Super God, I Am Really Playing with Technology

Didn't the Kamigawa civilization exist for 200,000 years? Why is it only 70,000 years old in your book? ? ? When the Super Seminary came into contact with the angels, wasn't the Juche Kamigawa civilization already destroyed? How did you come up with the idea of ​​starting a war with the angels? And the reason why Super Seminary and Angel parted ways was not because of studying the void? ? ? Why is this so different from the anime I watch? Did I make a mistake? ? ? Or is the author just thinking too much?

This book is okay at the beginning, but becomes more difficult to understand towards the end. I feel like the author is stuck in his own world after writing.

You wrote Kesha wrong. She can sacrifice the life of an angel for the sake of the throne. She is not Kesha at all. Life is precious, valuable, and noble. Use life as a bargaining chip at any time. This is the fundamental reason why Kesha and Liang Bing parted ways in the original novel.

Also, did the author of the protagonist's Goldfinger forget? You said earlier that he can dream of the technology of the sixth and seventh generation divine bodies? And then the curse of a seventh-generation divine body makes you so desperate? After all, you can dream about six or seven generations, which means it is still on the technological side. Your curse cannot be related to the mysterious side, so I wonder, why can't your golden finger dream about the solution to the curse?

What are you writing about? The plot of the train triangle can be said to be the settings added by the author himself. But what is the relationship between the protagonist and Liu Feng later? Why waste so much time? And he jumped to Earth in the blink of an eye? I can't understand more and more, and Space Principal Kieran, what on earth are you writing? Is it written to be dead or not? In the Super Seminary, is the Space Principal a conscious entity? Reina has communicated with him.

I just wanted to scrape together 100,000 words and get a test pitch first. As a result, due to network delays, I published 20,000 words at once, and there was not much left in the archives. The online author humbly asked for rewards.

Damn it, I don't have the intelligence to understand fan fiction.

The author's conspiracy theory is too strong. Kesha died a bunch of angels for the throne. The setting of the super seminary is simply impossible. There is also the disbelief in the alien Duka Odukao who died fighting for the earth in the original work. Sitting there, the conspiracy theory is too strong. Don't tell me what conspiracy theory you're speculating about? When it comes to you, that's what you said, and it has nothing to do with the original work. It's like if I write a fanfic and I set it up to say that men can have children, do you believe it? Anyway, at least the original novel didn't say that Dukao faked his death, so he died fighting for the Earth?

1. The solar system, the Milky Way, the Andromeda Galaxy, the Laniakea Super Galaxy Cluster, the four Great Walls of the Universe, this universe, the Chaos Outer Sea, the Chaos Overseas Universe (the highest level) 2. Parallel worlds, the lowest sub-planes of existential size, continent level, planet level, star system level, river system level, universe level, chaos level, Hongmeng level, eternity level, the only true world. Equivalent to Marvel's universe level, multiverse level, super universe, ultimate universe... 3. The timeline is infinitely split, and time and space cycle (infinite rebirth) under a huge disaster. Then transcend this timeline, multi-timeline level, space-time behemoth level... The basic ending 4. The worst thing is that if you just believe in the Three-Body Problem, you will end up in the universe... Of course, there are even worse things: the original work "Wind and Cloud" has a modern time and space science master, who made an AI to inherit the legacy, and our time machine created aliens, Tathagata Buddha, and the martial sage Guan Yu at the same level... There is also Yi Xiaochuan who travels infinitely through the "Myth" in the fanfiction. It is said that the Wenzi who practices longevity medicine is also him, and even the way of heaven is also him. Infinite time travel finally achieves the way of heaven... 5. There are also people who switch to infinite flow, either by mixing the abilities of various systems, or (sci-fi) using technology to analyze the mysterious side, and eventually all the mysteries become known... 6. Infinite flow, system writing, and golden fingers are all technological concepts after all. Is there anything wrong with science fiction writing in a broad sense?

Jilan, the majestic fourth-generation god, actually fights with his fists. The author is really smart, leaving the god-killing weapon without using his fists.

The author's sudden update made me a little panicked

I suspect that the author has been contaminated. How did the plot collapse like this later?

Some opinions! The protagonist's portrayal of the character is too dark, and there is not a single good person in the world. The portrayal of Dinghei is really bad. No matter how skilled a scientist is, he is just a scientist. Not to mention the five-generation divine body, people who watch it want to laugh. A common god in the Kamigawa Civilization or the Super God World is Jilan. Dinghei can at most change his genes to make him live longer. He is just a scientist and does not need to live every second, OK? Also, after the destruction of gods and civilization, the second and third generations of such bodies appeared in the military competition of the Deno civilization. Dinghei only broke through the level of becoming a god, and the first experimental subject was Kieran (to prevent conspiracy theories, add that Kieran participated voluntarily.) Let me reiterate that Dinghei is just an ordinary person with an extremely long lifespan, his life cannot even exceed a thousand years, and he is an image of a great scientist in the super-god world view. 2: The clone setting must be mentioned. The protagonist must be unique. This is the setting of many novels where the protagonist is an orphan, because readers can put themselves into the protagonist, but they cannot put other characters in the book into their own relatives. So the setting of clones is extremely poisonous. Although there are still some daydreams, but overall it is pretty good. The author has his own ideas, except for conspiracy theories!

Author: Bill Gates has no system, but he is the richest man in the world. Isn't it unthinkable to you that he doesn't have a system? After Sakyamuni became a monk, he practiced yoga and became a Buddha under the bodhi tree. Others had no system, but he became a Buddha. Was it a big blow to you?

Some readers think what I write is too straightforward, and some readers say they don't understand. How should I express my thoughts? Also, I don't seem to have arbitrarily tampered with the power system and knowledge system of the Super God Universe. Because this book is for my faith and I plan to specialize in the Super God Academy, so what I added at the end is my thoughts about the fourth generation of divine bodies. I almost copied the current power system of the Super God Universe intact. There are also readers who say that my timeline is wrong. Do you believe it when I say this is foreshadowing?

The book starts out normal, but after about 100 chapters, memetic technology, memetic viruses, and conceptual weapons appear. The first 30,000 years are skipped without any process. How did the protagonist's technology come from? The author is mindless and furious

I saw Chapter 6 and your timeline is totally wrong! ! ! I remember that the original work seems to have been written in 20,000 to 30,000 years, or 45,000 to 50,000 years, when gods and civilizations perished! ! It was only then that Kilan cultivated the Deno civilization, and then it seemed that several thousand years passed before Kilan Super Seminary came into contact with Kesha and the others.

Author, it is actually okay to write conspiracy theories. After all, is it fan fiction? You have to write something different from the original work and add new settings and storylines to the original settings. This is fan fiction. However, the author's conspiracy theory is a bit off. It is not adding new settings to the original settings. Instead, he directly destroyed the original setting and then changed his own setting. As far as conspiracy theory is concerned, if Dukao is a conspirator who faked his death, there is no problem, because Dukao himself is a top figure in the former universe god-level civilization, a war madman. How can such a character be an ordinary person? How could there be no divine body? It is normal for such a character to have the same strength as Fan Zhen. How could he be an ordinary person and be simply blown to death? But in the plot, he was bombed like an ordinary person, which is simply weird, and Dukao is nicknamed the War Madman, so there is no problem in writing Dukao's conspiracy theory, but there is a problem in writing Kesha's conspiracy theory. Kesha insists on the justice order and has been running for tens of thousands of years. This concept has withstood the test of time, and she insisted on her own concept until her death. Kesha's concept of justice order has been placed in front of everyone from the beginning to the end, which cannot be fake Kesha's death was caused by a star explosion, which only caused fragmentation and the possibility of healing. It's a bit ridiculous to see Dukao being simply blown to death. After all, the once top civilization, top figures, and war madmen were simply blown away.

The author's subject matter is good, but the pace in the early stage is too fast, so that it transitions into the super god plot too quickly, and then if you want to slow down the pace, you can refer to the super god plot The highlights are basically before more than fifty chapters, but after connecting to the super god plot, it gets worse and worse, the protagonist's plan, and then I feel that the protagonist is in It will greatly affect the subsequent plot, and then directly eliminate the protagonist, and then all things must be written very mysteriously, and then the dialogues between the characters are also all kinds of mysterious, and everyone is planning. This may be good in the author's opinion, but it seems that the readers really don't want to read it anymore Give the author a suggestion The plot can be divided into three parts 1. The protagonist travels to the Super Seminary before the plot unfolds: the protagonist researches and collects resources, writes several clones to rule some civilizations to collect resources, and then uses the planet to experiment with evolution and collect genes. This plot should be able to write about two hundred chapters, mainly depending on the writing 2. The plot of the Super Seminary unfolds: Genes obtained through experiments, participate in some plots, and write some changed plots, this can be almost a hundred chapters 3. At the end of the Super Seminary plot, the void comes, and the protagonist has almost grown up. You can write about how to fight against the void, develop technology, and collect resources to upgrade the divine body The span of the power system is too big. I forgot whether the author wrote about the fourth generation divine body or the fifth generation divine body. Jilan can manipulate the rules of time. This power system is basically about to collapse. Aren't the sixth and seventh generations in the future going to have direct contact with the universe? The problem is that the five generations of gods set in the book were not strong in the previous civilization, and the subsequent power system will basically collapse The author yourself defines the book as a light novel, which makes the plot suspenseful and heavy, which will only slowly make the readers attracted by the subject matter of this book slowly lose Come on, author, you have been persuaded to quit by the plot.

The author is so persistent that he is still writing

Does the author have a single heroine in this article?

Why doesn't the protagonist create Chinese gods in the Super God Universe? He can also create artifacts belonging to China, such as the Donghuang Bell, Hetu Luoshu, and Xuanyuan Sword.

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