Kamen Rider Starting from Marvel

This book is good and a good idea, but it doesn't even have a basic form in the early stage. Then we fight the BOSS. We use all our cards but forget to finish the last hit. We are also robbed of various things. The information war is also suppressed. A person who is not famous can invade Yak at will. These plots are too frustrating, aren't they abusing the main text?

The author has too many lines, the protagonist has not yet grown up, and a lot of villains in the knight world are overflowing with technology. It is simply hell mode! Mirror Beasts, Amazons, Memory, Magic Machine Puppets, and Mirror Man. The protagonist doesn't even have a basic dial of King of Time, or even a fourth-dimensional pocket 🤔

How should I put it, it's well written, but a bit frustrating.

There are too many villains at the beginning. The main article of abuse slipped away.

Maybe there are not many readers for the new book... But I still want to ask for help: Which book friend can help the second knight Alan choose a contract beast? No requirements, just be unique.

I'm afraid it's not a serious illness. I hate it when a foreshadowing is suddenly laid and I don't feel that it is about to come out at all. If a foreshadowing doesn't come out in more than a dozen pictures, then don't bury it. Besides, you have such a big start, do you have enough writing skills? Won't it collapse? The protagonist is as weak as a chicken, and his life is limited. It's just playing house with a bunch of bastards, but not touching the main protagonist.

Zhan Lou is well written. There are no major poisonous points at the moment. What is more problematic is the addition of mutants. Whether it can be grasped depends on the author himself. It's okay if I have an outline. If I don't have an outline, 200,000 words will definitely be a hit.

The author tries Marvel's local Kamen Rider Amazons-Extremis Virus Kuaga-The Darkness of the End (absorbing the power of the dark dimension) Yajituo-Celestial God (the power of OAA (a little bit is enough)) Exide-Justice League (DC comics in Marvel) Yak-Absolute Evil Thought (evil in the entire universe) saber-The Simulation of Light and Darkness (Book of Light (Book of Light) Probably called that) and the Book of Darkness) Gorst-Soul Master (hell dimension and soul gem) OOO-Desire Wriza-Infinite Form (you know the gem) Blade-Sealed Card (the immortal existence in Marvel) W-Myth Series Memory Dream-Cosmic Chronicle (Heart of the Universe) Foure-Astral Projection

The plot is so confusing, so many things are inserted into it

I just read two chapters, which are interesting. Come on!