Binding Luck: Get the Whitebeard Template at the Beginning

Well! Less mental activity, live broadcast barrages, and shock. It's hard for people to feel involved, and it feels like it's forced and awkward! Just to highlight that punch, you wrote three chapters. If so, I might as well just read the title and make up my own mind to avoid being embarrassed and disgusted! Also, you wrote the beginning of this segmented plot, and you can probably guess the ending, but you still force yourself to be disappointed, desperate, abusive, shocked, incomprehensible, happy, and embarrassing! You, the author, are also old readers. You can read it yourself after you finish writing it! When writing a book for the first time, everything is focused on quality, conciseness and smoothness. Yours seems to have a low word count!

It's okay to kill time Don't overthink it It's unfinished If you're so hungry for books, you can read it

Chapter 5 poisoned me to death. Author, can you not learn all the settings? This is official. How stupid is it to invite such a disgusting person to be a guest on the show?

I specially ordered a chapter and posted a comment Let's not talk about the problem of your protagonist, the Virgin Bitch, but let's talk about Whitebeard's combat power. I think according to what you said, if the top is 30%, doesn't it have to be better than an ordinary lieutenant general who can be domineering? The protagonist in your writing seems to be unbeatable by anyone, runs away when he sees it, or uses a castrated version of overlord color to scare people? Are you being steady? Do you really think this is stable? Okay, according to what you said, time travelers have their own ideas. You play a national game and represent the country, and you hide it? And this combat power is outrageous. It's hard to get a wolf in the early stage, but you can pull it down. You are 30% of Whitebeard. You are 30% of Navy soldiers. Judging from the title of the book, good guy, it is really disappointing.

Stop writing it. It's obviously a pretentious article and you have to hide your strength.

When Whitebeard was at his peak, he had three levels of strength. I thought that the top battle would only be about three levels. Such a loser?

I vomited. It was too poisonous and too ignorant. I really didn't understand what this book was about. The ten-year-old bookworm was so disgusted. Why are there so many bad books now?

The author wants to write a coming-of-age story, with a protagonist who has a style in dealing with things and has a character who is not just a label. But why touch porcelain white beard. With this template set in this non-conventional background, it can only be seen as a cool article by Long Aotian. Preconceived impressions are so important.

It's the first time for a newcomer to write a book. Doesn't this show that the studio is an assembly line product? The title is shocking. Is this the starting point of the UC invasion?

The advantage is that the author keeps writing, but the disadvantage is that it is all shortcomings.

Every time the protagonist encounters a ferocious beast, no matter what level it is, it is the same routine: the ferocious beast is so strong, the audience is disappointed, the protagonist is attacked, the audience is desperate, the protagonist is okay, the audience is happy, the protagonist fights back, the ferocious beast dies instantly, and gets a reward. . . . . There is no fluctuation at all. It was definitely written by a machine.

After seeing the latest chapter, I mentioned a few points that I think need to be solved in the future for the author's reference! First, the protagonist is pulled directly into the forbidden area without any preparation, so the protagonist does not have any possibility of contacting other players. Then when the second and third time he is pulled in, do the players from the same country have the conditions to contact each other before? Is it through corresponding technological means or through supernatural power connection (such as calls between players)? Second, every time a player dies, 10 million people will die in the corresponding country. Is it true for all countries in the world? Or will there be different adjustments for countries with different populations? Let me give a few examples. As of 2020, the Vatican City State has 801 people, San Marino has 33,574 people, and Palau has 17,900 people. A country like this will be destroyed if one player dies. There are 197 countries in the world, and 13 have a population of over 100 million. This means that the vast majority of countries cannot afford the death of any player. Third, I didn't see any clear requirements or restrictions on being able to carry supplies in the book. The concept of personal items refers to items that you can pick up and carry with you, or items that you can control at the moment, because there is a lot of room for maneuver. Does exoskeleton armor count? Does a heavy machine gun count? Do robots and robot dogs count? These are all things that the state can control during the 20 minutes of preparation during the second selection. I hope the author can clarify or limit this aspect. Fourth, because the 10 million people written in the rules are randomly selected to die, it means that the protagonist must protect every player sent in by his country. So are the transfers random? What if it is random and the player is randomly teleported to a powerful monster and dies at the start? And will the forbidden area attract infants, young children, the elderly, patients, the disabled, and even people who are experiencing death (such as death row prisoners who are being executed)? Fifth, after the random deaths of 10 million people, extreme circumstances occurred, leading to the collapse of national institutions. Can this country still be judged to exist? Should we continue to recruit people from this country? And what are the rules for determining the country's selection of candidates? Country of Citizenship? National blood or self-recognition? How should we judge if a weak country collectively disbands and unites to join a powerful and populous country? Should they be judged to belong to the original country or to the new country? Sixth, is the map of the forbidden area distributed in continental plates, or does it require teleportation and jumps like the maps in the game, or is it a distribution of low-level ones collectively distributed in one area, and then one level above is a higher level, and one level above is a higher level? The distribution of the map determines the protagonist's behavior pattern: move forward to loot more things, or build a base to protect good people? Seventh, do the resources projected into reality from the forbidden area contain biological resources? Will the powerful creatures in the forbidden land be projected into reality? And will the destruction of resources in the forbidden area have the same impact on the resources projected in reality? This determines the protagonist's choice when facing all monsters.

Seeing so many people scolding me makes me feel relieved

There is too much nonsense, and there are comments that it is unexpectedly good. After reading the free chapters, I don't feel that there is anything good about it, and I have no desire to subscribe. Author, you need to make it clear that what you want to write is the protagonist, not the audience. In more than 30 chapters, you are actually writing that the audience is talking.

This book is just a replacement for the studio. It's a piece of garbage. I couldn't read it until chapter 10. After browsing around and reviewing it, I couldn't stand it any more. Goodbye.

It's unreasonable. He constantly belittles his own country and exalts other countries on national affairs, but he's not caught as a spy? You can do it secretly, and you can do it online, but if you are invited as a guest, you will be embarrassed if you say the wrong thing in front of the whole country. What is the background of this? All he needs to do is write the word "traitor" on his face. It doesn't matter if he dances like this. Is he being penetrated?

Why, why can it be written so poorly! Why can't I make progress even though I can write so much? I can't understand it!

Instead of hiding your strength, it's better to start with an ordinary person's template

The subject matter is good, but the writing is a bit stretchy.

The idea is very good, but it's a pity that I'm too embarrassed to write it. I don't want to complain about it anymore. The author should continue to work hard. Every time I finish writing, I suggest the author himself or someone close to him to read it. It's really off the mark.

Let me state in advance that I am not targeting this book and this author. I wonder how one routine can lead to so many books. The protagonist was first looked down upon, criticized by his own people, and criticized by foreigners, and then he started to play the script of Invincible Recklessness. I was surprised. Referring to this epidemic, the whole country is united as one. Look, how can any blind person dare to advocate foreign countries? These articles advocate foreign countries, just like Yuanyuan in this book, then they can't advance the plot at all. They are purely disgusting readers. To sum up, the genre of Guoyun-ryu (I mean, as far as I have read,) is all written in plain language, and in the end it turns into an alternative fantasy. I don't know who created this genre. I just want to say: there is no one who can beat it!

Hiss~ This book is unexpectedly pretty. I thought it would be some kind of studio assembly line story.

There are many shortcomings, the writing and plot are not rigorous, the live broadcast comments are a bit toxic, it is obviously a national sports story, but there is no reasonable evolution channel, and it does not strengthen physical fitness. It is purely a personal show of Yanguo. The most speechless thing is that the protagonist has been relying on White Beard to rest on his laurels. It is just invincible plus personal YY. The whole country and the whole world are watching a person hit the wall. . . . . . . Okay, it's just Xiaobaiwen. . . . . It's okay if you don't have any brains, but after reading dozens of chapters, you will know the plot directly from the title. . . . . . . I don't feel anything new at all. . . . . . .

In the past, the old guys who wrote two-dimensional novels were driven away by the Japanese devils. Now, almost all the old guys who write two-dimensional novels are working with money from their foreign masters.

Other than that, the book is really good. Every time there is a fight, five chapters must be written. Every time there is a lot of nonsense, the other side will always take the lead. In the last chapter, I was able to defeat my opponent with a single blow. I was really speechless.

Free chapter reading guide: If you don't want to watch the audience interact, you can quickly turn the pages, saving about two-thirds of the reading time. If you like it, just read it slowly. There are only about thirty chapters anyway. Is the author's book the first to be released from Qidian? I suggest you learn more about the anime, novels, or film and television dramas you want to incorporate into the next book.

Post your own poisoning speech. I stopped reading after reading chapter 20. It was so disgusting that I couldn't understand the protagonist's brain circuit.

Run! Run! Vomit! ! !

Jiang Zi writes? My invincible number one white fox in the universe doesn't want to see it~ Que Shi doesn't want to see Que Shi is like this, you Erlong? You Jiang Zi will be killed Wuwuwu~ don't hit me. Bird food Bird food I was wrong, I told you to go, you go! Are you a dragon? ! !

Chapter 33 is available. . . Retreat retreat. I hate this kind of novel that treats readers like leeks.