I Am Talented and Invincible

I have read all the chapters that have been updated (although there are only a dozen chapters). In the spirit of talking nonsense before the main plot is revealed, I will make a simple evaluation of this book. First of all, the special part is a bit stiff, such as the part where the protagonist just traveled through time, but considering that the author is a newbie, I can tolerate it because I can't write it. Then the protagonist accepted his identity too quickly, and the adoptive father immediately called out. What surprised me was that there was no introduction to the protagonist's past life background. It's not that it is necessary, but it helps us understand the protagonist. The protagonist now seems to have no concern for the past life at all The third is the most buggy point. There is a problem with the background of the story. In ancient times, the adopted son should have the same surname as the adoptive father, that is, the protagonist's surname is Wei, but considering that it may be reluctance to leave the protagonist's father , this is understandable. But as far as the current background of the story is concerned, as one of the three giants of Ping An City, it is impossible for them to continue to fight to the death. This is related to interests. Think about it, if you open a shop, others will come to destroy it. If you go out to do some errands, you will be detained at the headquarters . Face must be given. And in the ring, why did Shi want to use money to solve the problem? As a gangster, he could just rob it . It may be that the contract is very important, there are gods and ghosts, etc., And it cannot be violated. It depends on the next chapters. Then is there no merit in this book? No, of course . I think the biggest advantage is the description of the seven talents, which are very interesting and each has its own personality. And as a newcomer, it is important for the author to have a stable mentality. I have seen many great masters simply eunuch because of unsatisfactory results on the shelves. So it's great that the author can keep writing. Another good thing is that there are not many poisonous spots and they are not big and can be seen. Come on, author! ! ! Finally Qinglingyyds PS: The above only represents my personal opinion and may not be completely correct. For some of the bugs, you can also see what the author writes later. To sum up, if the author writes at this level, he will not be a great master, but he can still make it through level 4 and 5. Come on!

Is Qidian involution so serious? Don't you, the author, go and code the words and distribute the flyers yourself? The book is good, Golden Finger is a highlight! Stay level and keep an eye on you!

School is about to start, so I can't post anymore. Unfortunately, although I can't wait until it is published, I still hope that the author will stick to it and don't want to be a eunuch. I will activate an automatic subscription. How many chapters can I order? How many chapters? Miserable, cry to death

Author, why has your character profile been lost?

It's quite good-looking, the author's writing is very good, the works are interesting, and most importantly, he kills decisively, not the Holy Mother! It's a good book!

After reading the first chapter, come and comment. I only express my feelings. It may be different from other people's opinions. I respect everyone's thoughts. When writing about talents or cheats, it should be concise in the early stage. Three or four talents and skills are enough. Firstly, it is easier to write without looking too messy and it is easy to add more points. Secondly, the readers will not feel too dragged out. If the author sets many skills, he can add them one or two at a time in stages. The early setting is too complicated. Either it is written well by a master, or the veteran author has a certain number of fans and can take his time to read it. The writing by new authors is too complex, and unless the writing is good, most readers will not have the patience to read it.

I'm here. It feels pretty good. The plot is quite familiar. Don't forget about it.

I came here by invitation and took a look at Shuhuang. There are many problems, mainly due to the author's low experience The first point is that the picture is not clear. I have read about the problem of image sense in many new books. The specific manifestation is that you say something to me and then each does his own thing, which is the so-called people can't imagine what the image is. The second point is that individual statements are not standardized enough. In terms of reading experience, I think you should read more novels to see what the psychology of the supporting characters is like. The third point is that the subjective taste is too strong. This is also a problem that many new authors often make. There are too many subjective descriptions, and the whole article is more like one or several people talking to themselves. The fourth point is that the style is terrible. The beginning feels very cheesy, and there is no desire to read further. For example: Ah, it turns out I have traveled through time! How is my golden finger XXXX To summarize, I am not saying that I have to pick out a bunch of faults, but if the author wants to write it well, I think it is necessary to say a few words. Practice more, come on

Does the protagonist have an emotional line? Is there no heroine? 😥

The author {"NickName":"Jiange Donglin","UserId":218864049} has too few words. I will give you a favorite and recommend it. I will take a look at it😁

According to my experience in reading novels, whether the beginning of the article and the title of the novel are attractive are the key factors that determine success or failure. Can you retain people? The first thing they see when they come in is your title, the second is your introduction, and the next thing they see is your opening. Some people also say that the introduction is the most important free promotion of a novel.

Currently reading Chapter 12 The overall sense is to amuse oneself, just like a small stir-fried pork There are many side dishes without a big book, multiple processes, careful cooking time, simple and convenient for the appetite Well, it suits my appetite (There is also a book that is poorly written but very satisfying to me) For now, I hope that the protagonist will become a "traveler" browsing the world after finishing some things And his most important "family" talents will always travel with him.

1 The pace is too fast or too slow because I only read the first three chapters. Most of them are dialogues. The environment does not describe much. In fact, it is not easy for readers to form an impression. 2. If the author is a newcomer, he has great potential and can continue to develop. In fact, this genre can still make a living. 3. Mainly because if the fast and slow pace and detailed description of the book can be in place, I personally feel that it will be better. The above are all personal feelings. If you don't like it, don't criticize.

Let me post a post. I read the first three chapters and they were pretty good, but a bit bland.

Read a book when invited, huh. Finished reading,,,, let's go

Come and read when invited. Anyway, it's reading, everyone's reading. The introduction was well written and attracted me. Opening the first chapter, it is also very well written. I don't have time to read it now, so I'll collect it. Come on. I'll check back later.

I found out, there is a thought in the title introduction, and the following content is correct.

Your talent thinks you are useless, so it decides to kill you and become the protagonist.

The setting of Goldfinger relative to the background is not bad, but after reading the first few chapters, I found that the protagonist is impetuous and irritable, and the author's writing style is more tongue-in-cheek... It really doesn't suit my personal taste.

Chapters 49 to 50 are a bit unreadable. After the author finished writing the daily word count, he directly wrote the branch plot and added some plots to make it more rounded? Originally, it would be okay to just focus on daily life or add some side plots, but when the two of them are put together, it feels a bit unbearable, a little too watery. Other authors are writing the main plot, and then interspersing some daily life, or side plots, but they are not crowded together in a brain-intensive way.

Write slowly first, the number of words is too small to read! ! !

It's a bit unexpected to enter the palace, and I don't know if you are a new author. If so, you haven't touched many things yet, right? So how do you know if you can't grasp it? What if it happens? At least you can see where the lower limit is. There is a big gap between just looking at other people's writing methods and actually doing it yourself. I look forward to good work.