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It has been updated to Chapter 15. Let's summarize the general content: At the end of 2051, Lin Zuo, the chairman of Lingdian Technology, a leading intelligent robot company, is terminally ill and will die soon. In order not to affect the company's ongoing major projects, Lin Zuo did not disclose his illness. And let the company's own intelligent robot, Lili, take over the company's large and small businesses. Lin Zuo's cousin Owen, through his old classmate Wang Wentao, contacted the best life extension surgeon in the country: Dr. Tan Xiaoliang. Dr. Tan made an appointment with Lin Zuo and told him the risks and benefits of head transplant surgery. Lin Zuo decided to have the surgery. Lingdian Technology's major project: the table tennis robot project was accelerated due to Lin Zuo's sudden physical condition, and the research and development of the table tennis robot was completed before more variables occurred. Lin Zuo's "head replacement surgery" was successful. At the same time, the company's "table tennis robot" also became a god in a battle. Won a lot of business opportunities for Lingdian Technology. However, the news that Lin Zuo was terminally ill was exposed by an undercover lurking inside the company. Although Zero Point Technology and the three southern institutes involved came forward to clarify at the same time, they still could not clear up the rumors. Personally, I think the article is well organized and well-written (especially the part describing the condition), and it also has this imagination: head transplant surgery, if such an operation really existed, would you dare to do it? 💀💀😳😳

Here it comes First of all, what can I say about this book? It's pretty good, with no major flaws. The writing style, paragraphing, and language are all very good, and it is very interesting to read. But the problem is that the writing is too traditional, and it is not very popular in the online literary circle. I haven't signed a contract yet. Personally, I think the reasons may be due to the following reasons. First of all, the title and introduction of the book are not attractive enough. Compared with those with one-sentence titles, they do not have a good initial understanding, are not domineering, and have no desire to click in. Secondly, it is obvious that there are no cheats and large-scale fictional settings, it is the most primitive science fiction. Traditional science fiction, this is how traditional novels are written, but there are indeed some places that need to be deleted. The first chapter, where Luo Liba Suo called to inform, is a little redundant Another point is that there are too many characters, and it feels like watching a TV series. The editor continues to deduct points... The editor hopes that the rhythm is to have liver cancer at the beginning and sell poorly (even though this routine is already relatively old), and then turn around in the second chapter and start to solve the conflicts. If he could calm down and read a few more chapters of yours, he might think it's good, but he definitely thinks that you don't meet the contracting standards. Standards are fixed and will not change based on individuals In fact, the online article I read is a quick book, and I personally feel that the beginning is a bit delayed What you can do is to compress the content of the first few chapters, think about unnecessary places that can be deleted to speed up the pace, and think about the title of the book. The method is to divide the introduction into paragraphs and use exclamations to deepen the appeal But I still suspect that even if I revise it well, it will only be a dead end There seems to be a lot of readers, but the author still persists and thinks carefully at the beginning. If the modifications are correct, there is still hope for signing. The difficulty of this book lies in signing, and the prospects are still good after signing

The writing is good, and it has quite a sense of atmosphere. Especially the part where Lin Zuo had a nightmare made me sweat. It's rare to find a novel with no system or time-travel science fiction background in Qidian. I found a treasure. This wave belongs to the author. Come on 😊

The subsequent stories become more and more flavorful as they are written, with various descriptions surrounding "life extension people": the Global Life Extension Medical Conference and the anti-life extension storm all closely follow the theme. The campus love story of Lin Zuo's son Lin Yuan is also well written, and it is also connected to the theme of life extension. Another highlight of the article: artificial intelligence has also emerged. Lili, as an intelligent robot, its abilities are becoming more and more powerful. In addition to "taking over company work", he can also take care of patients. Looking forward to the follow-up "Future Intelligent Business War"

It's a rare science fiction theme. The writing is really good. I have collected it.

Good article, the author has a strong writing style and a strong sense of immersion

Already bookmarked, keep updating, and look forward to a return visit and review.

Already collected, good writing, cheers

The author's writing style is so special. I feel that he can control any style. In this novel, no matter whether the villain or the good guy, there is no single one. The battle between them is written with great care. It is very impressive. Go and read it.

Look at my ID. Can I talk to you?

The more you write, the better. Come on! This is a moving work from a respected author. At this level, whether signed or not, there is no doubt that it is a success.

There are too few updates, not enough to read. Please keep writing, click on the push button, and comment by the way: The writing is good!

Starting from Chapter 48, the commercial war between Lingdian Technology and Tengyun Group slowly begins. Both sides have powerful artificial intelligence as military advisors. However, Alpha Robot is still far behind Lili of Zero Point Technology. Let's see how Lili strategizes and wins the battle thousands of miles away.

I found that there are a lot of lyrics in the article, and they match well 😄 Like it 🌹

It's so well written🤭🤭

Three months already! The author finally remembered his starting password!