The Female Military General and Her Useless Man

This book should tell me to drive a big car in a different world

Come on, update it, it's well written, I'll just add more updates.

You write well, write well! ! !

It's indeed a bit weird, but since you're driving so fast, I won't pursue it🤤

This book is a bit difficult to describe in one sentence. This is probably a female pornographic article. The author is a bit of a writer, God damn it.

As long as the car is big enough and fast enough, the handbrake is useless

I read it for a long time and didn't understand it. Is this a heroine story? I feel like the description is also a bit dark. The most important thing is that I don't have a sense of empathy at all. I don't know what I'm looking at.

This kind of writing style is really frustrating. Others want writing style but no writing style, let alone literary style. Your writing style is full of sentences. You can only squint your eyes when writing about this kind of subject matter.

When writing fantasy novels in this way, try not to read them from other easy-to-understand novel perspectives. The introduction has already explained it. It's an amazing 'story', so what is it about? It's clear now. I can only guess the story line. The introduction is to clear out the "remnants". Read the above and judge the following. As for the sense of immersion, I usually read novels with more literary and youth genres and I guess I will understand a little bit.

The writing is surprisingly good. I don't believe you are a newcomer. I don't like your style. I like novels that get into the theme at the beginning, because I think that is attractive enough. You first narrate the background (the description of the background is inserted into the article. I like that, and use the male protagonist or others to describe it). Then you wrote about the female general's fight (the fight is very well written). Where is the male protagonist? The male protagonist doesn't appear in the beginning, so how can I get a sense of involvement... (When your book becomes popular one day, someone will remind me. I have to delete the post secretly, so as not to be sprayed into a sieve)

This novel won't be from the heroine's perspective. It would be fine if it was a female channel, but if it were a male channel, the male protagonist would be like an animal and couldn't be brought in.

To be honest, I can't tell what you want to write

Look at my ID and see if I can chat with you.

If this update is true, I won't be able to fix it.

When I saw the introduction, I had a bad association with black tools, black props, black props picked up by women, and black props picked up by women to become their husbands.

Change the title of the book to "The Female Military General and Her Useless Men" and it will become popular! 😜