Journey to the West: Teaching Tang Sanzang the Mighty Heavenly Dragon from the Start
西游：开局传授唐僧大威天龙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 148k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Of course, I won't stop you from writing about Jin Chanzi, but there is a problem with your timeline. If Jin Chanzi was reincarnated into Chen Zhuangyuan's family, it would be his last life 500 years later. If you want to write about the last time, then you can't write about Ao Lie, the Holy Infant King. Characters, first of all, Ao Lie, he just cut off the three flowers on the top on the Dragon Slaying Platform, he did not die, he was demoted to Ying Ku Splash, the Holy Infant King, he was born when Sun Wukong first turned over the Bagua furnace, the three-flavored true fire is not an innate magical power, it is acquired.
I haven't read it, but the introduction is interesting. The number of words is too few, young people need to write more! A house loan, a car loan, a wife, a child, a daughter, and retirement money.
Refresh the Novice Village dungeon with Tang Monk at full level
The only highlight of the book is the setting of Journey to the West Academy, but other... The most basic timeline has been changed beyond recognition. Not to mention that a mortal butcher with many years of experience in slaughtering cattle can actually create a master of gods and demons, let me ask you, the cows in the world of Journey to the West actually reach adulthood at the age of 3? Red Boy is tall and strong at the age of one and has a body full of gada meat? The Bull Demon King actually celebrated his 8,000th birthday? Isn't this insulting? Wait, wait, wait, etc., If you throw away the background of Journey to the West, it may be much better than now. However, have you watched "Journey to the West"? No matter what version?
It does not conform to the normal journey to the west and is illogical. The protagonist did not specifically search for it, and then all the important characters in the journey to the west turned into ghosts, so you accepted it in advance? Coincidence or not, you say?
It does work, it feels a little bit strong, but the impact is not big.
The Golden Finger is not very powerful. Jin Chanzi is given random exercises at the beginning, and the subsequent disciples have no skills at the beginning. The protagonist has no special skills, so he just teaches the disciples some cultural knowledge and gives ideas. I feel that this Golden Finger is a bit low.
Did the red boy come after Tang Monk was born? Wrong time
It's well written, nothing sinister. Come on!
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