soul mutates, the light god clone can continue to understand the dark law. If the Dzogchen is completed in the future, or when the mixed law reaches the power of will, then refining the dark godhead will have no impact.

There are too many plots in the Warcraft Mountains, so you can just use Spring and Autumn Writing

At present, it is better not to meddle in other people's affairs with the protagonist's strength. Don't talk about regrets. There are no regrets. Just say that although it is a novel, it is best to be more realistic. If you don't have the strength, be more stable. Forcing it will only look like a licker.

You can make a cover, something nicer. Let readers who haven't read it be attracted by the cover. The cover is a good bonus.

Why are there so few updates later?

In the world of Panlong, talent and bloodline are the most important thing. The protagonist needs talent but not talent, and bloodline but not bloodline. There are only a few chapters in the original book, and it is because of Wharton. If there is no golden finger, then in the future, he will have to rely on his brother to refine his godhead. Otherwise, the holy realm may not be a problem, but becoming a lower god may have to be calculated on the basis of ten thousand years.

Here's a suggestion: Use your name less often.

It doesn't look that smooth, and I can't tell what's wrong with it.