Binding Luck: I Am Immortal in the Reincarnation Game

I wonder if the protagonist's helper in the second level can be a man and a therapist, because I guess the author wants to write that the second one is a woman.

So far, my evaluation is, Three Stars of Creativity ⭐⭐⭐: There are very few people writing on this subject, but in the form of a game, it is still feasible to let the characters complete the creative point of resource competition between countries. Two stars for writing⭐⭐: It basically meets the minimum requirements of a writer and can express things clearly, but it is not very good. The specific manifestation is that the atmosphere is not rendered well. When the protagonist is in trouble, the audience can hardly feel the tense atmosphere of the live broadcast off-screen rendering. On the one hand, it is not refreshing enough and it is difficult to increase the word count. Two stars for the plot ⭐⭐: The overly facial-looking characters and the sub-invincible protagonist lead to a lackluster plot. So far, I haven't found any shining chapters, and it's basically a complete novel that is just for beginners. Character creation: Two stars ⭐⭐ is almost equal to none. The supporting characters in the whole text are basically stereotyped, and the male and female protagonists are even less portrayed. Maybe this is also related to the author's lack of writing power ——————————The basic idea of ​​this book There are problems along the way. First of all, the title of the book is destined to attract a large part of the audience who have watched the TV series The Immortal You. For a TV series that focuses on empathy and abuse, Xiaobai and Shuangwen's writing style is destined to displease this group of readers. Secondly, as a cool article, there are also big problems with the layout of the cool points in this article. Since he chose the form of live broadcast, it was destined to be the biggest source of excitement in this article in the early stage. However, except for some messages from viewers in the live broadcast room and messages from viewers from other countries, the author has basically not described real life, such as some group portraits after the rewards were distributed, outside discussions about the protagonist, etc. There are too many things to write about. Also, the author described a lot of things that were unnecessary to describe. For example, in the scene in One Piece when the Merry sank, the heroine shed tears and the audience outside the scene felt sad. These all drag down this article. The excitement must come from comparison. If the enemy is not miserable enough, then our good life will be unhappy and meaningless. The reason why there are so few reviews for your book is because you are too weak to be happy, and the plot advances too fast. Readers are not happy enough, and naturally they will not have expectations for the plot. Review rates are important for a book in its early stages. After the author of this article has raised the limit on the protagonist's immortality, this article can basically only be written as an invincible article. Do not forcibly weaken the protagonist, otherwise this part of the audience who came for immortality will also be lost. This article will basically be declared complete. In the later period, the contradictions between real forces and the expansion of the map beyond the mainland, as well as the war against the civilization of the game organizer, will also be a big attraction. Although the probability of this article becoming popular is very low, my suggestion is that the author continues writing and can accumulate something through this article. Because when you lose your character, you are actually consuming your creativity. You can learn something seriously and accumulate something. Use these things towards something you really want to write about. The two books by the author tj are both popular on the market with novice themes. It proves that the author wants to write a good product book, so it is very, very, very important to think carefully, because this kind of routine writing basically does not require any talent. A good idea and a set of effective templates will make the writing very smooth. So be sure to delve into these cool writing routines, come on

This is a new book for a newcomer. This is the first time the author has signed a contract. The previous content may be relatively immature and the writing is not very good, but I will find problems little by little and continue to make progress. I hope everyone can accompany this book to the end. I have seen many comments in the book review area, some directly criticizing and some encouraging. Today I also saw a book friend give me a very pertinent evaluation and suggestions, which gave me a certain direction. I am very grateful. No matter what, I hope this book will get better and better and that everyone can enjoy reading it.

I hate this kind of setting the most. I work hard and the results are so good, but others can't get them. It's really like a dog.

This setting is difficult to write, and it is very easy to write a wisdom-lowering article.

Is there a new genre? The previous genre was eavesdropping on the heart, and this one is about binding luck 🤔

It looks like I'm sick of cancer, and with that talent, even a dog can win if I put it on it

There are 15 talents at the beginning, but two appear in Chapter 35. There is also Chapter 8. The power of Yi Shui changes into spiritual perception. A water ability becomes a perception ability (Chapter 2 has the talent of Feng Shui Yi Xue, which can also sense the general position of the Snow Queen. Chapter 8 says that it is the power of Yi Shui that senses it, and then the talent of Feng Shui Yi Xue is gone. There are still chapter 30 that Gao Liji didn't understand

Obviously the introduction seems to be an invincible article, but the result is a bit biased, and there are so many people suddenly there, the butterfly effect has long been affected, big events may not have changed, but many small things should not be followed

The setting of the protagonist of "To Immortal You" is that matter♾️ can simulate the shape change of creatures or substances through contact. At the same time, being able to look directly at the existence of the soul can subjectively possess the soul. All the above conditions require emotional stimulation to be realized.

The subject matter is good, but if you want to write about the game of the country, you will be confused? Come on💪

It's not exciting enough to motivate me to continue reading (ー_ー)!! However, the Japanese have become a vassal state. This should be described carefully. This is a completely cool point.

These studio books are really enough😒😒😒😒😒

There is a question. If the people who enter the game are very good, but their own country is not that good, and then their country is destroyed by the country where the protagonist is located outside the game, which country do the people in the game belong to? Or, in other words, the benefits received by the territory of the country where the protagonist is located. If the country where the protagonist is located expands its territory, will the newly opened territory have welfare effects.

Recommend "To the Immortal You", blind guess is the origin of the book title, the title is also called "Healing and Not Crushing You"

If a person is killed, the killer will receive half of the luck of the country of the killed person, so wouldn't the protagonist's ability become a bug?

There are so few... I feel like I should keep him on the bookshelf for ten and a half months 😏

I'm digging for my origins in another world to save the parallel blue star

Although the author also said that the first chapter is not good and slightly toxic, but I can't bear it. If you don't plan to revise it, just tell me which chapter is better to start with. The first chapter is quite awkward.

I deleted the article when I saw that the second level was One Piece. There are so many anime, TV series, movies, and novels in China. I have to write about Japan.

Immortality and archives are timeless settings but difficult to write well.

It's uncomfortable to watch, is it true Yuan Guo? Xia Xia children?

B friends come to visit 🌹🌹🌹

If you are passing by, you might as well check in

The so-called advanced civilization is just the ancestors, and the spiritual mountains and rivers rewarded are just areas sealed by ancient times. Is it similar to the one in "The Supreme Humanity"?

Brother, save the earth, global warming, sudden drop in temperature... Virus

Male protagonist

The idea of ​​Waste Road is good. I hope the author of Qidian can expand his writing... I will come back if I have a few hundred thousand words.