Awakening the Evasion Talent from the Start

I'm not exaggerating, without a cheat code like Deep Blue that allows for rapid development, unless the protagonist's cultivation talent is truly off the charts, a protagonist from a poor background simply cannot keep up with the progress of geniuses of the same age.

This evasion talent is really interesting. In the early stages, it might only dodge some attacks, but later on, it makes you completely immune to all attacks. You can even add the ability to transcend the three realms and escape the five elements!

Since dodging is a cheat code, then let's make every sword strike a life-or-death blow; that would be more exciting and visually appealing.

Well, I still prefer the lone wolf style. Teaming up and developing teammates like this feels a bit lacking, and it doesn't feel exciting, especially the dialogue, which is a bit stiff. If the author wants to go in this direction, they could take a look.

I've always wanted to ask, if the male protagonist's soul transmigrates and he sleeps with a girl, is it the male protagonist's or the original body's owner's? Who cheats on whom?

Chapter 21 left me completely bewildered. In the middle of the night, someone knocked on everyone's door, saying a powerful monster had arrived. As a result, after only a few exchanges with the monster, the protagonist killed it instantly with a single strike. Why did you wake everyone up?

Suddenly there's a new female lead, and she's only been introduced a short time ago. All that previous description of the two main characters is just a joke. And don't tell me you're going to add them all up later.

Has the author never contacted your editor?

In the beginning of this book, there didn't seem to be any concept of a "peak" in minor realms; it only appeared when breaking through to a major realm. Now you're introducing a "peak" in the "early stage of the Acquired Realm"? Does that mean starting from the Innate Realm, there would be "peak of the early stage of the Innate Realm," "mid-stage of the half-step Innate Realm," and then…

If you can't rewrite the romance, then don't write it randomly, okay? A female character who just appeared has become the female lead? What a waste of my book coins.