I Never Want to See You Again

After reading the story, I have to comment!

First, the short story is 1,000 words long and vividly depicts the situation of a rural family where the father is a brick-moving worker and comes to hold a parent-teacher meeting. Second, the description of details needs to be improved. The atmosphere and rendering effects are not enough. We can strengthen the psychological description of the environment. For example, the moment my father arrived at the door of the classroom, my performance, and the teacher's sentence, Liu Ran's parents, come in, can trigger more descriptions of the characters' movements and expressions, as well as speculation and observation of other people's thoughts on my father's behavior. Third, you can pass it in the end. After returning home, be silent and then explode, creating a climax of emotional ups and downs about the matter. Then, during the part when your father comes out to find you, you can express your emotions and describe the downturn. However, if I were to write it, I would definitely not be as good as you writing about you, 😂😂. Four, great, great, lollipops are rewarded, all the little red flowers are rewarded to you, no more. 5. Please do not blame me if the above personal thoughts are inappropriate. 👀👀😋😇