The Azeroth Bastion

The author does not write like an orc, but like a dwarf. . . It's not about the size, it's about the talking.

What the author wrote is actually pretty good, much more powerful than some Stratholme god.

My aesthetics really have no interest in green-skinned monsters 😒

The orcs of Azeroth don't read the background story. Well, the racial skills are quite strong and you can play with them. Let's take a deeper look. How come this thing hasn't wiped out the entire race?

Write well and write about a different orc culture. The heroine should still be an orc.

As an orc, if you want to become stronger, the best and fastest way is to return to your ancestors. It doesn't matter if you think Gronn or Magron is ugly, just set him in a transformed posture, just like the dragon's mortal form and dragon form. Maglon's arcane and elemental talents are not said to be stronger than the dragon, but it is absolutely no problem if they are 50-50. Even if you keep Draenor from exploding, kill Argus and absorb the essence, you can be reborn as a new titan in Draenor.

The protagonist talks too much nonsense and has no sense of empathy.

The idea is good, but the protagonist's performance is a bit too relaxed. It doesn't feel like traveling to a world full of dangers, but more like playing an immersive game. It's too careless, and many times it talks about changing something, but it doesn't do it at all, such as starting a car. The audience's reaction was too bland when it came to the Gate Incident, Draenor's Brokenness, and spoilers for the future. Especially when Lao Lu and Da De were told that the Burning Legion was back, their reactions were too bland. You must know that they have all experienced the War of the Ancients, and Lao Lu's father was killed in the war.

Damn tribal pigs! For the Holy Light! Eat me and strike bravely!

I feel that the details are a little lacking, maybe because of the fast pace, but I can slow down a little and add some details, emotions, psychological activities of the characters, scenery, environment, etc. Otherwise, it is too fast and I feel a bit uncontrollable.