Fire Phoenix War Chronicles

{"NickName":"Witty Burger","UserId":320339762} will make you stand out in the online literary world, dou🤭 🤭; hehu22

Coming from Zhihu, I am also a new author, writing a book on a standalone computer. I mentioned some personal opinions in the first chapter, which are not necessarily accurate, just personal feelings. I saw someone on Zhihu saying that there was no conflict in your novel at the beginning. I don't think so. The Battle at the Gate at the beginning was not a conflict, and there are not many novels that have conflicts. My personal feeling is that the details of the world view are not unified and unclear. The second is a logical issue. The character creation must be based on the environment. You are a bit rigid here. Also, you wrote this manuscript and sent it directly, right? I wrote the book on a stand-alone computer for three months. I wrote hundreds of thousands in the first part. I revised and adjusted it many times and retained 40,000. My idea is that the first book a newcomer writes is for hands-on training. Since it is for hands-on training, you must make it play the value of hands-on training. Think about what you get from this first book, what you want to learn, and what you want to practice.