Start from the Old Nine Gates

Does the author have a bias against the Li family? The villains are all from the Li family, and there is another Li Yi.

Don't you know about the U. S. Dollar during the warlord wars at that time? The U. S. Dollar at that time was bound to gold. At that time, a summons from the Far East to the United States was only 20 U. S. Dollars. It cost you 20 U. S. Dollars a night to stay in a small shabby hotel. Two gangsters found 200 on their bodies. How ridiculous.

The protagonist gives a treasure to a boy. . It's so annoying to give pills to someone you know.

Author, the U. S. Dollar during that period was calculated in gold. . . Don't take it for granted. At that time, you didn't have too much money to rob a bank. . .

What I hate the most is that the articles on cultivating immortals include exercises and elixirs, the articles on entertainment include songs, the articles on business include shares and stock trading, the articles on sports are all about competitions, the articles on history are all conspiracies, the articles on Ji Dao are all full of muscular tyrants, and the articles on various astronomical stories don't even sleep with a single woman. I read novels just for pleasure. Is it interesting that you authors are doing this? Anyway, it's annoying to see it!

I was poisoned when I saw the protective umbrella.

The first ten or so chapters were okay, and the characters were well developed, but the rest of it was unreadable. It was unstructured and there were no rules. For example, when you give something, you can give it to anyone you just met? Don't you understand that wealth should not be exposed? You have to give something at a price. You have to write it carefully here, otherwise no one will read it. Just like in reality, if you just met someone, would you give him money? Please let me know what it looks like when you bring it in. I think the pig's feet are s. B.

At first it looks like it was written by a human, then later. . . . . . Hard to describe in one word

Author, are you planning to have a female protagonist? If not, don't make unnecessary purchases. If so, book it early. I'll cancel it immediately after booking.

What do you think? You've only written twenty or thirty chapters and gone abroad? Even if I give you a golden finger, you won't be able to use it! If you want to skip the time when you can't write, why not take Black Back Lao Liu and the others to wander around the mountains in the country. First, they can collect various medicinal materials along the way. Second, they can develop their power and train talents. Third, they can collect Yin Qi. Fourth, they can develop various bases to collect the gold and silver treasures in the tombs. Later, they can develop the equipment and talents for the big tombs. As a result, there is no one in China who knows how to go abroad! Don't write it, it's just nonsense. There is no complete development idea, no overall planning ability, and no plot development method. I'm drunk too

Damn it, why didn't the author add the Marvel system and the Super Seminary system?

It's produced by a studio again, so everyone understands it!

Are you serious, artificial intelligence already exists at this time?

Generally speaking, it's okay, but the author deliberately ignored many details. For example, if you exchange gold fingers for elixirs, you can still redeem them even though you have no evolution points. So what are your exchange rules? ; Another example is pretending to be a rich American kid and just changing his appearance? The author ignored accent, height, daily behavior, and handwriting.

If readers raise unreasonable questions, the author will be a good author if he can correct them. After all, when writing a book with so many words, it's normal to not be able to cover everything. Nowadays, many authors know clearly that it is unreasonable, but they are too lazy to change it because they find it troublesome. It shows no respect for readers and no respect for one's own hard work. Readers will have to pay to read the book after it is released! We have to respect each other!

There are some issues with the design of this book. In fact, the biochemical crisis should not have occurred, forcing a society that uses artificial intelligence to enter the anti-Japanese period. Since pig's feet can be used to inherit alchemy, you can also find other cultivation paths. With the help of golden fingers, it is much safer than genetic medicine. The T-virus infection is too strong and cannot be controlled by pig's feet. Qin Shihuang, adding the Sun Book of the Dead is not so inconsistent. Uncle Jiu can do it too.

After killing his father, why are he still pretending not to be afraid of his son coming to him instead of eradicating the roots and waiting for him to die? Don't talk about that chaotic era. Even now, I have to think of ways to kill you. I'm trying to persuade you to leave. I'm leaving.

It's really sloppy to write about the anti-Japanese war.

Disgusting person writing🤐🤐🤐

Deep well ice? The guy who wrote about Laojiumen went to the United States.

Wuyu likes the subject matter very much. The author doesn't understand that he thinks so and just sends it out every day.

This novel fucking collapsed a long time ago. The Umbrella Corporation had been established during World War I, and it also owned Raccoon City and had its own artificial intelligence.

I feel like a brainless stallion when I write it later

. . . After reading a few chapters =_= I feel like my brain is running out O_o

Why are you studying immortality in Tomb Raider Notes, baby?

It's so annoying, but also necessary. I hope the author can keep writing with high quality.

So what about disaster relief? There are people who are frozen to death on the road, and no one can resist and no one can be killed.

Every time I see the name of Pig's Knuckle, I wonder if the heroine has to be called Dexue.

Changing the elixir at the evolution point is a failure.

I don't know what the plot is going to be about later, resisting Japan? Cultivation? City? Grave robbing? They all did it together