The Immortal's Proof Across the Heavens

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the author's writing skills are very solid, and the wording and brushstrokes are also quite sophisticated. In terms of the writing style alone, it is like the misty sky. The author's writing style is the pinnacle in the current Internet literary world. But at the same time, why can't I read after reading a few chapters? It's because the author pays too much attention to the gorgeous rhetoric, and the article is a bit dry to read. Compared with traditional literature, online literature can be regarded as fast-moving literature. This is why the first three chapters of online novels are also called the golden three chapters. Big data shows that online readers usually use the impressions of the first three chapters to decide whether to continue reading, so the first three chapters are very important. As a fellow Xianxia writer, I have never published an article on Qidian. I can't help but linger after seeing such a wordy and thoughtful writing style. However, as a bookworm who has been immersed in it for many years, I still want to say that it is difficult for newcomers to use slow pace to attract readers to stop. Fast pace is more suitable for newcomers. Of course, people who dream of writing articles, idealistic people, don't need to care about the performance of their works, and just endure loneliness for the love in their hearts. Finally, I hope that the carefully created works will not be let down. May the author's thoughts flow like a fountain, the writing will be full of flowers, and the works will become popular.

Brother, you are writing a novel about cultivating immortals. Why are all the introductions filled with characters from Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty? The layout is too small.

It feels like reading a retro version of the Legend of Xiuxian. The text and story are straight and square, and it is difficult to have the climax and the crazy feeling of chasing to the end. The world of fairy tales has more adventures and dreamlike scenes and stories. This is the highlight. It is too orthodox and easy to get dizzy🤭

That's not right. If you have heard of it in Zixiao Palace, then you and Sanqing are of the same generation. Why are you letting someone lead a cow?

Renaissance Society? Yan Shuangyinggot it and wants to fight with you.

The introduction is boring. They all carry shoes for famous people or have done something with them to highlight the protagonist's power. Why not witness something to embody the protagonist? Without Erlang Shen, Roaring Sky Dog is just a dog monster. Without Erlang Shen, he is still Erlang Shen. Do you understand what I mean?

To be honest, I don't understand the meaning of your traveling through the heavens. The worlds you travel through are all weaker than your own, so it would be better not to have the function of traveling through the heavens.

During the struggle for hegemony at the end of the Sui Dynasty, do you remember Zhu Jie? He took pleasure in cannibalism. He ate people for no reason when there was food. He failed in the struggle for hegemony. He escaped into Buddhism and claimed to be Garuda and descended to the earth. How could such a good thing happen? The author remembered to make arrangements. Originally, Ssangyong's Buddhism was disgusting.

Tell me honestly if it's Old Toad's vest

It looks very fascinating. When I was competing with my fellow disciples, I said that I was not very good at close combat, but I traveled to Dragon Snake, where they practiced fighting to the extreme. I dare say that the protagonist of the same level is there, but he is just a weakling. In the end, he didn't learn anything in there, he just pretended to be cool, and relied on his cultivation to overwhelm others.